Comments received on poems by RiverJordan
Dispirited hope
L. B. Mek said:
really like the poetic ambition in this write, some insightful commentary on those inner monologue thoughts we all can relate to, during our moments of uncertainty,
thought provoking
September 29th, 2020 02:04
L. B. Mek said:
really like the poetic ambition in this write, some insightful commentary on those inner monologue thoughts we all can relate to, during our moments of uncertainty,
thought provoking
September 29th, 2020 02:04
Dispirited hope
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much involved in being dispirited. Well, I know now! heehee.
September 29th, 2020 01:51
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much involved in being dispirited. Well, I know now! heehee.
September 29th, 2020 01:51
Nameless expression
L. B. Mek said:
good read, liked the flamboyant imagery: \'capeless heroism interwells with this life\'
September 15th, 2020 02:20
L. B. Mek said:
good read, liked the flamboyant imagery: \'capeless heroism interwells with this life\'
September 15th, 2020 02:20
Nameless expression
orchidee said:
I never knew all this happened in life. Well, I know now! That\'s a lot of stuff. lol.
September 15th, 2020 01:45
orchidee said:
I never knew all this happened in life. Well, I know now! That\'s a lot of stuff. lol.
September 15th, 2020 01:45
Last Dayz
orchidee said:
You hear that noise? It\'s me getting dictionary out of the cupboard! lol.
Or me plugging in the laptop to find and online dictionary.
September 14th, 2020 01:51
orchidee said:
You hear that noise? It\'s me getting dictionary out of the cupboard! lol.
Or me plugging in the laptop to find and online dictionary.
September 14th, 2020 01:51
Another number
Goddess of the Mist said:
You have a wonderful way of describing thoughts, memory, oblivion...
September 11th, 2020 23:36
Goddess of the Mist said:
You have a wonderful way of describing thoughts, memory, oblivion...
September 11th, 2020 23:36
Another number
MelissaJA said:
\"Fear keeps me eternally captive\" I feel this
September 11th, 2020 23:11
MelissaJA said:
\"Fear keeps me eternally captive\" I feel this
September 11th, 2020 23:11
The glitch inside the mind
L. B. Mek said:
we are all tethered to that tree of life somehow, liked your creative structure and layout, full of insightful observations
September 11th, 2020 03:19
L. B. Mek said:
we are all tethered to that tree of life somehow, liked your creative structure and layout, full of insightful observations
September 11th, 2020 03:19
The glitch inside the mind
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fab sublime muse and I like the poetic word choice you have employed to effect. Kudos for a fine eloquent poem.!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:51
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow a fab sublime muse and I like the poetic word choice you have employed to effect. Kudos for a fine eloquent poem.!
Plz pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
September 11th, 2020 00:51
Homeostasis
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully ambitious poetry with some truly insightful commentary on life
September 10th, 2020 02:34
L. B. Mek said:
wonderfully ambitious poetry with some truly insightful commentary on life
September 10th, 2020 02:34
Homeostasis
orchidee said:
I never knew there was all this in a fraction of transient life. Well, I know now! lol.
September 10th, 2020 02:00
orchidee said:
I never knew there was all this in a fraction of transient life. Well, I know now! lol.
September 10th, 2020 02:00
No meaning
Goddess of the Mist said:
Something about your poems makes me want to read them several times. I really like the flow of this one, and especially the words \"white hot light\'s entanglement\". Very cool :-)
August 24th, 2020 21:31
Goddess of the Mist said:
Something about your poems makes me want to read them several times. I really like the flow of this one, and especially the words \"white hot light\'s entanglement\". Very cool :-)
August 24th, 2020 21:31
Misgiving
orchidee said:
A fine write River. I agree, it\'s not the \'ouward\' society that needs changing, but it\'s our \'inward\' self.
I can only see a spirtual way through, and what I mention in some of my hymn-poems - themes of salvation, redemption, etc.
July 31st, 2020 01:38
orchidee said:
A fine write River. I agree, it\'s not the \'ouward\' society that needs changing, but it\'s our \'inward\' self.
I can only see a spirtual way through, and what I mention in some of my hymn-poems - themes of salvation, redemption, etc.
July 31st, 2020 01:38
Dissolving
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much involved in dissolving. Well, I know now! Is the 11:11 pic symbolic?
