Comments received on poems by olivergreenwood20



Lion
SLR said:

Sometimes the only way to affect a change is to show them the error of their ways. Really like this one. Powerful message.

January 9th, 2019 22:21

FUCK YOU
sylviasearcher said:

Oh this hurt.

October 16th, 2018 07:16

FUCK YOU
JB said:

Bro are you okay?

October 15th, 2018 12:29

That Promised Tomorrow
Heartwriter said:

I agree one hundred percent. Great write.

June 29th, 2018 11:09

Flames
SLR said:

I love how this ends. So many don\'t appreciate friends and family. This shows how it can turn around on them. Great piece.

June 27th, 2018 15:59

Flames
sjc513 said:

Love the emotion great work

June 27th, 2018 11:25

Eden
Frogspoetry said:

Very good description of Eden.And that is where the evil came into our lives.the trickery and defeat
May the Lord come soon.Amen.

June 26th, 2018 18:39

InSaNiTy
sylviasearcher said:

What if you were not made?
What if you were simply free from the delusion of \'knowing\' your mind.
What if everyone else is mad?

June 26th, 2018 01:10

Marble Soul
SLR said:

This is beautiful. Tragic but beautiful. Great work.

June 22nd, 2018 14:14

Marble Soul
sylviasearcher said:

😢

June 22nd, 2018 12:18

Loves Confusion
sylviasearcher said:

Such tortured sentiments.
Sadly that is about where I am at

June 22nd, 2018 12:18

Marble Soul
sylviasearcher said:

😢

June 22nd, 2018 12:16

Cave of Delusions
sylviasearcher said:

You have written so poignantly of the crushing realisation of the hopelessness of hope

June 22nd, 2018 12:14

Loves Confusion
SLR said:

This is really good. Very well written.Great job.

June 21st, 2018 12:24