Comments received on poems by Fox
Social Faces, Social Graces
Noah Malice said:
I don\'t know if I agree with or even understand the conceit of the poem itself, but the structure and diction make for an interesting read. Keep posting!
June 8th, 2018 18:49
Noah Malice said:
I don\'t know if I agree with or even understand the conceit of the poem itself, but the structure and diction make for an interesting read. Keep posting!
June 8th, 2018 18:49
Social Faces, Social Graces
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good strong and true write in our present day culture.
Welcome to MPS.
June 6th, 2018 01:05
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good strong and true write in our present day culture.
Welcome to MPS.
June 6th, 2018 01:05
Social Faces, Social Graces
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FOX ~ Thanks for your first poem ! It is good to get a Member majoring in English & Anthropology ~ and it shows ! Excellent use of words ~ excellent rhythm and a hint of rhyme ~ internal rhyme and half rhyme ! Love your use of metaphor to describe \"Social Faces & Graces\" the Scimitar ~ Baby Kestrels and Chess. These all exemplify your arguments for the inadequacies of Society and our inadequacy to cope with them. I too like the phrase \"The wrong words by the right people can murder a generation\" Thanks for sharing an excellent and though provoking poem ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems & Fusions. To add a poem to an ongoing fusion ~ you have to click on DEVELOPING ~ OK ~ Thanks B !
June 5th, 2018 16:53
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FOX ~ Thanks for your first poem ! It is good to get a Member majoring in English & Anthropology ~ and it shows ! Excellent use of words ~ excellent rhythm and a hint of rhyme ~ internal rhyme and half rhyme ! Love your use of metaphor to describe \"Social Faces & Graces\" the Scimitar ~ Baby Kestrels and Chess. These all exemplify your arguments for the inadequacies of Society and our inadequacy to cope with them. I too like the phrase \"The wrong words by the right people can murder a generation\" Thanks for sharing an excellent and though provoking poem ~ more please ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my Poems & Fusions. To add a poem to an ongoing fusion ~ you have to click on DEVELOPING ~ OK ~ Thanks B !
June 5th, 2018 16:53
Social Faces, Social Graces
Fay Slimm. said:
This write describes so clearly the depth our present culture has fallen to Sarah - - and how true the line on using wrong words - - keep that ink flowing - - look forward to reading more of your work..
June 5th, 2018 16:09
Fay Slimm. said:
This write describes so clearly the depth our present culture has fallen to Sarah - - and how true the line on using wrong words - - keep that ink flowing - - look forward to reading more of your work..
June 5th, 2018 16:09
