Comments received on poems by TheLovers
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psychofemale said:
I agree I can make connections with this as well. thanks
January 9th, 2019 21:48
psychofemale said:
I agree I can make connections with this as well. thanks
January 9th, 2019 21:48
A Poisoned Universe
psychofemale said:
this was brilliant :) welcome, I am new too!
January 7th, 2019 21:30
psychofemale said:
this was brilliant :) welcome, I am new too!
January 7th, 2019 21:30
A Poisoned Universe
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME TO MPS AZAZEL ! Thanks for your first very intersting Poem. It is exceallent in its structure and subject ! Four balanced stanzas relating to the destruction of LIFE and LOVE ~ A Poisoned Universe indeaed ! As a Scientist ~ I like the way each stanza begins with one of the FOUR ANCIENT Elements ~ FIRE ~ WATER ~ EARTH & AIR. The latter three are the Terrestrial Spheres tht are under threat from man made Pollution ! In the way we will make the EARTH uninhabitable for Humans and there is NOWHERE ELSE to go ! Scientists are concerned but by 2100 (you will be 97 !) it will be much worse ! Im 35 so i will be 97 in 2080. You call yourself a LONELY SCIENTIST ~ but you are not alone and Applied Science & Technology can help to preserve Planet Earth for a little longer. We all need to be a little greener ! Your FRIEND ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my site ~ Thanks. ANGELA is my Fiancee ~ at present working in NEW ZEALAND
January 7th, 2019 18:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME TO MPS AZAZEL ! Thanks for your first very intersting Poem. It is exceallent in its structure and subject ! Four balanced stanzas relating to the destruction of LIFE and LOVE ~ A Poisoned Universe indeaed ! As a Scientist ~ I like the way each stanza begins with one of the FOUR ANCIENT Elements ~ FIRE ~ WATER ~ EARTH & AIR. The latter three are the Terrestrial Spheres tht are under threat from man made Pollution ! In the way we will make the EARTH uninhabitable for Humans and there is NOWHERE ELSE to go ! Scientists are concerned but by 2100 (you will be 97 !) it will be much worse ! Im 35 so i will be 97 in 2080. You call yourself a LONELY SCIENTIST ~ but you are not alone and Applied Science & Technology can help to preserve Planet Earth for a little longer. We all need to be a little greener ! Your FRIEND ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my site ~ Thanks. ANGELA is my Fiancee ~ at present working in NEW ZEALAND
January 7th, 2019 18:27