Comments received on poems by OliRose
Craters of the Moon
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed they do. A heart of stone, eh? That I can relate to.
I enjoyed, thanks much.
April 17th, 2018 05:29
Nicholas Browning said:
Indeed they do. A heart of stone, eh? That I can relate to.
I enjoyed, thanks much.
April 17th, 2018 05:29
“Breathe In... Breathe Out”
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love the motivation at the end of this poem ... \'\' you can do this . Get up ! \'\'
A great poem , we all have to motivate ourselves sometimes and fight for what we want
March 21st, 2018 05:01
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
i love the motivation at the end of this poem ... \'\' you can do this . Get up ! \'\'
A great poem , we all have to motivate ourselves sometimes and fight for what we want
March 21st, 2018 05:01
Feeling Lonely
Lorna said:
You make a good point that when we are so low it sometimes makes us seem selfish..... that\'s a hard one to climb out of.... but even little acts of kindness are helpful to others......and then we can feel better about ourselves.....
March 15th, 2018 06:18
Lorna said:
You make a good point that when we are so low it sometimes makes us seem selfish..... that\'s a hard one to climb out of.... but even little acts of kindness are helpful to others......and then we can feel better about ourselves.....
March 15th, 2018 06:18
Dear Lovely
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello olirose... lovely first poem! i loved this , especially your mention of the two way mirror and the meaningful moon in his tatoo, they are my favourite parts of the poem ..
an enjoyable read
March 4th, 2018 03:05
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
hello olirose... lovely first poem! i loved this , especially your mention of the two way mirror and the meaningful moon in his tatoo, they are my favourite parts of the poem ..
an enjoyable read
March 4th, 2018 03:05
