Comments received on poems by Caleb.A



Borrowed Love
Gary Edward Geraci said:

I love the in-your-face reality of this work Caleb. Good old counterfeit love - the stuff of the sexual revolution that leaves more people depressed and suicidal than we can ever try to comprehend. Ah, those lower appetites - how they are a gnawing thorn in my side!

September 21st, 2019 20:04

Borrowed Love
Goldfinch60 said:

Love has so many ways of showing itself, I can understand fully your fathers love for your mother.

May 18th, 2019 00:22

Borrowed Love
Kasia Kevan said:

That is very lovely. You have shown what the meaning of true love is. Great writing x

May 17th, 2019 07:08

Borrowed Love
FineB said:

Hello Caleb,

A charming and great poem on love and all its dimensions.

Thank you.

Keep writing
FineB

May 17th, 2019 05:39

Borrowed Love
Fay Slimm said:

Love is as your well-chosen words describe it here Caleb - a treasure that no money can buy. A read to remember.

May 17th, 2019 04:45

Borrowed Love
dusk arising said:

Your piece today brought to mind a fellow i know in his late years, sound of mind and body, committed to the love of his ailing wife.
Yes that is love. Love beyond my experience but not a love beyond my understanding.

A very moving piece indeed.

May 17th, 2019 04:26

Tales of the day
Claudelle DeLuna said:

very nice!
great ending the here and now! yes!!
👌✌

March 27th, 2019 10:17

Lost in a cage
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Nicely done..Good read!

February 13th, 2019 20:28

Lost in a cage
Chocolate said:

It\'s a pretty good piece, but I think it would have been better if you expanded more on what price and/or freedom is.

February 10th, 2019 21:57

Lost in a cage
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

ANother great work..see. they get better every time.i am going to friend request you so that we can stay better connected

February 9th, 2019 04:21

Lost in a cage
Goldfinch60 said:

Yes \"Real freedom lives from within\" and we need that freedom within us to keep us sane.

February 9th, 2019 01:25

Lost in a cage
orchidee said:

A fine write Caleb.

February 8th, 2019 15:05

Lost in a cage
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Excellent poem! Caleb
Powerful
Sometimes the path to decision
Is quite a journey!
😊💖✌

February 8th, 2019 13:53

Lost in a cage
Joseph M Marion said:

Price for freedom is not ever seen in ful only talked of , only soldiers one charged filled with rage torn before his heart country and rules never to return the same it worn away to depth not seen only one that lives it knows no end very well written 😁

February 8th, 2019 13:28

Lost in a cage
Theta the scholar said:

Very well written keep up the good work. FREEDOM ISN\'T FREE.
- T

February 8th, 2019 12:51

Evergreen pastures
Jason Vancelette (AKA Pharaoh33) said:

Your Imagery is very vivid here...You can definitely write brutha, and I can see hyour work getting more and more intense as you develop your skill...the onlhy way to develop it is to never hold back a single word or thought..I never do..i have written a few things that I read back on and even shocked myself at how vividly it was depicted..anyway..keep em coming

February 8th, 2019 01:10

Evergreen pastures
psychofemale said:

great words.

February 7th, 2019 20:03

Evergreen pastures
Chocolate said:

This is pretty good.

February 7th, 2019 18:42

Evergreen pastures
Joseph M Marion said:

Very good like it don\'t stop very deep

February 7th, 2019 18:29

Evergreen pastures
she_was_torture said:

This is cool, good job

February 7th, 2019 15:53

Evergreen pastures
Fay Slimm said:

Expression, metre and pace make this tale of pre-birth a special read Caleb.

February 7th, 2019 13:41

Evergreen pastures
Claudelle DeLuna said:

Sublime! Caleb
Wow
I 💖 it....
keep writing & sharing!
😊✌

February 7th, 2019 13:06

Evergreen pastures
Mottakeenur Rehman said:

Great!

February 7th, 2019 12:08

Evergreen pastures
Wilted said:

I find comfort in this write.

February 7th, 2019 12:05

Evergreen pastures
Neville said:

another intriguing poem.. each stanza consisting of three lines and look good on the page.. you lost me once or twice but I think I got back on track .. Neville

February 7th, 2019 11:53

Evergreen pastures
Poetic Dan said:

Really enjoyed this thank you

February 7th, 2019 11:52

Evergreen pastures
Diamond said:

Excellent enigmatic writing. The read though feels to (me) was not effortless, the flow of the \"Sound\" throughout the writing depicts the sequence vividly.

February 7th, 2019 11:48

Evergreen pastures
orchidee said:

Good write Caleb.

February 7th, 2019 11:43

Evergreen pastures
Theta the scholar said:

A fine write.

February 7th, 2019 11:39

A seat beneath the apple tree
Caleb.A said:

thank you very much my friend

February 7th, 2019 11:25

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