Comments received on poems by Unobtrusive Sun
Plundering Rook
sylviasearcher said:
And what a worthy contribution!
Added layers with each read, 😌
July 10th, 2019 01:40
sylviasearcher said:
And what a worthy contribution!
Added layers with each read, 😌
July 10th, 2019 01:40
Encroachment
Michael Edwards said:
This is the first of your postings I have read and I\'m not disappointed - what a powerful and absorbing work - will look at your other postings.
October 8th, 2018 03:47
Michael Edwards said:
This is the first of your postings I have read and I\'m not disappointed - what a powerful and absorbing work - will look at your other postings.
October 8th, 2018 03:47
The Observer
sylviasearcher said:
You have a way of telling a story in prose.
A story of being. A story of the unseeing.
October 8th, 2018 02:26
sylviasearcher said:
You have a way of telling a story in prose.
A story of being. A story of the unseeing.
October 8th, 2018 02:26
Encroachment
sylviasearcher said:
What a powerful write.
The silent ringing of the conscience
The forebearing completion of an undelivered lie
Decalcify the solitude
Just a few of my favourite lines
I wish these feelings were kept to the midnight hours. Sometimes they are all consuming ...
October 8th, 2018 02:25
sylviasearcher said:
What a powerful write.
The silent ringing of the conscience
The forebearing completion of an undelivered lie
Decalcify the solitude
Just a few of my favourite lines
I wish these feelings were kept to the midnight hours. Sometimes they are all consuming ...
October 8th, 2018 02:25
The Six O\'clock Offering
vanabba3 said:
Wow! I really like this one, it\'s more mysterious, and I like that! Yes, I did get the biblical references. Curious about your statement about not being \"entirely Christian\".
October 7th, 2018 23:40
vanabba3 said:
Wow! I really like this one, it\'s more mysterious, and I like that! Yes, I did get the biblical references. Curious about your statement about not being \"entirely Christian\".
October 7th, 2018 23:40
The Observer
vanabba3 said:
Enjoyed this, had to read a couple of times, very mysterious from beginning to end... Nice work!
October 6th, 2018 20:14
vanabba3 said:
Enjoyed this, had to read a couple of times, very mysterious from beginning to end... Nice work!
October 6th, 2018 20:14
