Comments received on poems by Dori



Kaleidoscope
L. B. Mek said:

wonderful flow, unique metaphors
a good read, thanks for sharing
(liked how you subtly inferred
the context
while you unfurled the layers
of these lines)
\'I’m back
to shifting colored shapes
Where memories once stood
If I pick up
these abandoned shards
Will I cut myself on glass?\'..


August 19th, 2021 02:11

Kaleidoscope
Heart of Babel said:

I’m not sure anyone can enjoy identity distortion as a product of childhood trauma, but the poem was exceptionally written with great depth and meaning.

August 18th, 2021 23:54

Fossils
yellowrose said:

Great rhyming and flow ! 🙂 good poem , enjoyed reading

March 2nd, 2021 16:57

Fossils
L. B. Mek said:

\'Your first boyfriend\'s number still haunts your phone
Not because you loved him but because he was home

And if true love knocked would you even answer?
Sometimes staring at the floor seems so much better\'..
wow! well this is a rare and special delicacy you\'ve chosen to share,
words of vulnerable relatability: wrapped within majesty of poetry\'s unmistakable eloquence and rhythmic elegance...!
that\'s some talent you\'re flexing dear poet,
and I\'ll boldly guess you aren\'t even in 3rd gear yet,
thank you!

March 2nd, 2021 05:25

Fossils
Goldfinch60 said:

Those memories do stay with us Dori but the present leads us into our future.

Andy

March 2nd, 2021 01:40

Fossils
FredPeyer said:

Well written, I like it Dori. You are right, the presence is always fleeting since it exists only for a quick moment. So I guess remember is what we do best.

March 1st, 2021 23:21

Honey
Neville said:



.......................Sweet :)

September 13th, 2020 01:01

an encounter
Neville said:

filled to overflowing with sinister yet seductive imagery.... well poemed my friend.....and thoroughly enjoyed.

Neville

July 10th, 2019 01:54

adrift
daydreaming said:

This verses describe a sad yet beautiful soul. Is that you? Beautiful poem! Just beautiful.

May 11th, 2019 14:24

adrift
Yorelzinala said:

brilliant!

February 2nd, 2019 07:29

adrift
Neville said:

a nice little poem with a slightly sad taint.... certainly enjoyed.... Neville

February 2nd, 2019 03:25

lo que dicen
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

HOLA AMIGA ~ Gracias por tu prima poesia en espanol ! Muy elegante pero tambien muy triste !
Love should be Light ~ Without end ~ Daisies ~ True ~ Happy & Forver ~ BUT ~ Unfortunately it so often turns out to be ~ A Gun ~ Words unspoken ~ Makes living dying and leaves even the Angela CRYING ! I have tasted the AGONY & ECSTACY of Love but Love with My Fiancee ANGELA is all Sweetness & Light ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ Bleassing for the future ~
Abrazos ~ BRIAN y ANGELA 🧡
Please check our site ~ Gracias A & B !

December 25th, 2018 07:54

shutters
yellowrose said:

really lovely poem .. nice words

November 25th, 2018 03:37

shutters
Crazybabe72 said:

I really liked this.

November 24th, 2018 22:02

shutters
Fiscanto said:

A very beautiful poem. The beauty of a dream. Enjoyed!

November 24th, 2018 18:38

shutters
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Beautifully soft imagery in the words you\'ve colored with the artist\'s pallet.

Thanks for sharing. :-)

November 24th, 2018 17:00

leaving myself
Debsspot said:

Very powerful words. Wishing you happiness.

November 23rd, 2018 19:57

lovers
GON said:

I wish I could read this.

June 11th, 2018 18:45