Comments received on poems by serenity-poetry



The Faces of Insomnia
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Great Poem!
P.S.
I am a nocturnal as well.
A generic mutation called the \"after hrs gene\" may explain why (Science journal today)
in case it applies to you, just sharing.
Blessings!
;)

August 9th, 2018 17:48

The Faces of Insomnia
Reyas said:

During my high school years I’d stay up super late watching YouTube videos, just so where I wouldn’t have to close my eyes and let my thoughts speak. Very well done, you’re obviously very talented.

August 9th, 2018 17:19

The Faces of Insomnia
w c said:

Enjoyed it! Insomnia can be a good thing.

August 9th, 2018 15:43

You see her
Crystal Hope said:

Your last stanza was my favorite. Bravo on this piece!

August 8th, 2018 21:42

Human Nature
Crystal Hope said:

Really awesome write!

August 7th, 2018 21:38

Human Nature
Brother_Kane said:

Really good catchy little poem the only thing I will say is instead of enthral simply “be” seems more flowing and hard hitting or tho there’s nothing wrong with enthral either thanks for sharing

August 7th, 2018 13:37

Human Nature
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Very CooL!
P.S.
Love how you incorporated the ALL in the human existence, and at the same time the reasons why perhaps we can\'t truly be perfect at all times.

Blessings!
;)

August 7th, 2018 10:39