Comments received on poems by Evie.36
Butterflies
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, always believe that the sun will shine - just follow that light.
Welcome to MPS.
June 2nd, 2018 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write, always believe that the sun will shine - just follow that light.
Welcome to MPS.
June 2nd, 2018 00:11
Butterflies
Michael Edwards said:
Wouldn\'t have guessed this is your first write - don\'t stop here - I look forward to reading more.
June 1st, 2018 22:56
Michael Edwards said:
Wouldn\'t have guessed this is your first write - don\'t stop here - I look forward to reading more.
June 1st, 2018 22:56
Butterflies
Shadowbox15 said:
\"For those butterflies with more than a pretty façade.\"
What powerful words you have. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2018 19:14
Shadowbox15 said:
\"For those butterflies with more than a pretty façade.\"
What powerful words you have. Thank you for sharing.
June 1st, 2018 19:14
Butterflies
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME EVIE Thanks for your first Poem ~ Love the Title ~ Love the analogy and the elegance of your style ! Your Free Verse Poem has great rhythm & flow !
Dolly Parton wrote : Love is like a Butterfly ~ A sweet and gentle thing ! All the ladies I know and have known are Butterflies ~ and my Girl Friends have been special Butterflies ~ BUT ~ different ages ~ shapes & sizes ~ colours ~ class culture etc ! Now I am engaged for the first time to ANGELA (30) who is on year\'s exchange in New Zealand ~ 11,500 miles away ~ but we can talk ! I look on the whole Woman and it is the inner woman I fall in love with !Every Blessing ~ Someone will love you for yourself and those longed for \"Blissful Moments\" will come to you. Love your poem ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
June 1st, 2018 18:10
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME EVIE Thanks for your first Poem ~ Love the Title ~ Love the analogy and the elegance of your style ! Your Free Verse Poem has great rhythm & flow !
Dolly Parton wrote : Love is like a Butterfly ~ A sweet and gentle thing ! All the ladies I know and have known are Butterflies ~ and my Girl Friends have been special Butterflies ~ BUT ~ different ages ~ shapes & sizes ~ colours ~ class culture etc ! Now I am engaged for the first time to ANGELA (30) who is on year\'s exchange in New Zealand ~ 11,500 miles away ~ but we can talk ! I look on the whole Woman and it is the inner woman I fall in love with !Every Blessing ~ Someone will love you for yourself and those longed for \"Blissful Moments\" will come to you. Love your poem ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
June 1st, 2018 18:10
