Comments received on poems by Diane260965



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Goldfinch60 said:

Very good emotive write Diane, yes you WILL meet again.
Welcome to MPS.

February 22nd, 2018 01:28

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME DIANE ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ Very elegantly penned ~ but a very poignant subject. I have seen people die and their last breath is is like a great sigh of release and relief ~ as you describe it ! Love the final doublet because you express a hope of Eternal Life ! Blessed are those ~ who die knowing the LORD ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

February 21st, 2018 19:06

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Christina8 said:

Welcome to MPS! A very emotion filled and well written poem! Thanks for sharing.

February 21st, 2018 13:51

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darknessrises said:

nice first poem


February 21st, 2018 12:55