Comments received on poems by Jeremy Cohen
Self-forgiveness
ZIGGY said:
hi to write such a short piece and give it meaning is so hard to do but I feel the last line done it for me would love for you to expand on this piece as I feel you have much more to give here ,,,,,,,zigs
June 18th, 2018 13:45
ZIGGY said:
hi to write such a short piece and give it meaning is so hard to do but I feel the last line done it for me would love for you to expand on this piece as I feel you have much more to give here ,,,,,,,zigs
June 18th, 2018 13:45
Self-forgiveness
onepauly said:
stick it out. until....
witch is to say, give it time.
April 22nd, 2018 07:26
onepauly said:
stick it out. until....
witch is to say, give it time.
April 22nd, 2018 07:26
Love
Nicholas Browning said:
Love is indeed many things. I can relate with most of these. Well said sir.
April 17th, 2018 05:54
Nicholas Browning said:
Love is indeed many things. I can relate with most of these. Well said sir.
April 17th, 2018 05:54
The Contact List
Laura🌻 said:
I agree with Lorna...
go with the flow, Jeremy!
You’re in charge! The
power is within you!
Feel as wonderful
as you want to!
More power to you!
Nice visual...
PLEASE DO NOT PRESS!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 05:03
Laura🌻 said:
I agree with Lorna...
go with the flow, Jeremy!
You’re in charge! The
power is within you!
Feel as wonderful
as you want to!
More power to you!
Nice visual...
PLEASE DO NOT PRESS!
~Laura~
March 21st, 2018 05:03
What I Lost
Michael Edwards said:
Some journey - great that things are okay now - I love the way this is structured
March 16th, 2018 14:16
Michael Edwards said:
Some journey - great that things are okay now - I love the way this is structured
March 16th, 2018 14:16
What I Lost
Lorna said:
Sounds like some of the things you lost were worth losing .... clears the path..........
March 16th, 2018 09:56
Lorna said:
Sounds like some of the things you lost were worth losing .... clears the path..........
March 16th, 2018 09:56
What’s A Jew Without A Tribe?
Resa71 said:
I used to get upset by those jokes, and even what others seem to still consider innocent expressions like “ Don’t let her Jew ya down on the price “.
I worked for Starbucks for a few years, I can’t tell you how many times I’ve heard that saying.
And many times from nice boys, they grew up hearing it, hence reapeted it.
Same with “ that’s so gay”
I recently corrected my 7 year old son for saying this.
He didn’t even know the meaning.
March 16th, 2018 09:02
Resa71 said:
I used to get upset by those jokes, and even what others seem to still consider innocent expressions like “ Don’t let her Jew ya down on the price “.
I worked for Starbucks for a few years, I can’t tell you how many times I’ve heard that saying.
And many times from nice boys, they grew up hearing it, hence reapeted it.
Same with “ that’s so gay”
I recently corrected my 7 year old son for saying this.
He didn’t even know the meaning.
March 16th, 2018 09:02
What I Lost
Resa71 said:
Sounds like you’ve been through it friend!
I like the way you interjected the loss of some negitive aspects of yourself.
It made me pause, I believe that was your intention,
To “ Lose the reader in the end”
Nice twist.
Resa. :)
March 16th, 2018 08:54
Resa71 said:
Sounds like you’ve been through it friend!
I like the way you interjected the loss of some negitive aspects of yourself.
It made me pause, I believe that was your intention,
To “ Lose the reader in the end”
Nice twist.
Resa. :)
March 16th, 2018 08:54
Love In A Photograph
Jeremy Cohen said:
Lol idk, ask the people still living there...
March 14th, 2018 11:09
Jeremy Cohen said:
Lol idk, ask the people still living there...
March 14th, 2018 11:09
Some Freedom
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Like a Lazy Day on the River Boat. Just in a Field this Time. Instead of Plugging in the Electric Guitar. Just Grab a Acoustic and in the Yard. My Thing is the Bugs Get Me. Hot Summer Nights. Campfire Light...
March 12th, 2018 09:45
Michael J. Schaeffer said:
Like a Lazy Day on the River Boat. Just in a Field this Time. Instead of Plugging in the Electric Guitar. Just Grab a Acoustic and in the Yard. My Thing is the Bugs Get Me. Hot Summer Nights. Campfire Light...
March 12th, 2018 09:45
Spring Haiku
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the chosen image and the play on words in this refreshing haiku - thanks for sharing it Jeremy.
March 12th, 2018 09:37
Fay Slimm. said:
Love the chosen image and the play on words in this refreshing haiku - thanks for sharing it Jeremy.
March 12th, 2018 09:37
Spring Haiku
Michael Edwards said:
One of my favourite forms - a little gem Jeremy.
March 12th, 2018 09:37
Michael Edwards said:
One of my favourite forms - a little gem Jeremy.
March 12th, 2018 09:37
What’s A Jew Without A Tribe?
Jeremy Cohen said:
Thanks, that\'s very sweet. I believe everyone sees it, you just have to treat everyone the same, with love and kindness.
March 9th, 2018 11:53
Jeremy Cohen said:
Thanks, that\'s very sweet. I believe everyone sees it, you just have to treat everyone the same, with love and kindness.
March 9th, 2018 11:53
What’s A Jew Without A Tribe?
Lorna said:
Try to think of us - the ones that don\'t see black/white/purple/Jewish/Muslim/short/tall/yellow/red - you have a nice face - that\'s all I can see.
March 9th, 2018 11:23
Lorna said:
Try to think of us - the ones that don\'t see black/white/purple/Jewish/Muslim/short/tall/yellow/red - you have a nice face - that\'s all I can see.
March 9th, 2018 11:23
