Comments received on poems by EmiliasLillith
Thin Veils
SLR said:
Well written. You can feel the helpless frustration. Too exhausted to fight anymore.
May 16th, 2018 21:18
SLR said:
Well written. You can feel the helpless frustration. Too exhausted to fight anymore.
May 16th, 2018 21:18
Thin Veils
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but under that fake facade is the real you and all you need to do is break the concrete.
May 16th, 2018 00:55
Goldfinch60 said:
Very emotive write but under that fake facade is the real you and all you need to do is break the concrete.
May 16th, 2018 00:55
My Essence
SLR said:
Regrets will do you in. They will take up your time, energy and emotions and give nothing back but frustration because you can\'t go back and change it. We all have regrets but the key to happiness is learning to let go and live on. Great post!
May 15th, 2018 22:28
SLR said:
Regrets will do you in. They will take up your time, energy and emotions and give nothing back but frustration because you can\'t go back and change it. We all have regrets but the key to happiness is learning to let go and live on. Great post!
May 15th, 2018 22:28
My Essence
dusk arising said:
Here you describe that wonderful but horrible limbo we can be in after a relationship. So awful to live through so most take the easy way out (recommended) and stop wondering those thoughts, it does get easier.
Great writing.
May 15th, 2018 08:56
dusk arising said:
Here you describe that wonderful but horrible limbo we can be in after a relationship. So awful to live through so most take the easy way out (recommended) and stop wondering those thoughts, it does get easier.
Great writing.
May 15th, 2018 08:56
My Time With you
Lorna said:
A lovely little message with a touch of sadness.....
March 7th, 2018 06:56
Lorna said:
A lovely little message with a touch of sadness.....
March 7th, 2018 06:56
The Raven Calls
dusk arising said:
OOOOH i\'m drawn into the mystery of this. I love it. It leaves me wanting more, creating possibilities, wondering - HOPING- there wil be more.
Quite exceptional.
January 28th, 2018 13:00
dusk arising said:
OOOOH i\'m drawn into the mystery of this. I love it. It leaves me wanting more, creating possibilities, wondering - HOPING- there wil be more.
Quite exceptional.
January 28th, 2018 13:00
Soft Wind
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"The WIND bows wherever it pleases ~ You hear it\'s sound but you cannot tell ~ where it comes from or where it is going ......... !\" The words of JESUS recorded in JOHN 3 v 8.
Welcome EMILIAS ~ Thanks for your first POEM. Beautifully scripted ~ Rhyming couplets (my favourite) ~ and replete with rhythm. I am an Environmental Scientist and the Atmosphere with its WINDS and Mineral Cycles (oxygen ~ nitrogen ~ carbon ~ water etc) is one of my interests. You have captured the Beauty & Mystery of the WIND perfectly ~ Awesome ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN
January 25th, 2018 10:20
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
\"The WIND bows wherever it pleases ~ You hear it\'s sound but you cannot tell ~ where it comes from or where it is going ......... !\" The words of JESUS recorded in JOHN 3 v 8.
Welcome EMILIAS ~ Thanks for your first POEM. Beautifully scripted ~ Rhyming couplets (my favourite) ~ and replete with rhythm. I am an Environmental Scientist and the Atmosphere with its WINDS and Mineral Cycles (oxygen ~ nitrogen ~ carbon ~ water etc) is one of my interests. You have captured the Beauty & Mystery of the WIND perfectly ~ Awesome ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN
January 25th, 2018 10:20
Soft Wind
TrystanBehm said:
Great imagery! Love the subtleness of the emotion.
January 25th, 2018 10:16
TrystanBehm said:
Great imagery! Love the subtleness of the emotion.
January 25th, 2018 10:16
