Comments received on poems by Lovely brown skin
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dusk arising said:
Constructive advice offered.... follow advice as given by ForeverJesus6.
Look at how other poets do it... there are plenty on here, good idea to read some.
June 8th, 2018 17:42
dusk arising said:
Constructive advice offered.... follow advice as given by ForeverJesus6.
Look at how other poets do it... there are plenty on here, good idea to read some.
June 8th, 2018 17:42
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FRIEND ~ Love your second Poem and Yes you are getting through beautifully ! I do feel you through your words and Yes it really is a LOVE POEM ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my odd odes ~ Thanks B !
June 8th, 2018 15:09
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
HELLO FRIEND ~ Love your second Poem and Yes you are getting through beautifully ! I do feel you through your words and Yes it really is a LOVE POEM ~ Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my odd odes ~ Thanks B !
June 8th, 2018 15:09
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ForeverJesus7 said:
This is a good piece. May I give you some positive, constructive, and possibly helpful criticism?
Persistence is key
June 8th, 2018 14:35
ForeverJesus7 said:
This is a good piece. May I give you some positive, constructive, and possibly helpful criticism?
Persistence is key
June 8th, 2018 14:35
Love
ForeverJesus7 said:
That was a very good piece about love, and I often wonder how a person can just love the other for their looks. That makes no sence. It is very true. Beauty fades. I am the type of person that does not believe in premarital sex - with good reason. Two people can truely be in love, but once that moment comes, if they are not married, that love turns to lust, and every time you see eachother there is sex. Eventually, that is the only thing the two have in common. I do not see how a person can marry five to seven times in their life.
Of course looks matter to each person. There is nothing wrong with beauty. However, beauty is not what makes a person. Beauty eventually fades. Keep on writing. God has given you a gift. Persistence is key
June 8th, 2018 03:38
ForeverJesus7 said:
That was a very good piece about love, and I often wonder how a person can just love the other for their looks. That makes no sence. It is very true. Beauty fades. I am the type of person that does not believe in premarital sex - with good reason. Two people can truely be in love, but once that moment comes, if they are not married, that love turns to lust, and every time you see eachother there is sex. Eventually, that is the only thing the two have in common. I do not see how a person can marry five to seven times in their life.
Of course looks matter to each person. There is nothing wrong with beauty. However, beauty is not what makes a person. Beauty eventually fades. Keep on writing. God has given you a gift. Persistence is key
June 8th, 2018 03:38
Love
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Love it because you express very frankly what your think REAL LOVE IS and what it is NOT ! In my experience of LOVE some of the things you mention like Youthful Beauty (which you possess !) and Sex are in fact very transient and I observe that they fade with AGE ~ I am still Young ! In a LADY I look at her Character & Personality which is not transient and in fact improves with age. To me the Colour ~ Class ~ Culture etc of my Girl Friends is secondary to the Inner Lady ~ Her Soul and Spirit is what I seek to know not just her Body ! I am engaged to a Lady who is half-Spanish and I see that as a bonus and she has a very Beautiful Soul & Spirit and it is that I love more than her Body ~ OK So my answer to the final question you pose is: YES I would love you for WHO you are Soul & Spirit ~ the Inner YOU ~ the Real YOU and not just the external BODY you inhabit ~ OK ! Not all MEN think like that but I do and my MUM raised me to respect all Ladies for who THEY ARE INDIVIDUALLY ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) ~ Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B !
June 7th, 2018 19:59
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Love it because you express very frankly what your think REAL LOVE IS and what it is NOT ! In my experience of LOVE some of the things you mention like Youthful Beauty (which you possess !) and Sex are in fact very transient and I observe that they fade with AGE ~ I am still Young ! In a LADY I look at her Character & Personality which is not transient and in fact improves with age. To me the Colour ~ Class ~ Culture etc of my Girl Friends is secondary to the Inner Lady ~ Her Soul and Spirit is what I seek to know not just her Body ! I am engaged to a Lady who is half-Spanish and I see that as a bonus and she has a very Beautiful Soul & Spirit and it is that I love more than her Body ~ OK So my answer to the final question you pose is: YES I would love you for WHO you are Soul & Spirit ~ the Inner YOU ~ the Real YOU and not just the external BODY you inhabit ~ OK ! Not all MEN think like that but I do and my MUM raised me to respect all Ladies for who THEY ARE INDIVIDUALLY ~ OK ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) ~ Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B !
June 7th, 2018 19:59
