Comments received on poems by olivergreenwood20
Lion
SLR said:
Sometimes the only way to affect a change is to show them the error of their ways. Really like this one. Powerful message.
January 9th, 2019 22:21
SLR said:
Sometimes the only way to affect a change is to show them the error of their ways. Really like this one. Powerful message.
January 9th, 2019 22:21
That Promised Tomorrow
Heartwriter said:
I agree one hundred percent. Great write.
June 29th, 2018 11:09
Heartwriter said:
I agree one hundred percent. Great write.
June 29th, 2018 11:09
Flames
SLR said:
I love how this ends. So many don\'t appreciate friends and family. This shows how it can turn around on them. Great piece.
June 27th, 2018 15:59
SLR said:
I love how this ends. So many don\'t appreciate friends and family. This shows how it can turn around on them. Great piece.
June 27th, 2018 15:59
Eden
Frogspoetry said:
Very good description of Eden.And that is where the evil came into our lives.the trickery and defeat
May the Lord come soon.Amen.
June 26th, 2018 18:39
Frogspoetry said:
Very good description of Eden.And that is where the evil came into our lives.the trickery and defeat
May the Lord come soon.Amen.
June 26th, 2018 18:39
InSaNiTy
sylviasearcher said:
What if you were not made?
What if you were simply free from the delusion of \'knowing\' your mind.
What if everyone else is mad?
June 26th, 2018 01:10
sylviasearcher said:
What if you were not made?
What if you were simply free from the delusion of \'knowing\' your mind.
What if everyone else is mad?
June 26th, 2018 01:10
Loves Confusion
sylviasearcher said:
Such tortured sentiments.
Sadly that is about where I am at
June 22nd, 2018 12:18
sylviasearcher said:
Such tortured sentiments.
Sadly that is about where I am at
June 22nd, 2018 12:18
Cave of Delusions
sylviasearcher said:
You have written so poignantly of the crushing realisation of the hopelessness of hope
June 22nd, 2018 12:14
sylviasearcher said:
You have written so poignantly of the crushing realisation of the hopelessness of hope
June 22nd, 2018 12:14