Comments received on poems by Diane260965
Last breathe
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write Diane, yes you WILL meet again.
Welcome to MPS.
February 22nd, 2018 01:28
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good emotive write Diane, yes you WILL meet again.
Welcome to MPS.
February 22nd, 2018 01:28
Last breathe
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DIANE ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ Very elegantly penned ~ but a very poignant subject. I have seen people die and their last breath is is like a great sigh of release and relief ~ as you describe it ! Love the final doublet because you express a hope of Eternal Life ! Blessed are those ~ who die knowing the LORD ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 21st, 2018 19:06
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME DIANE ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ Very elegantly penned ~ but a very poignant subject. I have seen people die and their last breath is is like a great sigh of release and relief ~ as you describe it ! Love the final doublet because you express a hope of Eternal Life ! Blessed are those ~ who die knowing the LORD ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
February 21st, 2018 19:06
Last breathe
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! A very emotion filled and well written poem! Thanks for sharing.
February 21st, 2018 13:51
Christina8 said:
Welcome to MPS! A very emotion filled and well written poem! Thanks for sharing.
February 21st, 2018 13:51