Comments received on poems by lcmcfadden

sylviasearcher said:

Oh I wish my son was a lucky one. I worry about his worry!

I think I read the poem two ways. Firstly, the innocence of children, seckndkybthe naivity /ignorance of some in society. Entertained by fake news but not really thinking deeply enough.

Then sometimes the news seems to try to make us worry.

So I refuse to.

Then am I one of them?

I don\'t sleep easy though.

Thought provoking write!

August 22nd, 2018 01:32


Thanks FRIEND for a lovely poem contrasting the innocent sleep of Young Ones whose minds are not burdened with the cares of the WORLD. In the USA parents worry about TRUMP an his administration (Kids dont) and its the same in t he UK with BREXIT. We should all do all we can to preserve the Innocence of Childhood ~ their time to worry will come soon enough ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN

August 21st, 2018 17:14

Unsub said:


I believe you are the lucky one for not falling in with the herd & accepting the falshehoods thrust upon them.

You may not sleep as well; but at least you are an individual with the ability to think for yourself.

Sweety dreams?


August 21st, 2018 16:46

Crystal Hope said:

Awe. A beautiful piece.

August 15th, 2018 23:12

Sweet release
jayb_garang said:


August 13th, 2018 04:23


WELCOME FRIEND ~ I LIKE ALL YOUR POEMS ~ VERY CHALLENGING ~ But I like this one best of all ! We all seek for Happiness but it can be elusive ! Your poem says we sometimes take Happiness for granted and it\'s only when its gone ~ that we appreciate WHAT (and WHO) it was (the source of our Happiness) that we had. You indicate that you know that Happiness is always available if we eliminate the NEGATIVE and reach out & grasp it ~ AMEN ~ I am old enough (35) to know that NEGATIVITY destroys and HAPPINESS restores ! After reading (and digesting) your lovely Poem I resolve to eliminate all the NEGATIVES in my LIFE and replace them with HAPPINESS ~ AMEN Thanks for caring & sharing. I share my site with my FIANCEE ANGELA but she is in New Zealand for a YEAR ~ but we are both as HAPPY as we can be and I am flying out to her for a fortnight on the 18th of AUGUST ! Your MPS FRIEND ~ BRIAN

August 11th, 2018 18:37

Sweet release
H. Ray Davis said:


August 11th, 2018 17:41

Slowly all ot Once
H. Ray Davis said:

Very well written! I felt the pain in it. Thank you

August 11th, 2018 17:37

Crystal Hope said:

Fantastic and true piece. Nice work

August 10th, 2018 00:17

Yorelzinala said:

Uplifting and brilliant!

August 9th, 2018 21:48