Comments received on poems by Mirrorphen
The Ghost in the Shadows
dusk arising said:
The frustration and pain of this piece really call out. There is torture of unanswered questions, unfulfilled dreams and aspiration. And sad making do with palliative concession.
It\'s taken a lot of life and living to write a piece like this and i found it compelling reading.
More please.
January 25th, 2020 05:15
dusk arising said:
The frustration and pain of this piece really call out. There is torture of unanswered questions, unfulfilled dreams and aspiration. And sad making do with palliative concession.
It\'s taken a lot of life and living to write a piece like this and i found it compelling reading.
More please.
January 25th, 2020 05:15
Leave me alone.
orchidee said:
Cccooeeee lol. Oops, I didn\'t leave you alone. I\'m a pest! heehee.
September 20th, 2018 11:22
orchidee said:
Cccooeeee lol. Oops, I didn\'t leave you alone. I\'m a pest! heehee.
September 20th, 2018 11:22
Trust yourself. Love yourself.
Laura🌻 said:
Ally,
This write resonates with my beliefs! Your message is abundantly clear! First and foremost...love and trust yourself. This is your safety net! Once that’s established, then you can scrupulously allow someone else to share a bit of your world!
~Laura~
September 19th, 2018 11:28
Laura🌻 said:
Ally,
This write resonates with my beliefs! Your message is abundantly clear! First and foremost...love and trust yourself. This is your safety net! Once that’s established, then you can scrupulously allow someone else to share a bit of your world!
~Laura~
September 19th, 2018 11:28
Water
sylviasearcher said:
Don\'t worry mirrorphen, last I heard they don\'t add fluoride to the water in wales or England! It\'s why our teeth are less beautiful! 🙄😱
Water is a really powerful character in my writing and imaginings. Like you, it symbolises nature and nurture and abundance and growth.
Poetry is the perfect place to make things as they should be!
September 19th, 2018 02:29
sylviasearcher said:
Don\'t worry mirrorphen, last I heard they don\'t add fluoride to the water in wales or England! It\'s why our teeth are less beautiful! 🙄😱
Water is a really powerful character in my writing and imaginings. Like you, it symbolises nature and nurture and abundance and growth.
Poetry is the perfect place to make things as they should be!
September 19th, 2018 02:29
Trees.
dusk arising said:
hmmm..It\'s what we do isn\'t it, we humans. Bosses of the world! Even the sympathetically \'green\' issues supporters are vegetarians... eating plants.
I love trees. Have you ever hugged a tree? Find a tall tree you cant quite get your arms around and give it a good hug for several minutes on a breezy day, you\'ll be amazed how good it feels.
I enjoyed reading your piece today.
September 12th, 2018 12:48
dusk arising said:
hmmm..It\'s what we do isn\'t it, we humans. Bosses of the world! Even the sympathetically \'green\' issues supporters are vegetarians... eating plants.
I love trees. Have you ever hugged a tree? Find a tall tree you cant quite get your arms around and give it a good hug for several minutes on a breezy day, you\'ll be amazed how good it feels.
I enjoyed reading your piece today.
September 12th, 2018 12:48
Just so cold.
Crystal Hope said:
Such a beautiful and incredibly done write. Well done on imagery
August 18th, 2018 00:15
Crystal Hope said:
Such a beautiful and incredibly done write. Well done on imagery
August 18th, 2018 00:15
