The sun and the moon
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME KAYCAT ~ Thanks for your first poem which is elegantly penned & spaced. I love Astral Poems and yours is a GEM.
In Planet Earths annual cycle around the SUN ~ both the SUN & MOON are very important as LIGHT SOURCES (think of Early Mans reliance on Moonlight) they also controlled the Seasons ~ Tides etc and of course the Sun also provides Heat. Most of us work in the DAY and feel safe in the DAY. I love SUNRISE but as the Sun sets it becomes twilight and more spooky. I sleep at Night and so escape the things that go BUMP. I have Friends who work at night and sleep in the DAY and like OWLS (and other animals) they become NOCTURNAL and find the DAY too bright ! I love SUNRISE ! Thanks for sharing ~ much Astral Food for Astral Thought ! Please visit our site. YOURS BRIAN & ANGELA The way MPS works is by reading and commenting on each others POEMS. You can also build up a COHORT of MPS Friends

October 12th, 2018 14:47

The sun and the moon
vanabba3 said:

brilliant use of imagery! I loved it! I liked the mix of light and darkness and the usage of astrology in the poem, great flow!

October 11th, 2018 22:52