Comments received on poems by Unobtrusive Sun

Plundering Rook
sylviasearcher said:

And what a worthy contribution!

Added layers with each read, 😌

July 10th, 2019 01:40

Michael Edwards said:

This is the first of your postings I have read and I\'m not disappointed - what a powerful and absorbing work - will look at your other postings.

October 8th, 2018 03:47

The Observer
sylviasearcher said:

You have a way of telling a story in prose.
A story of being. A story of the unseeing.

October 8th, 2018 02:26

sylviasearcher said:

What a powerful write.

The silent ringing of the conscience
The forebearing completion of an undelivered lie
Decalcify the solitude

Just a few of my favourite lines

I wish these feelings were kept to the midnight hours. Sometimes they are all consuming ...

October 8th, 2018 02:25

The Six O\'clock Offering
vanabba3 said:

Wow! I really like this one, it\'s more mysterious, and I like that! Yes, I did get the biblical references. Curious about your statement about not being \"entirely Christian\".

October 7th, 2018 23:40

The Observer
vanabba3 said:

Enjoyed this, had to read a couple of times, very mysterious from beginning to end... Nice work!

October 6th, 2018 20:14