Comments received on poems by chaaz



Fix my broken soul
Clark said:

This is very sweet. I can see how this boy understood you, allowed you to open up with your true emotions and made you feel like you no longer had to hide yourself behind the pills. I\'m so glad you had a person like that.

February 16th, 2019 23:22

Fix my broken soul
Goldfinch60 said:

Those feelings must always be released so that the person you are blossoms into your future.

October 5th, 2018 00:36

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BRIAN & ANGELA said:

HI CHAAZ ~ Welcome to MPS ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ Well written but a sad subject ! We all have MONSTERS and they dont disappear but sometimes they go away for a while ! SUICIDE is not the answer ~ we only have one life and its too precious to waste. I overcome my MONSTERS by being more Spiritual and the Power of Positive thinking. There are lots of nice POEMS on my site (which i share with my Fiancee ANGELA) which you are welcome to enjoy ! The way MPS works is we read each others Poems and comment. You can aslo build up a group of MPS FRIENDS ~ OK ~ Thanks for caring and sharing your poem. YOURS BRIAN (UK) Angela is in New Zealand on a work exchange ! I have added you as an MPS FRIEND ~ OK

October 3rd, 2018 11:10

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Netashi said:

Very emotional, welcome to Mps, very nice first poem

October 3rd, 2018 10:37