Comments received on poems by Dr.Sandhya Tiwari



VOICE OF THE WANDERING YOUNG MINDS
Soumita Sarkar said:

Hi Sandhya ma'm............your verse has justified the education status in general...........the students are at mercy...........liked it much.I invite u to read my poems and comment upon them.Thank you for sharing this poem.............keep writing....

June 10th, 2013 01:07

MIND MADE MANACLES
jvl narasimha rao said:

your poem is profound.Man is chained every where.You are absolutely true.
JVL

December 28th, 2010 08:59

THE ULTIMATE TRUTH
nikhilps said:

nice work madam...... but it lacks something... i dont knw hw to say that or i dont knw to say that... but it lacks something!! but its a good poem too and certain lines like " who is tobe blamed ? the sreater or the created" i love this line.... keep on writting madam!!

September 11th, 2010 05:25

THE ULTIMATE TRUTH
jabberm said:

True and straight.honest and helpful.nicewrite .i like it.

September 8th, 2010 14:28

VOICE OF THE WANDERING YOUNG MINDS
jvl narasimha rao said:

DEAR mRS SANDHYA, YOUR POEM IS OUTSTANDING and depicts the contemporary society in its true colours.What you say is applicable across the globe.I have rated your poem with a 10.
yours sincerely,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
INDIA

September 7th, 2010 11:34

LET LORD BE THY GUIDE
jvl narasimha rao said:

Dear Mrs Sandhya, Your poem is very nice. My views about materialistic world are almost similar to yours.I hope you read all my poems and rate them.I have rated your poem with a 9.Please read my newly published poem OUR LIFE ON EARTH and rate it
yours sincerely,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
INDIA

September 7th, 2010 11:17

ALL WEAK THE INNER FORTRESS APPEARS
Dr.Sandhya Tiwari said:

thank you Dear sir. i enjoyed reading your comment. I shall read your poems too.......indeed i'm honored by your invitation.
thanks

September 6th, 2010 23:01

ALL WEAK THE INNER FORTRESS APPEARS
jvl narasimha rao said:

Dear Mrs sandhya, I am JVL NARASIMHA RAO From India.You have portrayed the uncertainty,unhappiness and impermanance of our life on this earth.You seem seem to be an Indian and a great poetess.I would like to emulate your poetry as Iam an immatured poet.I have rated your poem with 10 points.I hope you will read my poems ,make your comments and rate them too.
yours sincerely,
JVL NARASIMHA RAO
INDIA

September 6th, 2010 12:06

LET LORD BE THY GUIDE
Rahul said:

Belief is strength.

September 6th, 2010 04:00

LIVE LIFE KINGSIZE
Rahul said:

I enjoy your authentic original ideas which don't sound bookish.

Happy to find you on Poems and Poetry. though I live in India we are meeting on WWW.........

Would love to read your next poem and shall look forward to that.
bye

September 6th, 2010 03:53

VOICE OF THE WANDERING YOUNG MINDS
Rahul said:

It is a wonderful poem and you captured the spirit of the theme ver well. I liked it Sandhya

September 6th, 2010 03:49

LIVE LIFE KINGSIZE
Dr.Sandhya Tiwari said:

thanks a lot, I'm honored.

August 30th, 2010 03:58

LIVE LIFE KINGSIZE
Kri2arch said:

You are such a great poet. I love the way you write about life.its a blessing to have you on here

August 27th, 2010 05:12

VOICE OF THE WANDERING YOUNG MINDS
Dr.Sandhya Tiwari said:

Thanks Franklin, for reverberating the essence of my poem.

But it really pains me as a teacher when I see students for economically backward families bearing the brunt.

The poem is the result of observation and empathy and I think it appealed to you my honorable reader.

thanks

August 27th, 2010 00:42

VOICE OF THE WANDERING YOUNG MINDS
bernard franklin said:

Hello Sandhya, I think that these rapid changes in the education system are happening all over the world, It's as if the whole world is fighting itself to be and to produce the best, many good students get left behind because of this. Your poem is very good and flows beautifully, I especially like the lines:-
"Everything was ephemeral
But for many families the loss was not temporal"
9/10 Excellent.




August 26th, 2010 11:32

MIND MADE MANACLES
Kri2arch said:

I realy love what i just read, it is one of the best poems i've ever read. The way your words are arranged is realy nice

August 26th, 2010 07:19

VOICE OF THE WANDERING YOUNG MINDS
Kri2arch said:

Its the same here in Ghana...i like the poem

August 26th, 2010 06:58

MIND MADE MANACLES
Dr.Sandhya Tiwari said:

Thanks a lot for your insightful comment Mr.Bernard .


August 26th, 2010 00:54

MIND MADE MANACLES
bernard franklin said:

Hi Sandhya, I really enjoyed reading your poem, and you are right of course that mankind is shackled in so many ways, it is down to each and every one of us to throw off those shackles and live as we perceive NOT as we are perceived!. A nicely flowing piece of free verse, it is both intriguing and emotive in its content. Excellent work , keep it up! BF

August 25th, 2010 10:58