Comments received on poems by Ian Primmer
Ruby Ridge
FineB said:
Thanks Ian.
A great write on Ruby Ridge.
Keep writing
FineB
June 25th, 2018 09:15
FineB said:
Thanks Ian.
A great write on Ruby Ridge.
Keep writing
FineB
June 25th, 2018 09:15
\"Don\'t call him names\"
FineB said:
Excellent Ian.
We fail to realise that the characteristics that we possess that cause us to be bullied is what makes us special and unique in the long term.
However, the journey to this self realisation for any individual is indeed a painful one at times.
Keep writing
FineB
May 29th, 2018 10:28
FineB said:
Excellent Ian.
We fail to realise that the characteristics that we possess that cause us to be bullied is what makes us special and unique in the long term.
However, the journey to this self realisation for any individual is indeed a painful one at times.
Keep writing
FineB
May 29th, 2018 10:28
\"Don\'t call him names\"
orchidee said:
A fine write Ian. I had a horrid year, first year at secondary school/high school? (aged 11-12). A nasty jolt from my first school, where were happy days.
Things like \'initiation\' - pushing new school-children into the holly bush, etc.
May 24th, 2018 01:53
orchidee said:
A fine write Ian. I had a horrid year, first year at secondary school/high school? (aged 11-12). A nasty jolt from my first school, where were happy days.
Things like \'initiation\' - pushing new school-children into the holly bush, etc.
May 24th, 2018 01:53
\"Don\'t call him names\"
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, all should be accepted in our world but some people just seem to get pleasure from there hatefulness.
May 24th, 2018 00:58
Goldfinch60 said:
Good write, all should be accepted in our world but some people just seem to get pleasure from there hatefulness.
May 24th, 2018 00:58
Fateful Day
ForeverJesus7 said:
Being a train conductor seems like such an easy job. The pictures make it seem as though you just sit there while the train does all the work. I am sure is much more complicated than that.
Persistence is key
May 23rd, 2018 19:35
ForeverJesus7 said:
Being a train conductor seems like such an easy job. The pictures make it seem as though you just sit there while the train does all the work. I am sure is much more complicated than that.
Persistence is key
May 23rd, 2018 19:35
\"Don\'t call him names\"
ForeverJesus7 said:
This piece is so fitting. I myself had seizures since I was six years old.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key
May 23rd, 2018 19:26
ForeverJesus7 said:
This piece is so fitting. I myself had seizures since I was six years old.
Keep writing.
Persistence is key
May 23rd, 2018 19:26
\"Don\'t call him names\"
dusk arising said:
Really important message in your writing. If only we could convey this message to the kids who do the harming. In my childhood i received a lot of bullying harm which recent counselling has shown stayed with me into my senior years affecting my personal relationships. If only we could stamp this out. Your writing really touched me today.
May 23rd, 2018 18:37
dusk arising said:
Really important message in your writing. If only we could convey this message to the kids who do the harming. In my childhood i received a lot of bullying harm which recent counselling has shown stayed with me into my senior years affecting my personal relationships. If only we could stamp this out. Your writing really touched me today.
May 23rd, 2018 18:37
\"Don\'t call him names\"
Caity Calvary said:
This reminds me of my little cousin who has autism and was bullied. It\'s so sad how kids treat other kids, but poems like yours help raise awareness. Thank you so much for this, it is an important message.
May 23rd, 2018 16:56
Caity Calvary said:
This reminds me of my little cousin who has autism and was bullied. It\'s so sad how kids treat other kids, but poems like yours help raise awareness. Thank you so much for this, it is an important message.
May 23rd, 2018 16:56
\"My Forever\"
Ian Primmer said:
Haha your all good, your experience with poetry is inspirational to me, I admire your work as well!!
May 22nd, 2018 23:22
Ian Primmer said:
Haha your all good, your experience with poetry is inspirational to me, I admire your work as well!!
May 22nd, 2018 23:22
Fateful Day
Ian Primmer said:
Thank you Lawless, we see some terrifying things out there on the road. Your experience and input are truly valued, thanks again!
May 22nd, 2018 23:12
Ian Primmer said:
Thank you Lawless, we see some terrifying things out there on the road. Your experience and input are truly valued, thanks again!
May 22nd, 2018 23:12
\"My Forever\"
Laura🌻 said:
Ian,
All I can say is...
a beautiful expression of love!
An awesome write!
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 17:48
Laura🌻 said:
Ian,
All I can say is...
a beautiful expression of love!
An awesome write!
~Laura~
May 22nd, 2018 17:48
\"Tom Petty\"
FineB said:
An awesome and excellent poem Ian.
Wonderful.
Tom Petty a true rock legend.
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2018 12:06
FineB said:
An awesome and excellent poem Ian.
Wonderful.
Tom Petty a true rock legend.
Keep writing
FineB
May 17th, 2018 12:06
Fateful Day
SLR said:
This tells the other side. My uncle\'s brakes went out on his motorcycle and he crashed into a train. I also had a friend that that\'s how he committed suicide, he stepped in front of a passing train. Both were shocking and horrendous. But people rarely talk about the effect it must have on train conductors and engineers. Lots of feeling here, thank you for posting.
May 17th, 2018 07:09
SLR said:
This tells the other side. My uncle\'s brakes went out on his motorcycle and he crashed into a train. I also had a friend that that\'s how he committed suicide, he stepped in front of a passing train. Both were shocking and horrendous. But people rarely talk about the effect it must have on train conductors and engineers. Lots of feeling here, thank you for posting.
May 17th, 2018 07:09
Fateful Day
AlexHoy said:
Damn bro this writing was deep and very well written. One of my favorite poems that I’ve read on this site for sure.
May 16th, 2018 17:44
AlexHoy said:
Damn bro this writing was deep and very well written. One of my favorite poems that I’ve read on this site for sure.
May 16th, 2018 17:44
He’s smarter than you
elizabethshadow said:
You created a very honest piece of poetry. You made it very personal, using creative methods of figurative language. Great job on your first poem here. It could almost just use a good beat and be turned into a rap.
May 5th, 2018 18:18
elizabethshadow said:
You created a very honest piece of poetry. You made it very personal, using creative methods of figurative language. Great job on your first poem here. It could almost just use a good beat and be turned into a rap.
May 5th, 2018 18:18
