Comments received on poems by RiverJordan
Post-Delirium
FineB said:
Hello RiverJordan,
A great poem.
Being delirious plays so many wonderful images on our minds.
Keep writing FineB
October 12th, 2019 17:30
FineB said:
Hello RiverJordan,
A great poem.
Being delirious plays so many wonderful images on our minds.
Keep writing FineB
October 12th, 2019 17:30
Post-Delirium
italianwoman said:
This is so complex that i had to read it twice! The style is incredible. Well done!
October 12th, 2019 13:56
italianwoman said:
This is so complex that i had to read it twice! The style is incredible. Well done!
October 12th, 2019 13:56
Wealth of Self
FineB said:
Hello RiverJordan,
Mystical and enchanting!
A good write.
Keep writing
FineB
February 14th, 2019 05:41
FineB said:
Hello RiverJordan,
Mystical and enchanting!
A good write.
Keep writing
FineB
February 14th, 2019 05:41
Wealth of Self
orchidee said:
A good write River. I see what you mean. Yet on a spiritual plane, I wouldn\'t like to trust to myself completely.
January 19th, 2019 03:13
orchidee said:
A good write River. I see what you mean. Yet on a spiritual plane, I wouldn\'t like to trust to myself completely.
January 19th, 2019 03:13
Wealth of Self
orchidee said:
A good write River. I see what you mean. Yet on a spiritual plane, I wouldn\'t like to trust to myself completely.
January 19th, 2019 03:13
orchidee said:
A good write River. I see what you mean. Yet on a spiritual plane, I wouldn\'t like to trust to myself completely.
January 19th, 2019 03:13
Cardiac Sutras
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much as this concerning the heart! Well, maybe I did. heehee.
November 10th, 2018 11:00
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much as this concerning the heart! Well, maybe I did. heehee.
November 10th, 2018 11:00
spectacle of the knowing
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes great and right on, we should fear ignorance most. Why this is such an intellectual philosophical brilliant poem indeed. What I always like , poetic yet starry. Kudos.
So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 06:17
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes great and right on, we should fear ignorance most. Why this is such an intellectual philosophical brilliant poem indeed. What I always like , poetic yet starry. Kudos.
So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 06:17
spectacle of the knowing
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes great and right on, we should fear ignorance most. Why this is such an intellectual philosophical brilliant poem indeed. What I always like , poetic yet starry. Kudos.
So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 06:16
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Yes great and right on, we should fear ignorance most. Why this is such an intellectual philosophical brilliant poem indeed. What I always like , poetic yet starry. Kudos.
So nice to read from your ink again, Pleez do review/comment my newest poem too.
September 6th, 2018 06:16
spectacle of the knowing
swyndell said:
Beautiful, well written, it\'s depth is overwhelming but constant and inspiring. Great job.
August 27th, 2018 11:14
swyndell said:
Beautiful, well written, it\'s depth is overwhelming but constant and inspiring. Great job.
August 27th, 2018 11:14
spectacle of the knowing
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, when will I know it - the clip? I will be inadequate until I know it! lol.
August 26th, 2018 01:54
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, when will I know it - the clip? I will be inadequate until I know it! lol.
August 26th, 2018 01:54
spectacle of the knowing
orchidee said:
Ahh the clip won\'t play?! So I\'m fearing not knowing it. heehee.
August 25th, 2018 09:11
orchidee said:
Ahh the clip won\'t play?! So I\'m fearing not knowing it. heehee.
August 25th, 2018 09:11
spectacle of the knowing
sylviasearcher said:
Such depths expressed so poetically.
It spoke to my soul battle.
Thanks
August 25th, 2018 09:04
sylviasearcher said:
Such depths expressed so poetically.
It spoke to my soul battle.
Thanks
August 25th, 2018 09:04
yoU are iN the multI-VERSE
FineB said:
Thank you River Jordan.
An awesome poem, an excellent write!
The universe is more amazing than we give it credit for!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2018 03:43
FineB said:
Thank you River Jordan.
An awesome poem, an excellent write!
The universe is more amazing than we give it credit for!
Keep writing
FineB
August 10th, 2018 03:43
yoU are iN the multI-VERSE
orchidee said:
Never knew there was so much in the universe! heehee.
August 4th, 2018 08:39
orchidee said:
Never knew there was so much in the universe! heehee.
August 4th, 2018 08:39
Shards of light
FineB said:
Thank you River Jordan!
How beautifully atmospheric and a captivating write!
