Comments received on poems by OldPine



These days
Goldfinch60 said:

Freedom of the mind does not need money, good write.

July 18th, 2018 23:49

These days
a__pott said:

I love this poem! A forever favorite. Well thought out and beautifully written!

July 18th, 2018 16:49

These days
Heartwriter said:

Sometimes the ones that say the most. Had the least to say. While the ones who say the least. Had the most to say. Guality, not guanity. Yes, money strains the mind when not handled correctly. Money will never make anyone happy. Fly free bird fly. Loved your analogy. Super thoughts.

July 18th, 2018 15:19

These days
G84 said:

Couldn’t agree more, internal freedom removes the cloud and everything becomes clear

Love it

July 18th, 2018 14:56

Desire in the shadows
little dove said:

beautiful

July 18th, 2018 14:51

These days
little dove said:

i like the point you have expressed in this poem , well expressed.

July 18th, 2018 14:32

Desire in the shadows
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful loving write. Welcome to MPS.

July 5th, 2018 07:57

Desire in the shadows
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME \"OP\" thanks for your first Poem ! It is very elegant in its STRUCTURE ~ 5 balanced Quatrains with a consistent Rhyme Pattern {xaxa xbxb etc) and the use of Repetition in verses 1 3 5 ~ Excellent to read & recite ! Love the Subject ~ the symbiosis of LOVE & LIFE. MPS works by reading & commenting each others Poems ~ Poems are only posted for ONE DAY. Thanks for sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my site ~ Thanks B !

July 5th, 2018 04:21

Desire in the shadows
sylviasearcher said:

What a beautiful poem

July 5th, 2018 03:16