Comments received on poems by RiverJordan



Post-Delirium
FineB said:

Hello RiverJordan,

A great poem.

Being delirious plays so many wonderful images on our minds.

Keep writing FineB

October 12th, 2019 17:30

Post-Delirium
italianwoman said:

This is so complex that i had to read it twice! The style is incredible. Well done!

October 12th, 2019 13:56

Wealth of Self
FineB said:

Hello RiverJordan,

Mystical and enchanting!

A good write.

Keep writing
FineB

February 14th, 2019 05:41

Wealth of Self
orchidee said:

A good write River. I see what you mean. Yet on a spiritual plane, I wouldn\'t like to trust to myself completely.

January 19th, 2019 03:13

Wealth of Self
orchidee said:

A good write River. I see what you mean. Yet on a spiritual plane, I wouldn\'t like to trust to myself completely.

January 19th, 2019 03:13

Cardiac Sutras
orchidee said:

I never knew there was so much as this concerning the heart! Well, maybe I did. heehee.

November 10th, 2018 11:00

spectacle of the knowing
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Yes great and right on, we should fear ignorance most. Why this is such an intellectual philosophical brilliant poem indeed. What I always like , poetic yet starry. Kudos.


So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.

September 6th, 2018 06:17

spectacle of the knowing
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

Yes great and right on, we should fear ignorance most. Why this is such an intellectual philosophical brilliant poem indeed. What I always like , poetic yet starry. Kudos.


So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.

September 6th, 2018 06:16

spectacle of the knowing
swyndell said:

Beautiful, well written, it\'s depth is overwhelming but constant and inspiring. Great job.

August 27th, 2018 11:14

spectacle of the knowing
orchidee said:

Erm, yes, when will I know it - the clip? I will be inadequate until I know it! lol.

August 26th, 2018 01:54

spectacle of the knowing
orchidee said:

Ahh the clip won\'t play?! So I\'m fearing not knowing it. heehee.

August 25th, 2018 09:11

spectacle of the knowing
sylviasearcher said:

Such depths expressed so poetically.

It spoke to my soul battle.

Thanks

August 25th, 2018 09:04

yoU are iN the multI-VERSE
FineB said:

Thank you River Jordan.

An awesome poem, an excellent write!

The universe is more amazing than we give it credit for!

Keep writing
FineB

August 10th, 2018 03:43

yoU are iN the multI-VERSE
orchidee said:

Never knew there was so much in the universe! heehee.

August 4th, 2018 08:39

Shards of light
FineB said:

Thank you River Jordan!

How beautifully atmospheric and a captivating write!

Keep writing
FineB

July 4th, 2018 08:08

Shards of light
orchidee said:

A fine write River. Eat up that peach before it goes rotten!

June 16th, 2018 10:44

Pixelated Cerebral Projector
Lorna said:

Not sure I entirely understand this but like it nonetheless...... especially the title! That really got me.........

June 9th, 2018 10:05

Pixelated Cerebral Projector
orchidee said:

Erm, yes, he sounds \'plastered\'. What\'s eh up to with all this stuff?! And why is he mucking about with rotten trees? heehee.

June 9th, 2018 09:37

disembodied conduction
orchidee said:

Erm, this is a bit cloudy to me. Ooh what\'s going on there? I\'ve not unravelled all those long words. it\'s all good, I hope! Something\'s going on there anyway. heehee.

May 20th, 2018 01:22

embedded gems
Laura🌻 said:

River Jordan,

An Absolutely Fabulous write! Enjoyable to read and most of all intriguing!

~Laura~

May 17th, 2018 14:39

embedded gems
FineB said:

Awesome poem.

Very vivid and imaginative - thanks River Jordan.

Keep writing
FineB

May 17th, 2018 06:42

cupid\'s armory
FineB said:

Love is beautiful.

Thank you RiverJordan for sharing your poem

Wonderful.

Keep writing
FineB

May 3rd, 2018 13:57

visions of the unknown
onepauly said:

that\'s true.

April 23rd, 2018 13:41

visions of the unknown
orchidee said:

Oohh I never knew there was so much in the \'unknown\'. Erm, how do you know, if it\'s all unknown?! heehee.

April 23rd, 2018 02:06

cloud tears
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:

\"We seek hearty heaven \" , ah yay. Great sublime poem in brevity wow. Thumbs up.


Pleez do read my newest poem too and if u wish to add some points, thoughts to it u r welcome to. Or u could read my others.

April 17th, 2018 12:14

cloud tears
Nicholas Browning said:

True that. What the heck is a \"Human\" anyways? I like it.

April 17th, 2018 05:33

cloud tears
orchidee said:

A fine write River. I would say that with a spiritual dimension in our lives (in my case Christianity) we are the solution.

April 17th, 2018 01:53

progressing life /disintegrating processes
orchidee said:

I never knew there was so much in life! heehee.

April 14th, 2018 10:58

shapeless fabric
orchidee said:

Well, stop living outdoors then, and then you won\'t be intense (in-tents!) Doh, corny joke I know. heehee.

April 11th, 2018 01:48

Binary Decoded 111
Karoline said:

I love this.

April 3rd, 2018 14:56

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