Comments received on poems by David.A-J



Thoughts on the fullness of love or Where\'s my bloody valentine?
Neville said:

this was a smashing read from beginning to end.. loadsa fun along the way too....cheers.. Neville

January 1st, 2019 10:32

LOST AFFECTIONS
onepauly said:

very inspiring!
you are a poet.
keep writing with an open mind.

April 27th, 2018 10:43

The tale of Miss Adeline Carr or Opportunity lost
David.A-J said:

Thank you for your kind remark.

April 14th, 2018 02:01

The tale of Miss Adeline Carr or Opportunity lost
Daveyboyz said:

A well told tale.

April 13th, 2018 09:59

On Growing Older
Lorna said:

This was so funny.... I love your sense of humor. Not far off either.... I visit my friend in the nursing home and there are quite a few there that would fit this bill!

April 8th, 2018 11:28

One Night Out
Lorna said:

Wow - very intense and really done.... took me right there....

March 12th, 2018 06:31

Winter
Lorna said:

You made Winter very much a person.... great imagery.....

March 4th, 2018 05:50

Winter
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:

hi david.. lovely first entry ! thanks for sharing . i very much enjoyed reading this one. i love how you have given Winter a sense of being like a cold , miserable and icy , negative guy , who then ages , leaves and so spring arrives. a very well written piece of writing

March 4th, 2018 04:57