Comments received on poems by RiverJordan
Boundless Recollection
marlenawood said:
Beautiful writing I\'d say with such words spoken with your amazing vocabulary
April 3rd, 2018 07:48
marlenawood said:
Beautiful writing I\'d say with such words spoken with your amazing vocabulary
April 3rd, 2018 07:48
Boundless Recollection
orchidee said:
A fine write River. I\'m all confused about \'nowness\'. Has \'now\' gone? Is it yet to come? Ahh I see, it\'s \'right now\'! heehee.
I must stop waffling. lol.
April 3rd, 2018 02:01
orchidee said:
A fine write River. I\'m all confused about \'nowness\'. Has \'now\' gone? Is it yet to come? Ahh I see, it\'s \'right now\'! heehee.
I must stop waffling. lol.
April 3rd, 2018 02:01
Intergalactic sleep walker
orchidee said:
Oohh I\'ve not tried some (or many) of those things? Should I give them a go? Some seem spooky and dangerous though, from what I know of them.
Does the No.7 bus go to Mars?!
March 24th, 2018 11:50
orchidee said:
Oohh I\'ve not tried some (or many) of those things? Should I give them a go? Some seem spooky and dangerous though, from what I know of them.
Does the No.7 bus go to Mars?!
March 24th, 2018 11:50
Abstractions Of Sentiment
Laura🌻 said:
RiverJordan,
A brilliant write!
My favorite line...
“my heart of hearts murmurs for your frequency,...”
Formidable!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2018 15:37
Laura🌻 said:
RiverJordan,
A brilliant write!
My favorite line...
“my heart of hearts murmurs for your frequency,...”
Formidable!
~Laura~
March 23rd, 2018 15:37
Abstractions Of Sentiment
FineB said:
Wow River Jordan!
Powerful write!
Thank you.
Keep writing
FineB
March 23rd, 2018 14:26
FineB said:
Wow River Jordan!
Powerful write!
Thank you.
Keep writing
FineB
March 23rd, 2018 14:26
Abstractions Of Sentiment
Jah Chancleta said:
I like your style none like it, Keep writing Bredren
March 16th, 2018 19:02
Jah Chancleta said:
I like your style none like it, Keep writing Bredren
March 16th, 2018 19:02
Abstractions Of Sentiment
Nicholas Browning said:
This reminds me of my style a bit. Back when it was really crazy. I\'m very interested to see where you go with this. I personally believe that when you find the right connection it\'s going to bare a fruit so sweet you wouldn\'t dare eat it. Nice work, keep it up.
March 16th, 2018 09:05
Nicholas Browning said:
This reminds me of my style a bit. Back when it was really crazy. I\'m very interested to see where you go with this. I personally believe that when you find the right connection it\'s going to bare a fruit so sweet you wouldn\'t dare eat it. Nice work, keep it up.
March 16th, 2018 09:05
Abstractions Of Sentiment
marlenawood said:
Absolutely love this keep up the great work
March 16th, 2018 08:07
marlenawood said:
Absolutely love this keep up the great work
March 16th, 2018 08:07
Abstractions Of Sentiment
orchidee said:
Erm, I don\'t know all these things. Hardly know any of them in fact!
Some of them sound good, whatever they are! heehee.
March 16th, 2018 06:37
orchidee said:
Erm, I don\'t know all these things. Hardly know any of them in fact!
Some of them sound good, whatever they are! heehee.
March 16th, 2018 06:37
devoid connectedness
orchidee said:
It\'s your own style, and I wouldn\'t wish you to change it, though I find some things a bit cryptic in your poems.
March 14th, 2018 15:29
orchidee said:
It\'s your own style, and I wouldn\'t wish you to change it, though I find some things a bit cryptic in your poems.
March 14th, 2018 15:29
devoid connectedness
orchidee said:
Oops some glitch in the posting - this has all appeared in Greek - honestly! I can translate it, but will take a while.
March 14th, 2018 11:32
orchidee said:
Oops some glitch in the posting - this has all appeared in Greek - honestly! I can translate it, but will take a while.
March 14th, 2018 11:32
devoid connectedness
Nicholas Browning said:
I feel as if this is attempting to portray an emotion. Do enlighten me. Nice word usage, big selection here.
March 14th, 2018 06:29
Nicholas Browning said:
I feel as if this is attempting to portray an emotion. Do enlighten me. Nice word usage, big selection here.
March 14th, 2018 06:29
Otherwordly
orchidee said:
A fine write River. Yet some other-worldly things may not be just spooky, but can be really dangerous I think!
March 13th, 2018 07:39
orchidee said:
A fine write River. Yet some other-worldly things may not be just spooky, but can be really dangerous I think!
March 13th, 2018 07:39
Back to the cosmos
lucaso said:
Nice write brother -- reminds me of a vision I had where my \'astral\' body rose out of my 3rd dimensional/habitually contrived through egotistical limitations and i become hyper-aware of the simulations, seeing pixel-like spiders sucking up triangles.
I believe you\'re aware of the irony of the universe and I know our soul are resonating at the same frequency so would you like to see a new poetic language I\'ve created which will allow people to experience in FULL - not just through the duality of thought - the power of word, allowing humankind to create reality? Also, I dig your name, what type of poetry do you read? -- if any? Peace x
March 9th, 2018 17:26
lucaso said:
Nice write brother -- reminds me of a vision I had where my \'astral\' body rose out of my 3rd dimensional/habitually contrived through egotistical limitations and i become hyper-aware of the simulations, seeing pixel-like spiders sucking up triangles.
I believe you\'re aware of the irony of the universe and I know our soul are resonating at the same frequency so would you like to see a new poetic language I\'ve created which will allow people to experience in FULL - not just through the duality of thought - the power of word, allowing humankind to create reality? Also, I dig your name, what type of poetry do you read? -- if any? Peace x
March 9th, 2018 17:26
Spiritual Wars
FineB said:
Thank you River Jordan.
I liked this poem.
Good stuff.
I am beginning to realise that man\'s greatest battles now are more spiritual than physical in life!
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 07:27
FineB said:
Thank you River Jordan.
I liked this poem.
Good stuff.
I am beginning to realise that man\'s greatest battles now are more spiritual than physical in life!
Keep writing
FineB
March 7th, 2018 07:27
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