Comments received on poems by RiverJordan



Boundless Recollection
marlenawood said:

Beautiful writing I\'d say with such words spoken with your amazing vocabulary

April 3rd, 2018 07:48

Boundless Recollection
Karoline said:

Beautiful and poignant x

April 3rd, 2018 03:25

Boundless Recollection
orchidee said:

A fine write River. I\'m all confused about \'nowness\'. Has \'now\' gone? Is it yet to come? Ahh I see, it\'s \'right now\'! heehee.
I must stop waffling. lol.

April 3rd, 2018 02:01

Intergalactic sleep walker
orchidee said:

Oohh I\'ve not tried some (or many) of those things? Should I give them a go? Some seem spooky and dangerous though, from what I know of them.
Does the No.7 bus go to Mars?!

March 24th, 2018 11:50

Abstractions Of Sentiment
Laura🌻 said:

RiverJordan,
A brilliant write!
My favorite line...
“my heart of hearts murmurs for your frequency,...”
Formidable!

~Laura~

March 23rd, 2018 15:37

Abstractions Of Sentiment
FineB said:

Wow River Jordan!

Powerful write!

Thank you.

Keep writing
FineB


March 23rd, 2018 14:26

Abstractions Of Sentiment
Jah Chancleta said:

I like your style none like it, Keep writing Bredren

March 16th, 2018 19:02

Abstractions Of Sentiment
Nicholas Browning said:

This reminds me of my style a bit. Back when it was really crazy. I\'m very interested to see where you go with this. I personally believe that when you find the right connection it\'s going to bare a fruit so sweet you wouldn\'t dare eat it. Nice work, keep it up.

March 16th, 2018 09:05

Abstractions Of Sentiment
marlenawood said:

Absolutely love this keep up the great work

March 16th, 2018 08:07

Abstractions Of Sentiment
orchidee said:

Erm, I don\'t know all these things. Hardly know any of them in fact!
Some of them sound good, whatever they are! heehee.

March 16th, 2018 06:37

devoid connectedness
orchidee said:

It\'s your own style, and I wouldn\'t wish you to change it, though I find some things a bit cryptic in your poems.

March 14th, 2018 15:29

devoid connectedness
orchidee said:

Oops some glitch in the posting - this has all appeared in Greek - honestly! I can translate it, but will take a while.

March 14th, 2018 11:32

devoid connectedness
Nicholas Browning said:

I feel as if this is attempting to portray an emotion. Do enlighten me. Nice word usage, big selection here.

March 14th, 2018 06:29

Otherwordly
orchidee said:

A fine write River. Yet some other-worldly things may not be just spooky, but can be really dangerous I think!

March 13th, 2018 07:39

Binary Decoded 111
RiverJordan said:

Haha, it\'s not supposed to =0 lol jk

March 10th, 2018 15:32

Binary Decoded 111
orchidee said:

Spooky! The clip won\'t play!

March 10th, 2018 13:09

Back to the cosmos
lucaso said:

Nice write brother -- reminds me of a vision I had where my \'astral\' body rose out of my 3rd dimensional/habitually contrived through egotistical limitations and i become hyper-aware of the simulations, seeing pixel-like spiders sucking up triangles.
I believe you\'re aware of the irony of the universe and I know our soul are resonating at the same frequency so would you like to see a new poetic language I\'ve created which will allow people to experience in FULL - not just through the duality of thought - the power of word, allowing humankind to create reality? Also, I dig your name, what type of poetry do you read? -- if any? Peace x

March 9th, 2018 17:26

Spiritual Wars
FineB said:

Thank you River Jordan.

I liked this poem.

Good stuff.

I am beginning to realise that man\'s greatest battles now are more spiritual than physical in life!

Keep writing
FineB

March 7th, 2018 07:27

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