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Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wow! A great poem. Who did you have in mind? :)

October 6th, 2018 11:35

I hate your guts!
Sup said:

Yes I definitely felt the anger that day! Thank you once again for your kind comment.

October 4th, 2018 15:16

I hate your guts!
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Wow, Sup! Your poem is filled with raw emotion, but definitely forces the reader to take notice and to wonder who is the recipient of your wrath?

Great job and keep writing. :)

October 2nd, 2018 15:05

Death penalty
Sup said:

Thank you! You raise several good points which I didn’t think about, I think the cons outweigh the cons although I tried to come across as neutral.

September 27th, 2018 11:32

Death penalty
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Sup, your poetic words present us with a dilemma. You\'ve given us the food for thought, but we must be the ones to digest it and offer an opinion. That\'s hard for some of us.

I was for the death penalty decades ago, then after having taken a course in Criminology, visiting a Federal prison in New York and speaking with inmates, I changed my mind. Some prisoners were chronic liars, some were childlike, some were hardened criminals, but there were also some who, in fact, framed.

DNA is not always conclusive. So, what happens if an innocent person is killed in error? I know I couldn\'t live with that weight on my heart.

And from a religious perspective we must honor the words of the Almighty: \"Vengeance is mine sayeth the Lord.\"

Having said that I would probably not advocate for capital punishment, but neither do I believe hardened criminals should lead a life of Riley either.

Great poem! :)

September 26th, 2018 15:39

Memories that make you die inside.
Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet said:

Sup, what that pupil did to you was absolutely awful. I\'m surprised you were able to get through it.

You\'ve expressed the scene so beautifully with words. I liked this poem. :)

I deleted my post on the other poem, since I misunderstood your point.

September 26th, 2018 12:02

Dear lord,
orchidee said:

A fine write Sup. Yes, it would not be faith if we could see everything visibly. doh! Also, a Bible verse asks: \'Who hopes for what they see? But if we hope for what we do not see, we hope for it with patience (and in faith)\'.
Some atheists won\'t have it though. They will argue black is white.

September 20th, 2018 01:29

Dear lord,
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

Amen Sup, there are none so deaf as those who do not wish to hear. but it is when one sees that god is in everything can you know and start to listen

September 19th, 2018 15:43

You annoy me!
Goldfinch60 said:

Some people are just like that, I know of one person that is just like the one you describe.

September 19th, 2018 00:53

Marijuana
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliant! I feel paranoia only comes when you feel judged. Weed is a medicine and should be seen as such.

September 12th, 2018 02:17

My social anxiety
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliantly done with a powerful eneding
I could feel the raw emotions in this
I\'ve honestly grown so much being here
More than I ever knew.

Thank you for expressing your self
And coming here to share
I hope many follow after you

September 1st, 2018 10:24

A life with OCD
Poetic Dan said:

More than relates my head was just nodding away
I hope you find relief and fine tune your perfect gift
You may not see it as this but in time you\'ll see you fit

Much love and respect
Thanks for the openness

September 1st, 2018 10:16

My social anxiety
orchidee said:

And now you\'ve met us lot! heehee.How are we?
I know what you mean. But doesn\'t it get better the second time you meet people?

August 27th, 2018 10:33

My social anxiety
swyndell said:

Great first poem! Strong vocabulary, and pretty consistent. I found the topic interesting and relatable, considering I also have strong social anxiety. Glad to have you here at MPS, I hope you enjoy it here. ^^
Jinxy~

August 27th, 2018 10:27

My social anxiety
Netashi said:

Good first poem, the rhythm of it was good. Welcome to MPS and I hope you have a wonderful stay here.
-Theta

August 27th, 2018 10:06