Comments received on poems by Bonnie
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sorenbarrett said:
Reflections in this poem that have the feel of both being stuck in time and moving on. This conflict leads to reflections of where life is going and how one may handle it. It settles on how one handles conflict and the internalization of it. I leaves a most uncertain feel. Nicely written
May 23rd, 2025 04:54
sorenbarrett said:
Reflections in this poem that have the feel of both being stuck in time and moving on. This conflict leads to reflections of where life is going and how one may handle it. It settles on how one handles conflict and the internalization of it. I leaves a most uncertain feel. Nicely written
May 23rd, 2025 04:54
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Poetic Licence said:
It\'s a massive step moving out of being a teen and can feel scary and lonely, as you dont have the support you have when you are in school. Also a sense in this write of blaming themselves for other people\'s unhappiness, instead of valueing there own, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 02:33
Poetic Licence said:
It\'s a massive step moving out of being a teen and can feel scary and lonely, as you dont have the support you have when you are in school. Also a sense in this write of blaming themselves for other people\'s unhappiness, instead of valueing there own, nicely expressed and written
May 23rd, 2025 02:33
I think
peto said:
She is lucky to have you
I did notice you managed to make her smile from time to time
I think you are working wonders and now you have here to pour it out
Keep writing
You are a great example to us all
Stevie
From bonnie Scotland
March 5th, 2024 13:45
peto said:
She is lucky to have you
I did notice you managed to make her smile from time to time
I think you are working wonders and now you have here to pour it out
Keep writing
You are a great example to us all
Stevie
From bonnie Scotland
March 5th, 2024 13:45
I think
Cassie58 said:
I felt sad reading your lines Bonnie. I just wanted to say, be yourself. You shouldn’t have to keep pleasing all the time. It!s not your job to make your mum’s happiness. Being young and living at home can at times be problematic. Celebrate the good moments. Have a great Tuesday. I enjoyed reading you.
March 5th, 2024 03:23
Cassie58 said:
I felt sad reading your lines Bonnie. I just wanted to say, be yourself. You shouldn’t have to keep pleasing all the time. It!s not your job to make your mum’s happiness. Being young and living at home can at times be problematic. Celebrate the good moments. Have a great Tuesday. I enjoyed reading you.
March 5th, 2024 03:23
Do I even know myself?
Lorna said:
Don\'t you fret your little head about anything... you are writing very well..... keep it up and don\'t worry about living in reality - in my opinion, it\'s not very nice out there.... time make you more sure of yourself.... you\'ll be fine just as you are.
November 4th, 2018 04:41
Lorna said:
Don\'t you fret your little head about anything... you are writing very well..... keep it up and don\'t worry about living in reality - in my opinion, it\'s not very nice out there.... time make you more sure of yourself.... you\'ll be fine just as you are.
November 4th, 2018 04:41
Do I even know myself?
Goldfinch60 said:
Help is always there, some people just do not recognise the problems.
November 4th, 2018 01:27
Goldfinch60 said:
Help is always there, some people just do not recognise the problems.
November 4th, 2018 01:27
Do I even know myself?
Laura🌻 said:
Forgotten,
It happens to all of us. We smile to show others that we’re happy when in reality we’re really not! We smile not to cry!
~Laura~
November 3rd, 2018 23:01
Laura🌻 said:
Forgotten,
It happens to all of us. We smile to show others that we’re happy when in reality we’re really not! We smile not to cry!
~Laura~
November 3rd, 2018 23:01
All for love...why
Lorna said:
I just love it.... (few things: 1st line did you mean \"me\" by my will (not my) and \"Comfort\" instead of \"Confort\" - typos)? Please write more!
November 2nd, 2018 05:33
Lorna said:
I just love it.... (few things: 1st line did you mean \"me\" by my will (not my) and \"Comfort\" instead of \"Confort\" - typos)? Please write more!
November 2nd, 2018 05:33