Keep writing
FineB
July 4th, 2018 08:08
FineB said:
Thank you River Jordan!
How beautifully atmospheric and a captivating write!
Keep writing
FineB
July 4th, 2018 08:08
Shards of light
orchidee said:
A fine write River. Eat up that peach before it goes rotten!
June 16th, 2018 10:44
orchidee said:
A fine write River. Eat up that peach before it goes rotten!
June 16th, 2018 10:44
Pixelated Cerebral Projector
Lorna said:
Not sure I entirely understand this but like it nonetheless...... especially the title! That really got me.........
June 9th, 2018 10:05
Lorna said:
Not sure I entirely understand this but like it nonetheless...... especially the title! That really got me.........
June 9th, 2018 10:05
Pixelated Cerebral Projector
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, he sounds \'plastered\'. What\'s eh up to with all this stuff?! And why is he mucking about with rotten trees? heehee.
June 9th, 2018 09:37
orchidee said:
Erm, yes, he sounds \'plastered\'. What\'s eh up to with all this stuff?! And why is he mucking about with rotten trees? heehee.
June 9th, 2018 09:37
disembodied conduction
orchidee said:
Erm, this is a bit cloudy to me. Ooh what\'s going on there? I\'ve not unravelled all those long words. it\'s all good, I hope! Something\'s going on there anyway. heehee.
May 20th, 2018 01:22
orchidee said:
Erm, this is a bit cloudy to me. Ooh what\'s going on there? I\'ve not unravelled all those long words. it\'s all good, I hope! Something\'s going on there anyway. heehee.
May 20th, 2018 01:22
embedded gems
Laura🌻 said:
River Jordan,
An Absolutely Fabulous write! Enjoyable to read and most of all intriguing!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 14:39
Laura🌻 said:
River Jordan,
An Absolutely Fabulous write! Enjoyable to read and most of all intriguing!
~Laura~
May 17th, 2018 14:39
embedded gems
FineB said:
Awesome poem.
Very vivid and imaginative - thanks River Jordan.
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2018 06:42
FineB said:
Awesome poem.
Very vivid and imaginative - thanks River Jordan.
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2018 06:42
cupid\'s armory
FineB said:
Love is beautiful.
Thank you RiverJordan for sharing your poem
Wonderful.
Keep writing
FineB
May 3rd, 2018 13:57
FineB said:
Love is beautiful.
Thank you RiverJordan for sharing your poem
Wonderful.
Keep writing
FineB
May 3rd, 2018 13:57
visions of the unknown
orchidee said:
Oohh I never knew there was so much in the \'unknown\'. Erm, how do you know, if it\'s all unknown?! heehee.
April 23rd, 2018 02:06
orchidee said:
Oohh I never knew there was so much in the \'unknown\'. Erm, how do you know, if it\'s all unknown?! heehee.
April 23rd, 2018 02:06
cloud tears
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
\"We seek hearty heaven \" , ah yay. Great sublime poem in brevity wow. Thumbs up.
Pleez do read my newest poem too and if u wish to add some points, thoughts to it u r welcome to. Or u could read my others.
April 17th, 2018 12:14
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
\"We seek hearty heaven \" , ah yay. Great sublime poem in brevity wow. Thumbs up.
Pleez do read my newest poem too and if u wish to add some points, thoughts to it u r welcome to. Or u could read my others.
April 17th, 2018 12:14
cloud tears
Nicholas Browning said:
True that. What the heck is a \"Human\" anyways? I like it.
April 17th, 2018 05:33
Nicholas Browning said:
True that. What the heck is a \"Human\" anyways? I like it.
April 17th, 2018 05:33
cloud tears
orchidee said:
A fine write River. I would say that with a spiritual dimension in our lives (in my case Christianity) we are the solution.
April 17th, 2018 01:53
orchidee said:
A fine write River. I would say that with a spiritual dimension in our lives (in my case Christianity) we are the solution.
April 17th, 2018 01:53
progressing life /disintegrating processes
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in life! heehee.
April 14th, 2018 10:58
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in life! heehee.
April 14th, 2018 10:58
shapeless fabric
orchidee said:
Well, stop living outdoors then, and then you won\'t be intense (in-tents!) Doh, corny joke I know. heehee.
April 11th, 2018 01:48
orchidee said:
Well, stop living outdoors then, and then you won\'t be intense (in-tents!) Doh, corny joke I know. heehee.
April 11th, 2018 01:48
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