Comments received on poems by misskay
A darkened world
dusk arising said:
I\'ve worked backwards through your works published on MPS today and i\'m so pleased to see you also have a clout at politics in your poetry.
There are many many injustices for us to address. Looking forward to more from you.
August 19th, 2018 01:03
dusk arising said:
I\'ve worked backwards through your works published on MPS today and i\'m so pleased to see you also have a clout at politics in your poetry.
There are many many injustices for us to address. Looking forward to more from you.
August 19th, 2018 01:03
A darkened world
dusk arising said:
I\'ve worked backwards through your works published on MPS today and i\'m so pleased to see you also have a clout at politics in your poetry.
There are many many injustices for us to address. Looking forward to more from you.
August 19th, 2018 01:03
dusk arising said:
I\'ve worked backwards through your works published on MPS today and i\'m so pleased to see you also have a clout at politics in your poetry.
There are many many injustices for us to address. Looking forward to more from you.
August 19th, 2018 01:03
You have a way with me
dusk arising said:
Magnificent, lovely, delicate... oh dammit its brilliant!
Should be made into a song with some beautiful impish voiced girlie teasing the camera crew.
Another of yours goes to my favourites.
August 19th, 2018 00:57
dusk arising said:
Magnificent, lovely, delicate... oh dammit its brilliant!
Should be made into a song with some beautiful impish voiced girlie teasing the camera crew.
Another of yours goes to my favourites.
August 19th, 2018 00:57
Princes and a king
dusk arising said:
Quite lovely \"Eyes don’t lie and neither do kisses I’ve nearly fooled them but just near misses\"
This goes into my favourites for sure.
August 19th, 2018 00:50
dusk arising said:
Quite lovely \"Eyes don’t lie and neither do kisses I’ve nearly fooled them but just near misses\"
This goes into my favourites for sure.
August 19th, 2018 00:50
Redirected thoughts to you
dusk arising said:
I\'m so glad i checked you out having seen \'Satan\'s touch\' today.
All those terrible \'i wonder\' questions you dont want to have running thru your mind but cannot stop... loved the way you did this.
August 19th, 2018 00:45
dusk arising said:
I\'m so glad i checked you out having seen \'Satan\'s touch\' today.
All those terrible \'i wonder\' questions you dont want to have running thru your mind but cannot stop... loved the way you did this.
August 19th, 2018 00:45
Satan’s touch
dusk arising said:
Wow! Your intensity of feeling comes across so readily through your phrasing and words. Got to see more of your work.
August 19th, 2018 00:41
dusk arising said:
Wow! Your intensity of feeling comes across so readily through your phrasing and words. Got to see more of your work.
August 19th, 2018 00:41
Satan’s touch
misskay said:
Thank you fineB I really appreciate that :) I considered giving it up this morning tbh
August 18th, 2018 08:54
misskay said:
Thank you fineB I really appreciate that :) I considered giving it up this morning tbh
August 18th, 2018 08:54
Satan’s touch
FineB said:
Brilliant poem MissKay.
Satan can be indeed be seductive and unscrupulous in the way he attacks us.
Keep writing
FineB
August 18th, 2018 07:53
FineB said:
Brilliant poem MissKay.
Satan can be indeed be seductive and unscrupulous in the way he attacks us.
Keep writing
FineB
August 18th, 2018 07:53
Redirected thoughts to you
misskay said:
I have loads of these I wrote lately lol
But it adds to my work I guess x
August 17th, 2018 06:22
misskay said:
I have loads of these I wrote lately lol
But it adds to my work I guess x
August 17th, 2018 06:22
I NEED YOU
misskay said:
I’m honestly so glad my work is liked so thank you I really appreciate it
August 15th, 2018 06:38
misskay said:
I’m honestly so glad my work is liked so thank you I really appreciate it
August 15th, 2018 06:38
The beauty of life
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS KAY ~ for a wonderful uplifting Poem for a Monday ! I love the Structure & Subject of this delightful Poem. \"I say to myself what a Wonderful World !\"
Your Poem flows well (Rhythm) and has lots & lots of Rhyme. Some of the longer lines (3, 14, 23, 30 & 34) could be split into TWO LINES to give it a better shape. Shape is important in a Printed Poem. Line 46 would need to split into THREE LINES ~ OK.
