Comments received on poems by RiverJordan



Sleep talk
orchidee said:

I never knew so much goes on in sleep talking. It\'s a wonder we get any sleep at all with all this going on! lol.

May 14th, 2020 11:07

P.O.R.N part 2
The Uneducated O.A.P said:

Yoa River, Wife\'s just applied the Heimlich manoeuvre to remove the choccy biscuit I was eating while reading your words! I knew a young lad years ago used to do his homework with his right hand while wanking with his left! Dunno what sort of homework it was., nice one, Bill

April 3rd, 2020 10:33

P.O.R.N part 2
orchidee said:

Oohh, monkeys? Stop visiting that \'zoo\' then! Why you hitting monkeys? (oops). But seriously, doesn\'t it become the \'same\' after a while?

April 3rd, 2020 06:46

Hollow Remedy
Unsub said:

RJ,

it may on the surface appear to not make sense until you drop below the waterline & submerge in the imagery of the words. There in the crystal waters a sense of the depths becomes apparent...well to me it does but I do have a warped mind.

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April 2nd, 2020 11:14

Hollow Remedy
orchidee said:

Yep, makes no sense to me - clear as mud! So an excellent poem. heehee.

April 2nd, 2020 06:44

Voice in a void
Unsub said:

I thoroughly enjoyed this one. The gloomy nirvana! Perfect!

I won’t end my comment asking you to read my poem as that’s just plain rude!

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April 1st, 2020 15:06

Knowing not
orchidee said:

I never knew there was so much in knowing not. This seems an awful lot to know in \'not knowing!\' lol.

March 31st, 2020 02:38

Shadow comings
orchidee said:

We\'re all rather standing on our heads now, as you seem to be doing all time - in your pic! lol.

March 30th, 2020 02:17

Voice in a void
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸 said:

Wow you craft your muse in superb word choice and phrasing! Milele I would like to look up. Interesting great poem overall. Kudos.

Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too!

February 26th, 2020 01:18

Lost at home
orchidee said:

A fine write River. You falling to bits there? Dissolving?! Come back - help! heehee.

February 19th, 2020 07:27

Bio-Disconnect
Unsub said:

RJ,

a poem to describe my day ahead!

Some great one liners in this one.

Can\'t express enough who perfect the final four lines are!

It\'s worthy of being tattooed on the back of my hand!

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December 16th, 2019 04:52

Bio-Disconnect
orchidee said:

Ooh I shall have to return to this when having bit more time, and *finds out dictionary too* probably!

December 16th, 2019 03:02

Inner Degrees
orchidee said:

I suppose we can\'t for ever stay in \'swamps\' or be \'bogged down\' by grief. Some folk may extend it, and \'play on it\' for the sympathy vote - the complexities of human nature....now, I\'m no psychologist or psychiatrist. Long words there! lol
Should you be \'emerging\' from your swampy mind - not \'submerging\' from it?\'

December 7th, 2019 13:24

Inner Degrees
orchidee said:

A fine write River. You done that meditation standing on your head, as in your pic?! heehee.

December 7th, 2019 07:38

Cloudy Certainty
myself and me said:

\"life is like a circle\", yet each round is different.

November 26th, 2019 13:01

Cloudy Certainty
RiverJordan said:

I guess I\'m the only one standing on my head, everybody seems to be on their two feet.

November 26th, 2019 03:06

Cloudy Certainty
orchidee said:

A nice write in the shape of a fountain, River. Oh woe, sometimes me only cloudy certainty is that I\'m in Cloud Cuckoo Land - so I say! lol.

November 26th, 2019 02:56

fallen bottles
orchidee said:

A fine write River. Now a song from me: Ten green bottles hanging on the wall......! heehee.
But you is upside down, so the bottles would need to be glued on the wall to stop them falling.

November 22nd, 2019 06:45

just a thought
orchidee said:

You been watching EastEnders then? A ghastly soap serial in the UK: the half dead! Substitute the name of some equally ghastly soap in the USA.

November 18th, 2019 02:53

In hindsight
orchidee said:

Well, I held my breath for 24 hours one day. I didn\'t feel well afterwards. Dunno why?! Strange that. I was only trying to save air for a day. lol.

November 17th, 2019 08:46

In hindsight
orchidee said:

Erm, is it difficult to live life standing on your head? You appear to be doing so in your pic! lol.

November 17th, 2019 02:41

For the sake of virtue
FineB said:

Hello RiverJordan,

Excellent write!

Keep writing FineB

November 3rd, 2019 14:16

For the sake of virtue
RiverJordan said:

I\'m actually standing on my feet, maybe you\'re standing on your head

November 3rd, 2019 02:44

For the sake of virtue
orchidee said:

I gotta read your stuff standing on me head now, since your pic appeared. Doh! lol

November 3rd, 2019 02:34

Still, I Climb
FineB said:

Hello RiverJordan.

A very inspirational write. Wonderful!

We should always strive to be the best we can be and never give up!

Keep writing FineB

November 2nd, 2019 12:34

Still, I Climb
orchidee said:

Where ya going with that climbing?! lol.

November 2nd, 2019 12:28

Great Read
Goldfinch60 said:

I\'ve got that book!

November 1st, 2019 01:18

Great Read
orchidee said:

Doh!! Or Durrr!! lol. A true write there?

October 31st, 2019 11:05

Everyday
FineB said:

Hi River Jordan,

A great write very thought provoking.

Life is a rat race in itself in this self obsessed, social media dominated society.

Keeo writing FineB

October 30th, 2019 16:54

P.O.R.N
orchidee said:

Meanwhile - Fido my watchdog, wouldn\'t know this. He would swoon at it! heehee.

October 29th, 2019 02:38

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