Comments received on poems by YoDaPoe
It\'S MoRe ThAn ThE CoLoR Of My SkIn, MoRe ThAn ThE World I\'m In
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, those last two lines are so powerful and are so very true, live each moment to the full, every moment is precious.
May 30th, 2018 04:18
Goldfinch60 said:
Super write, those last two lines are so powerful and are so very true, live each moment to the full, every moment is precious.
May 30th, 2018 04:18
It\'S MoRe ThAn ThE CoLoR Of My SkIn, MoRe ThAn ThE World I\'m In
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SISTER ~ We got one Beautiful Brown Skinned Princess from LA ~ Meghan Markle and we all love her just as much as Harry does. I\'m the same age as Harry ~ so I can EMPATHISE ! And we love you too because you too are another beautiful Brown Skinned Princess from LA ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for sharin\' just how you feel ~ OPENNESS is the essence of MPS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B !
May 30th, 2018 04:04
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks SISTER ~ We got one Beautiful Brown Skinned Princess from LA ~ Meghan Markle and we all love her just as much as Harry does. I\'m the same age as Harry ~ so I can EMPATHISE ! And we love you too because you too are another beautiful Brown Skinned Princess from LA ~ AMEN ~ Thanks for sharin\' just how you feel ~ OPENNESS is the essence of MPS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B !
May 30th, 2018 04:04
TrAiN RiDe
Cass Fate said:
This poem is really amazing. I love how the words seem to somehow work together and fit perfectly to create the picture of a train ride!
April 18th, 2018 17:29
Cass Fate said:
This poem is really amazing. I love how the words seem to somehow work together and fit perfectly to create the picture of a train ride!
April 18th, 2018 17:29
TrAiN RiDe
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TO MPS FRIEND ! Thanks for your first Poem taking us on an epic 18 line Train Journey on a nice Cold Breezy Morning ! People in the Station ~ smoking ~ playing on LapTops ~ conversing ~ buying tickets etc !
They choose their destination and enjoy the ride. This is a metaphor for the Journey of Life ! Continue to use your ability then EXIT ~ This is your final Destination ! Thanks for Caring & Sharing ~ Please CHECK MY POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
April 18th, 2018 16:02
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TO MPS FRIEND ! Thanks for your first Poem taking us on an epic 18 line Train Journey on a nice Cold Breezy Morning ! People in the Station ~ smoking ~ playing on LapTops ~ conversing ~ buying tickets etc !
They choose their destination and enjoy the ride. This is a metaphor for the Journey of Life ! Continue to use your ability then EXIT ~ This is your final Destination ! Thanks for Caring & Sharing ~ Please CHECK MY POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
April 18th, 2018 16:02
