Comments received on poems by Ng Um



Give up??
Goldfinch60 said:

Good emotive write.

May 15th, 2020 01:09

Change in me.
SLR said:

Find your smiles and laughter again. Self growth should be a positive change. If you don\'t feel free than you\'re probably changing for someone else. The negative people out of your life is a positive thing. It\'s hard to cut ties with people and habits sometimes but you have to do what\'s best for you. This is a thought provoking piece. Good job.Good post.

June 22nd, 2018 20:08

Sleepless nights.
blank_voice said:

love this.

June 4th, 2018 16:54

Sleepless nights.
FineB said:

Thsnk you Umsmile.

A poignant poem and good

Keep writing
FineB




June 4th, 2018 14:00

Regret.
dusk arising said:

Hope this is a watershed, a turning point for you. It\'s never too late to put your hand up and say i made mistakes, i was wrong. We are all human, hopefully those you tell will know what it is to be human and have regrets too.
Very good writing.


May 30th, 2018 10:41

Regret.
Broken_kingdom said:

I can\'t really say anything clever. But with all honesty your regrets are your own. And i guess you might\'ve been punishing yourself. But that\'s my opinion. Great poem.

May 30th, 2018 09:46

Regret.
Poetic Dan said:

I know regrets spell so well, with this writing I\'m positive you\'ll find the reason. Our lessons are our own, thank you for sharing some of yours.

May 30th, 2018 09:12

Love?A question.
Broken_kingdom said:

Love is an idea. It\'s a sense we get when we THINK that someone is perfect. Love is twisted. It\'s not simple. It can in heartbreak or happiness. Mainly heartbreak

May 29th, 2018 10:12