July 24th, 2020 01:52
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much involved in dissolving. Well, I know now! Is the 11:11 pic symbolic?
July 24th, 2020 01:52
Sleep talk
orchidee said:
I never knew so much goes on in sleep talking. It\'s a wonder we get any sleep at all with all this going on! lol.
May 14th, 2020 11:07
orchidee said:
I never knew so much goes on in sleep talking. It\'s a wonder we get any sleep at all with all this going on! lol.
May 14th, 2020 11:07
Hollow Remedy
orchidee said:
Yep, makes no sense to me - clear as mud! So an excellent poem. heehee.
April 2nd, 2020 06:44
orchidee said:
Yep, makes no sense to me - clear as mud! So an excellent poem. heehee.
April 2nd, 2020 06:44
Knowing not
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in knowing not. This seems an awful lot to know in \'not knowing!\' lol.
March 31st, 2020 02:38
orchidee said:
I never knew there was so much in knowing not. This seems an awful lot to know in \'not knowing!\' lol.
March 31st, 2020 02:38
Shadow comings
orchidee said:
We\'re all rather standing on our heads now, as you seem to be doing all time - in your pic! lol.
March 30th, 2020 02:17
orchidee said:
We\'re all rather standing on our heads now, as you seem to be doing all time - in your pic! lol.
March 30th, 2020 02:17
Voice in a void
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow you craft your muse in superb word choice and phrasing! Milele I would like to look up. Interesting great poem overall. Kudos.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!
February 26th, 2020 01:18
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 said:
Wow you craft your muse in superb word choice and phrasing! Milele I would like to look up. Interesting great poem overall. Kudos.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!
February 26th, 2020 01:18
Lost at home
orchidee said:
A fine write River. You falling to bits there? Dissolving?! Come back - help! heehee.
February 19th, 2020 07:27
orchidee said:
A fine write River. You falling to bits there? Dissolving?! Come back - help! heehee.
February 19th, 2020 07:27
Bio-Disconnect
orchidee said:
Ooh I shall have to return to this when having bit more time, and *finds out dictionary too* probably!
December 16th, 2019 03:02
orchidee said:
Ooh I shall have to return to this when having bit more time, and *finds out dictionary too* probably!
December 16th, 2019 03:02
Inner Degrees
orchidee said:
I suppose we can\'t for ever stay in \'swamps\' or be \'bogged down\' by grief. Some folk may extend it, and \'play on it\' for the sympathy vote - the complexities of human nature....now, I\'m no psychologist or psychiatrist. Long words there! lol
Should you be \'emerging\' from your swampy mind - not \'submerging\' from it?\'
December 7th, 2019 13:24
orchidee said:
I suppose we can\'t for ever stay in \'swamps\' or be \'bogged down\' by grief. Some folk may extend it, and \'play on it\' for the sympathy vote - the complexities of human nature....now, I\'m no psychologist or psychiatrist. Long words there! lol
Should you be \'emerging\' from your swampy mind - not \'submerging\' from it?\'
December 7th, 2019 13:24
Inner Degrees
orchidee said:
A fine write River. You done that meditation standing on your head, as in your pic?! heehee.
December 7th, 2019 07:38
orchidee said:
A fine write River. You done that meditation standing on your head, as in your pic?! heehee.
December 7th, 2019 07:38
Cloudy Certainty
myself and me said:
\"life is like a circle\", yet each round is different.
November 26th, 2019 13:01
myself and me said:
\"life is like a circle\", yet each round is different.
November 26th, 2019 13:01
Cloudy Certainty
RiverJordan said:
I guess I\'m the only one standing on my head, everybody seems to be on their two feet.
November 26th, 2019 03:06
RiverJordan said:
I guess I\'m the only one standing on my head, everybody seems to be on their two feet.
November 26th, 2019 03:06
Cloudy Certainty
orchidee said:
A nice write in the shape of a fountain, River. Oh woe, sometimes me only cloudy certainty is that I\'m in Cloud Cuckoo Land - so I say! lol.
November 26th, 2019 02:56
orchidee said:
A nice write in the shape of a fountain, River. Oh woe, sometimes me only cloudy certainty is that I\'m in Cloud Cuckoo Land - so I say! lol.
November 26th, 2019 02:56
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