Comments received on poems by RiverJordan
fallen bottles
orchidee said:
A fine write River. Now a song from me: Ten green bottles hanging on the wall......! heehee.
But you is upside down, so the bottles would need to be glued on the wall to stop them falling.
November 22nd, 2019 06:45
orchidee said:
A fine write River. Now a song from me: Ten green bottles hanging on the wall......! heehee.
But you is upside down, so the bottles would need to be glued on the wall to stop them falling.
November 22nd, 2019 06:45
just a thought
orchidee said:
You been watching EastEnders then? A ghastly soap serial in the UK: the half dead! Substitute the name of some equally ghastly soap in the USA.
November 18th, 2019 02:53
orchidee said:
You been watching EastEnders then? A ghastly soap serial in the UK: the half dead! Substitute the name of some equally ghastly soap in the USA.
November 18th, 2019 02:53
In hindsight
orchidee said:
Well, I held my breath for 24 hours one day. I didn\'t feel well afterwards. Dunno why?! Strange that. I was only trying to save air for a day. lol.
November 17th, 2019 08:46
orchidee said:
Well, I held my breath for 24 hours one day. I didn\'t feel well afterwards. Dunno why?! Strange that. I was only trying to save air for a day. lol.
November 17th, 2019 08:46
In hindsight
orchidee said:
Erm, is it difficult to live life standing on your head? You appear to be doing so in your pic! lol.
November 17th, 2019 02:41
orchidee said:
Erm, is it difficult to live life standing on your head? You appear to be doing so in your pic! lol.
November 17th, 2019 02:41
For the sake of virtue
FineB said:
Hello RiverJordan,
Excellent write!
Keep writing FineB
November 3rd, 2019 14:16
FineB said:
Hello RiverJordan,
Excellent write!
Keep writing FineB
November 3rd, 2019 14:16
For the sake of virtue
RiverJordan said:
I\'m actually standing on my feet, maybe you\'re standing on your head
November 3rd, 2019 02:44
RiverJordan said:
I\'m actually standing on my feet, maybe you\'re standing on your head
November 3rd, 2019 02:44
For the sake of virtue
orchidee said:
I gotta read your stuff standing on me head now, since your pic appeared. Doh! lol
November 3rd, 2019 02:34
orchidee said:
I gotta read your stuff standing on me head now, since your pic appeared. Doh! lol
November 3rd, 2019 02:34
Still, I Climb
FineB said:
Hello RiverJordan.
A very inspirational write. Wonderful!
We should always strive to be the best we can be and never give up!
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:34
FineB said:
Hello RiverJordan.
A very inspirational write. Wonderful!
We should always strive to be the best we can be and never give up!
Keep writing FineB
November 2nd, 2019 12:34
Everyday
FineB said:
Hi River Jordan,
A great write very thought provoking.
Life is a rat race in itself in this self obsessed, social media dominated society.
Keeo writing FineB
October 30th, 2019 16:54
FineB said:
Hi River Jordan,
A great write very thought provoking.
Life is a rat race in itself in this self obsessed, social media dominated society.
Keeo writing FineB
October 30th, 2019 16:54
P.O.R.N
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - Fido my watchdog, wouldn\'t know this. He would swoon at it! heehee.
October 29th, 2019 02:38
orchidee said:
Meanwhile - Fido my watchdog, wouldn\'t know this. He would swoon at it! heehee.
October 29th, 2019 02:38
P.O.R.N
orchidee said:
A natural human function, but as with anything else, we don\'t have to go mad with it, don\'t have to take it to extremes. Porn can become the same, after initial fascination, and lead to all sorts of nasties I think.
October 29th, 2019 02:37
orchidee said:
A natural human function, but as with anything else, we don\'t have to go mad with it, don\'t have to take it to extremes. Porn can become the same, after initial fascination, and lead to all sorts of nasties I think.
October 29th, 2019 02:37
P.O.R.N
RiverJordan said:
POINT BLANK; watching porn doesn\'t make you a \" bad \" person, but i feel it does have it\'s own side effects! As does everything else!!! to each is own, just spreading my own observations
October 28th, 2019 23:37
RiverJordan said:
POINT BLANK; watching porn doesn\'t make you a \" bad \" person, but i feel it does have it\'s own side effects! As does everything else!!! to each is own, just spreading my own observations
October 28th, 2019 23:37
P.O.R.N
RiverJordan said:
Crisco referring to Christ; I still believe in everybody harboring potential highest good. The air we breathe resonates with that of which vibration we emit
October 28th, 2019 23:32
RiverJordan said:
Crisco referring to Christ; I still believe in everybody harboring potential highest good. The air we breathe resonates with that of which vibration we emit
October 28th, 2019 23:32
P.O.R.N
RiverJordan said:
Only through trialed repetition, shall solution win
October 28th, 2019 23:19
RiverJordan said:
Only through trialed repetition, shall solution win
October 28th, 2019 23:19
P.O.R.N
RiverJordan said:
This is a total self-investment, just spreading the message, porn BEEN taken over, it\'s purely addiction
October 28th, 2019 23:13
RiverJordan said:
This is a total self-investment, just spreading the message, porn BEEN taken over, it\'s purely addiction
October 28th, 2019 23:13
All Seeing
sylviasearcher said:
But there are a few daisies, and sometimes we can pull them out of the soil and make little trinkets out of their death and feel like we love life.