I love the Areas of Nature you highlight ! Daffodils ~ Birds ~ Children ~ Autumn leaves, colour & texture ~ Snow (awesome) ~ Hugs & Laughter ~ Sun & Clouds ~ Roses ~ Butterflies ~ Moon ~ Land & Trees ~ New Born Babies (Miracles) ~ Love Ones !
STOP ~ THINK ~ APPRECIATE ~ Awesome Poem ~ Sound advice ~ LOVE IT Thanks for sharing ~ YOURS BRIAN
I share this site with my Fiancee ANGELA who is on a Work Placement in New Zealand for a YEAR. Please check her POEM Today ~ \"Seven More NZ Quirks\" ~ Thanks BRIAN 1
August 13th, 2018 13:27
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
THANKS KAY ~ for a wonderful uplifting Poem for a Monday ! I love the Structure & Subject of this delightful Poem. \"I say to myself what a Wonderful World !\"
Your Poem flows well (Rhythm) and has lots & lots of Rhyme. Some of the longer lines (3, 14, 23, 30 & 34) could be split into TWO LINES to give it a better shape. Shape is important in a Printed Poem. Line 46 would need to split into THREE LINES ~ OK.
I love the Areas of Nature you highlight ! Daffodils ~ Birds ~ Children ~ Autumn leaves, colour & texture ~ Snow (awesome) ~ Hugs & Laughter ~ Sun & Clouds ~ Roses ~ Butterflies ~ Moon ~ Land & Trees ~ New Born Babies (Miracles) ~ Love Ones !
STOP ~ THINK ~ APPRECIATE ~ Awesome Poem ~ Sound advice ~ LOVE IT Thanks for sharing ~ YOURS BRIAN
I share this site with my Fiancee ANGELA who is on a Work Placement in New Zealand for a YEAR. Please check her POEM Today ~ \"Seven More NZ Quirks\" ~ Thanks BRIAN 1
August 13th, 2018 13:27
The beauty of life
Crystal Hope said:
this is such a fine and lovely poem. Nice writing!
August 13th, 2018 12:16
Crystal Hope said:
this is such a fine and lovely poem. Nice writing!
August 13th, 2018 12:16
The beauty of life
misskay said:
Thank you, I’m aware it needs work such as the formatting etc I’m just starting out so I will learn to get all that right
August 13th, 2018 06:29
misskay said:
Thank you, I’m aware it needs work such as the formatting etc I’m just starting out so I will learn to get all that right
August 13th, 2018 06:29
A darkened world
misskay said:
Hi Brian and Angela.
Thank you for your comments.
I’m afraid all my work is rhyming couplets.
August 12th, 2018 10:09
misskay said:
Hi Brian and Angela.
Thank you for your comments.
I’m afraid all my work is rhyming couplets.
August 12th, 2018 10:09
A darkened world
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KAY ~ Thanks for your first poem with mainly rhyming couplets and good rhythm. A very SAD but TRUE subject !. The rape of Planet earth & Humanity on every continent ! VERSE 1. is an overview of the inhuman behaviour all over the World. God created a VERY GOOD WORLD and Man & Satan & Sin has perverted it into a VERY BAD WORLD ! VERSE 2. I can\'t watch the NEWS either ~ it\'s mainly BAD NEWS (or FALSE NEWS !). I agree crimes against people are horrendous and the PUNISHMENT ~ no longer fits the CRIME. Without a deterrent Criminals will just get worse & worse ! Thanks for your concern ~ this is an empathetic site and most will agree with you. Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check our site & Poems ~ Thanks B & A
August 12th, 2018 09:58
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME KAY ~ Thanks for your first poem with mainly rhyming couplets and good rhythm. A very SAD but TRUE subject !. The rape of Planet earth & Humanity on every continent ! VERSE 1. is an overview of the inhuman behaviour all over the World. God created a VERY GOOD WORLD and Man & Satan & Sin has perverted it into a VERY BAD WORLD ! VERSE 2. I can\'t watch the NEWS either ~ it\'s mainly BAD NEWS (or FALSE NEWS !). I agree crimes against people are horrendous and the PUNISHMENT ~ no longer fits the CRIME. Without a deterrent Criminals will just get worse & worse ! Thanks for your concern ~ this is an empathetic site and most will agree with you. Yours BRIAN & ANGELA. Please check our site & Poems ~ Thanks B & A
August 12th, 2018 09:58
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