Comments received on poems by Mason



Glass
JaydeVictoria said:

What an amazing write...the metaphor is spot on.
Faved!

March 10th, 2019 04:39

The Eyes
JaydeVictoria said:

Wow, the ending is really good to this poem, really good!

March 7th, 2019 07:26

Breathless
elmina said:

i do a lot of public speaking in regards to my personal issues and outlooks on life. this poem was honestly very relatable and put into words perfectly. you are super talented, please keep writing! the best pieces come from the heart, after all!! much love!

March 5th, 2019 23:33

Breathless
orchidee said:

A thoughtful write Mason.
If it was not so real a thing, a joke may diffuse some of the tension:
A guy goes to the doc. Says, \'Doc, I\'m all stressed, nervous, etc\'.
Doc says \'Well move indoors then\'.
The guy replies\' What use will that make?\'
Doc says \'Well, you will stop living outdoors in tents (intense!)\'. lol.

March 5th, 2019 13:52

Breathless
Poetic Dan said:

Brilliantly expressed, I\'m going through the same test!
May facing mine help you and in reverse I thank you!

Much peace and respect
All the best

March 5th, 2019 08:53

Breathless
Fay Slimm said:

An honest write Mason and maybe now it is out and said those tears will be things of the past - - I do hope so.

March 5th, 2019 07:42

Breathless
Neville said:

Never give up.... and here\'s wishing you good luck in your endeavours...

March 5th, 2019 07:30

Classroom
Goldfinch60 said:

Such a true write in this day and age, from what I have seen teachers are no longer treated with respect and so many are giving up their calling because of it.
Welcome to MPS.

March 3rd, 2019 02:10