October 27th, 2019 02:55
sylviasearcher said:
But there are a few daisies, and sometimes we can pull them out of the soil and make little trinkets out of their death and feel like we love life.
October 27th, 2019 02:55
Wasn\'t supposed to be a mushy poem
sylviasearcher said:
You had me at FLUSH
Lol
October 26th, 2019 13:49
sylviasearcher said:
You had me at FLUSH
Lol
October 26th, 2019 13:49
Wasn\'t supposed to be a mushy poem
RiverJordan said:
Haha flushing away is by all means therapeutic
October 25th, 2019 05:28
RiverJordan said:
Haha flushing away is by all means therapeutic
October 25th, 2019 05:28
Internal Abidings
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
wow a great sublime poem in deep metaphor, brill way you expressed the condition here. Many can relate. Kudos to your inking prowess.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 12:09
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
wow a great sublime poem in deep metaphor, brill way you expressed the condition here. Many can relate. Kudos to your inking prowess.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
October 22nd, 2019 12:09
Freedom of expression
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much n expression - well, I know now, reading this! heehee.
October 19th, 2019 11:31
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much n expression - well, I know now, reading this! heehee.
October 19th, 2019 11:31
Victim to none
Thoughts In Time said:
Love overcomes all ..temptation tests our faith honesty and truth..🌹
October 16th, 2019 10:31
Thoughts In Time said:
Love overcomes all ..temptation tests our faith honesty and truth..🌹
October 16th, 2019 10:31
Tricknology
orchidee said:
You must have written this standing on your head, as in the pic! lol.
October 16th, 2019 01:25
orchidee said:
You must have written this standing on your head, as in the pic! lol.
October 16th, 2019 01:25
Post-Delirium
dusk arising said:
Hmmm this is the 2nd piece of yours i have read and its much clearer than the first i\'m pleased to add.
I think you describe the poets mind puzzle very well here. Very well indeed.
It\'s going into my favourites.
October 13th, 2019 14:47
dusk arising said:
Hmmm this is the 2nd piece of yours i have read and its much clearer than the first i\'m pleased to add.
I think you describe the poets mind puzzle very well here. Very well indeed.
It\'s going into my favourites.
October 13th, 2019 14:47
Post-Delirium
dusk arising said:
Hmmm this is the 2nd piece of yours i have read and its much clearer than the first i\'m pleased to add.
I think you describe the poets mind puzzle very well here. Very well indeed.
It\'s going into my favourites.
October 13th, 2019 14:29
dusk arising said:
Hmmm this is the 2nd piece of yours i have read and its much clearer than the first i\'m pleased to add.
I think you describe the poets mind puzzle very well here. Very well indeed.
It\'s going into my favourites.
October 13th, 2019 14:29
The \" LIGHT \" at the end of the dark tunnel
dusk arising said:
Your philosophy as outlined here in \'comment from author\' is commendable and i am in agreement.
You piece is difficult to follow (personal viewpoint) for me and i think you do yourself a diservice because you have a lot to say and your metaphors are great. Soi\'m being an interfering old git trying to be positive in critique. Not meaning to offend or disrespect.
You\'d do yourself a great favour in saying less in each piece you write. Every good point you make in a piece, waters down the other good points you raise at the same time. Making one or two only emphasises their value and makes your piece much stronger and punchy (and easier to comprehend). I really hope you read this in the positive way it\'s intended.
October 13th, 2019 14:10
dusk arising said:
Your philosophy as outlined here in \'comment from author\' is commendable and i am in agreement.
You piece is difficult to follow (personal viewpoint) for me and i think you do yourself a diservice because you have a lot to say and your metaphors are great. Soi\'m being an interfering old git trying to be positive in critique. Not meaning to offend or disrespect.
You\'d do yourself a great favour in saying less in each piece you write. Every good point you make in a piece, waters down the other good points you raise at the same time. Making one or two only emphasises their value and makes your piece much stronger and punchy (and easier to comprehend). I really hope you read this in the positive way it\'s intended.
October 13th, 2019 14:10
The \" LIGHT \" at the end of the dark tunnel
Thoughts In Time said:
Amazing and the words you use..deep minded you are and so true..really lots of light trying to come through..🌹
October 13th, 2019 03:48
Thoughts In Time said:
Amazing and the words you use..deep minded you are and so true..really lots of light trying to come through..🌹
October 13th, 2019 03:48
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