Comments received on poems by AlexHoy



You’re Beautiful
dusk arising said:

Most of us want to be something a bit different to the thing we actually are. So thats not unusual, but so did the ladies i fell in love with! I found them near enough perfect but they wanted to change themselves. I guess its one of life\'s hang-ups.
Whats that proverb \'the other mans grass is always greener\'

June 8th, 2018 18:14

You’re Beautiful
GON said:

The truth is that we aren\'t perfect, not even in our own ways. For some of us, we find beauty in the small glimpses we get of our potential to be something greater than we currently are. You don\'t have to be so hard on yourself, but you shouldn\'t be complacent either.

June 8th, 2018 15:34

Easygoing Free Flowing
nmurner said:

I like this :). The consistent rhyme made my fly through it when I read it out loud; the message hit me once I was done like when you\'re done with a long run and think back on it.

May 19th, 2018 13:15

Easygoing Free Flowing
SLR said:

I\'ll admit I did wonder if you could make the rhyme work all the way through. Great job. Meaningful lines with a fun twist. Great message.

May 18th, 2018 23:30

Touch Those Hearts
CathBee said:

Damn
This is really good

May 18th, 2018 09:49

Easygoing Free Flowing
CathBee said:

I love the rhyme, this is really good

May 18th, 2018 06:21

Touch Those Hearts
ella said:

wow

May 16th, 2018 19:55

Feel Alive
sharda92 said:

I loved this!!

April 21st, 2018 14:40

Simplicity
yellowrose said:

the ending line caught my eye ! i feel that is true, in a way .. you speak some true words here . \'\' you shorten your leap to the spiritual \'\' i love the words

February 9th, 2018 15:49

To Find Yourself
Tony36 said:

Well written and expressed

January 20th, 2018 15:29

To Find Yourself
yellowrose said:

very nice :-) we should never be scared to who we are , tho unfortunately and sometimes we are scared to be ourselves, you speak some truth here

January 20th, 2018 13:47

Serendipity
Lorna said:

Lovely picture, lovely poem. Can always count on nature to make us feel the good (barring the likes of Hurricane Sandy of course).

January 19th, 2018 11:40

Serendipity
orchidee said:

Good write Alex.

January 19th, 2018 10:54

UnderstandingEqualzLove
Aislinn Wilson said:

This is beautiful! I can\'t wait to see more from you!

January 18th, 2018 11:36

UnderstandingEqualzLove
orchidee said:

Good write viva.

January 18th, 2018 02:37