Comments received on poems by Zhe3_Zhe3
To a friend
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people being killed for no reason, such a sad world highlighted in your wonderful words.
March 7th, 2019 01:08
Goldfinch60 said:
So many people being killed for no reason, such a sad world highlighted in your wonderful words.
March 7th, 2019 01:08
To a friend
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI ZHE3 ~ Sadly it happens every day ~ and the only ones who really cry are the Mothers ! In the USA its GUNS & Trump is very very progun ! In the UK its knives ~ because Guns are illegal ! But if I had a TEEN SON he\'d be just as dead with a Knife through His Heart as with a Bullet ! It happens because Men are Men and if they are challenged they fight back ! If they have a GUN they shoot ~ If they have a KNIFE they stab. There is also the question of GANGS. Growing up as teen in Liverpool 1997 ~ 2002 I experienced some of this but it is much worse today ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Your MPS Friend ~ BRIAN
Your Poem is very well structured ~
good Rhythm and Rhyme (xaxa xbxb etc) !
March 6th, 2019 17:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI ZHE3 ~ Sadly it happens every day ~ and the only ones who really cry are the Mothers ! In the USA its GUNS & Trump is very very progun ! In the UK its knives ~ because Guns are illegal ! But if I had a TEEN SON he\'d be just as dead with a Knife through His Heart as with a Bullet ! It happens because Men are Men and if they are challenged they fight back ! If they have a GUN they shoot ~ If they have a KNIFE they stab. There is also the question of GANGS. Growing up as teen in Liverpool 1997 ~ 2002 I experienced some of this but it is much worse today ! Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Your MPS Friend ~ BRIAN
Your Poem is very well structured ~
good Rhythm and Rhyme (xaxa xbxb etc) !
March 6th, 2019 17:39
One
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes I have been waiting for that day for a very long time, may it come soon.
Welcome to MPS.
March 6th, 2019 01:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Yes I have been waiting for that day for a very long time, may it come soon.
Welcome to MPS.
March 6th, 2019 01:26
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME ZHE3 ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! It reminds me of JOAN BAEZ !
We shall overcome ~ We shall overcome
We shall overcome someday
Deep in my HEART I do believe
We shall overcome someday
We shall live in PEACE .................. !
Your poem is writen in Hope that one Day we will all be one like Martin Luther Kings dream and the songs of Bob Dillon and Joan Baez etc in the 60s ! I wasnt born until 1983 (Angela 1988) but their message (as does yours) echoes down time. Joan is 78 now but still singing the same lines ! The reality is that there will always be Wars & Rumours of Wars and that MANKIND wants to separate rather than UNITE. Lok at the divisions in the USA due to TRUMP and his Wall and the UK separating fromor Europe (BREXIT) and the break up of the Soviet Union (USSR) at the end of the 20th C etc etc.
However ~ despite all this ~ I believe we should all strive & pray for Community ~ National & Global Peace ! If I had any CHILDREN (Angela is my Fiancee) I would strive & pray even harder. What will the World be like in 2100 ?
Thanks for caring ~ Please check our site
Yours through Poetry ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
March 5th, 2019 17:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
WELCOME ZHE3 ~ Thanks for your first Poem ! It reminds me of JOAN BAEZ !
We shall overcome ~ We shall overcome
We shall overcome someday
Deep in my HEART I do believe
We shall overcome someday
We shall live in PEACE .................. !
Your poem is writen in Hope that one Day we will all be one like Martin Luther Kings dream and the songs of Bob Dillon and Joan Baez etc in the 60s ! I wasnt born until 1983 (Angela 1988) but their message (as does yours) echoes down time. Joan is 78 now but still singing the same lines ! The reality is that there will always be Wars & Rumours of Wars and that MANKIND wants to separate rather than UNITE. Lok at the divisions in the USA due to TRUMP and his Wall and the UK separating fromor Europe (BREXIT) and the break up of the Soviet Union (USSR) at the end of the 20th C etc etc.
However ~ despite all this ~ I believe we should all strive & pray for Community ~ National & Global Peace ! If I had any CHILDREN (Angela is my Fiancee) I would strive & pray even harder. What will the World be like in 2100 ?
Thanks for caring ~ Please check our site
Yours through Poetry ~ BRIAN & ANGELA
March 5th, 2019 17:45
