Comments received on poems by Sofie
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Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Writing will help you overcome some of the troubles within you as you can lose yourself in words.
Welcome to MPS.
July 11th, 2018 00:29
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write. Writing will help you overcome some of the troubles within you as you can lose yourself in words.
Welcome to MPS.
July 11th, 2018 00:29
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Blackhawkwings said:
Gee whiz, Sophie - Your poem touch the hidden wounds in my heart, from years of trying to forget, my first hurt by my ex-wife, the one I thought was with me to eternity. So, touching and sad. yet, you\'re overcome and already healing. Best of luck.
July 10th, 2018 20:20
Blackhawkwings said:
Gee whiz, Sophie - Your poem touch the hidden wounds in my heart, from years of trying to forget, my first hurt by my ex-wife, the one I thought was with me to eternity. So, touching and sad. yet, you\'re overcome and already healing. Best of luck.
July 10th, 2018 20:20
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Jenn2009 said:
Thanks Sophie for laying your heart out there. This poem made me cry while reading it. It brought up a lot of emotions. Things from my past. Keep writing looking forward to the next .❤💜💙💚
July 10th, 2018 18:17
Jenn2009 said:
Thanks Sophie for laying your heart out there. This poem made me cry while reading it. It brought up a lot of emotions. Things from my past. Keep writing looking forward to the next .❤💜💙💚
July 10th, 2018 18:17
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SOPHIE ~ Thanks for your first poem. very elegant in its structure ~ but very Personal and Sad in its Subject. This is a very empathetic and caring site ~ I trust you found baring your heart and sharing your soul CATHARTIC ~ OK. My MUM always taught me to treat Ladies with great respect and I always have. You are all precious in God\'s sight and you should be equally precious in our sight also ! Predatory Men have no idea the damage they inflict on innocent Young Ladies. I am a Lecturer & Student Counsellor in a Vocational College and abuse in their Teens & pre-Teens affects them forever ~ as you sate in your Poem. All to often the abuse is by someone they know and trust which makes it even worse ! The scenario you describe in your poem is very descriptive of the way Evil Men \"groom\" GIRLS who trust them. As a Gentleman the penalty i would advocate would be clinical castration ~ do you agree. Thanks for having he courage to share ~ Every Blessing ~ yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ thanks B !
July 10th, 2018 17:57
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SOPHIE ~ Thanks for your first poem. very elegant in its structure ~ but very Personal and Sad in its Subject. This is a very empathetic and caring site ~ I trust you found baring your heart and sharing your soul CATHARTIC ~ OK. My MUM always taught me to treat Ladies with great respect and I always have. You are all precious in God\'s sight and you should be equally precious in our sight also ! Predatory Men have no idea the damage they inflict on innocent Young Ladies. I am a Lecturer & Student Counsellor in a Vocational College and abuse in their Teens & pre-Teens affects them forever ~ as you sate in your Poem. All to often the abuse is by someone they know and trust which makes it even worse ! The scenario you describe in your poem is very descriptive of the way Evil Men \"groom\" GIRLS who trust them. As a Gentleman the penalty i would advocate would be clinical castration ~ do you agree. Thanks for having he courage to share ~ Every Blessing ~ yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ thanks B !
July 10th, 2018 17:57
