Comments received on poems by A passing lyric
The storm
Goldfinch60 said:
May that storm in their lives become sunlight forever.
December 10th, 2019 01:35
Goldfinch60 said:
May that storm in their lives become sunlight forever.
December 10th, 2019 01:35
Freddy Krueger
orchidee said:
A good write as a poem KK. I read the actor who played Freddy had his own nightmares. I\'m not surprised, after playing such a horrid role. Evil influences rubbed off on him. I can\'t dilute the word \'evil\' here for anything lighter.
October 14th, 2019 01:38
orchidee said:
A good write as a poem KK. I read the actor who played Freddy had his own nightmares. I\'m not surprised, after playing such a horrid role. Evil influences rubbed off on him. I can\'t dilute the word \'evil\' here for anything lighter.
October 14th, 2019 01:38
Over and out
FredPeyer said:
KK, love your poem. I tried to say something similar with my poem \'The party\', published yesterday (I think), but you did it better, shorter, more to the point. Great writing!
October 10th, 2019 20:42
FredPeyer said:
KK, love your poem. I tried to say something similar with my poem \'The party\', published yesterday (I think), but you did it better, shorter, more to the point. Great writing!
October 10th, 2019 20:42
Blue light
Bragee said:
Blue light special...
The things we associate with love make it all the more special
October 6th, 2019 23:15
Bragee said:
Blue light special...
The things we associate with love make it all the more special
October 6th, 2019 23:15
Dance moms
Evergreen said:
I’m cracking up. This was enjoyed much by me lol.
September 26th, 2019 23:14
Evergreen said:
I’m cracking up. This was enjoyed much by me lol.
September 26th, 2019 23:14
I’ll stay quiet
Goldfinch60 said:
I am quite happy to walk beside you and listen.
September 9th, 2019 01:07
Goldfinch60 said:
I am quite happy to walk beside you and listen.
September 9th, 2019 01:07
The sleep walker
Clara said:
This is excellent. Thank you for sharing!
CLARA X
September 8th, 2019 03:04
Clara said:
This is excellent. Thank you for sharing!
CLARA X
September 8th, 2019 03:04
About a girl
SheWasTheSun said:
Love this! So relatable and beautifully put.
September 6th, 2019 00:04
SheWasTheSun said:
Love this! So relatable and beautifully put.
September 6th, 2019 00:04
Just let me live
dusk arising said:
People can be tiresome, too predictable and downright disappointing. I\'m in a similar state of mind myself to be honest.
Refreshing because there is absolutely no hint of a cry for help in your words.
September 4th, 2019 11:02
dusk arising said:
People can be tiresome, too predictable and downright disappointing. I\'m in a similar state of mind myself to be honest.
Refreshing because there is absolutely no hint of a cry for help in your words.
September 4th, 2019 11:02
Just let me live
Clara said:
Sense of frustration with how overwhelming the world can be... Best not to isolate yourself too much for people will stop asking you to be involved.
This flows really well and speaks of a lot more emotion than the words on the screen.
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:23
Clara said:
Sense of frustration with how overwhelming the world can be... Best not to isolate yourself too much for people will stop asking you to be involved.
This flows really well and speaks of a lot more emotion than the words on the screen.
CLARA X
September 4th, 2019 08:23
Michael Jackson
kevin browne said:
Seen him live at Wembley stadium London 1988 and what a performance Jackson put on. The whole show blew my mind. A great tribute poem to the King of pop.
June 24th, 2019 23:05
kevin browne said:
Seen him live at Wembley stadium London 1988 and what a performance Jackson put on. The whole show blew my mind. A great tribute poem to the King of pop.
June 24th, 2019 23:05
Bike ride
Goldfinch60 said:
That first bike ride is the first taste of freedom in your life, may that freedom give you joy.
June 21st, 2019 00:33
Goldfinch60 said:
That first bike ride is the first taste of freedom in your life, may that freedom give you joy.
June 21st, 2019 00:33
Spider Life
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Great POEM *STL* I love SPIDERS ~ They are fascinating creatires and kill lots of harmful insects. I love SIDER WEBS especially in the MORNING when they are bejewelled with DEW ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check our site ~ THANKS
Yours through Poetry ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 13th, 2019 18:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Great POEM *STL* I love SPIDERS ~ They are fascinating creatires and kill lots of harmful insects. I love SIDER WEBS especially in the MORNING when they are bejewelled with DEW ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check our site ~ THANKS
Yours through Poetry ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 13th, 2019 18:23
Spider Life
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Great POEM *STL* I love SPIDERS ~ They are fascinating creatires and kill lots of harmful insects. I love SIDER WEBS especially in the MORNING when they are bejewelled with DEW ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check our site ~ THANKS
Yours through Poetry ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 13th, 2019 18:23
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Great POEM *STL* I love SPIDERS ~ They are fascinating creatires and kill lots of harmful insects. I love SIDER WEBS especially in the MORNING when they are bejewelled with DEW ! Thanks for sharing ~ Please check our site ~ THANKS
Yours through Poetry ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🧡
June 13th, 2019 18:23
Kinda day.
b-LAH-que said:
It has a great flow that almost sounds like it could be a verse to a song, I like it!
June 12th, 2019 22:43
b-LAH-que said:
It has a great flow that almost sounds like it could be a verse to a song, I like it!
June 12th, 2019 22:43
Basking the busk
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many good musicians busking in the towns.
June 11th, 2019 00:11
Goldfinch60 said:
There are so many good musicians busking in the towns.
June 11th, 2019 00:11
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