Comments received on poems by i-dont-even-know
A New book
SLR said:
About one of my favorite subjects; reading! But what about reading just for enjoyment? That\'s reason alone for me. It doesn\'t always have to have a lesson or teach you something. Great post. I love books, old and new! Although the old ones seem to have so much character. Welcome to MPS! Great first post!
June 11th, 2018 14:58
SLR said:
About one of my favorite subjects; reading! But what about reading just for enjoyment? That\'s reason alone for me. It doesn\'t always have to have a lesson or teach you something. Great post. I love books, old and new! Although the old ones seem to have so much character. Welcome to MPS! Great first post!
June 11th, 2018 14:58
A New book
Lorna said:
I loved every minute of it...... and it shows that far from boring, you have lots to say!
June 11th, 2018 05:21
Lorna said:
I loved every minute of it...... and it shows that far from boring, you have lots to say!
June 11th, 2018 05:21
A New book
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A NEW BOOK ~ One of life\'s great pleasures in the age of E & AUDIO BOOKS ! The pristineness ~ the scent ~ the crispness of the pages ~ the unexplored & unknown contents ~ I am a BIBLIOPHILE so your title intrigued me ! Welcome to MPS and thanks for your first POEM ~ very enjoyable ! TWELVE LINES of REVELATION ! As MICHAEL has already observed it is: Fresh ~ Imaginative ~ a Pleasure ! The first five lines excite my senses and the next seven (a perfect number ?) are fraught with self abnegation ~ it is this that makes the Poem excellent and you interesting ~ we await your next confession ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK) MPS works by mutual reading & comment ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
June 11th, 2018 01:52
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
A NEW BOOK ~ One of life\'s great pleasures in the age of E & AUDIO BOOKS ! The pristineness ~ the scent ~ the crispness of the pages ~ the unexplored & unknown contents ~ I am a BIBLIOPHILE so your title intrigued me ! Welcome to MPS and thanks for your first POEM ~ very enjoyable ! TWELVE LINES of REVELATION ! As MICHAEL has already observed it is: Fresh ~ Imaginative ~ a Pleasure ! The first five lines excite my senses and the next seven (a perfect number ?) are fraught with self abnegation ~ it is this that makes the Poem excellent and you interesting ~ we await your next confession ! Thanks for sharing ~ more please ! Yours BRIAN (UK) MPS works by mutual reading & comment ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B !
June 11th, 2018 01:52
A New book
Michael Edwards said:
It may not reach your expectations but that doesn\'t matter. It is fresh and imaginative and a pleasure to read. It has a subject about something outside personal emotional experience which is where so many new poets start out - in other words you are not using it as a form of personal therapy. You are writing out of a love for the written word and it shows - do continue to write and the more you do the more you will enjoy it and get drawn in..
June 11th, 2018 01:11
Michael Edwards said:
It may not reach your expectations but that doesn\'t matter. It is fresh and imaginative and a pleasure to read. It has a subject about something outside personal emotional experience which is where so many new poets start out - in other words you are not using it as a form of personal therapy. You are writing out of a love for the written word and it shows - do continue to write and the more you do the more you will enjoy it and get drawn in..
June 11th, 2018 01:11
