Comments received on poems by A passing lyric



Funny girl life
Goldfinch60 said:

Super words KK, you are so strong and manage to smile through your life. One day you will be found by the person who loves you and your life will be more than wonderful.

Andy

February 23rd, 2021 01:27

Funny girl life
Jerry Reynolds said:

Resilient write, KK.

February 22nd, 2021 17:32

Funny girl life
FredPeyer said:

While you used the word \'funny\' nine times, it seems to me that this great poem is much deeper than just \'funny\' and that the \'funny girl\' is much more than \'just funny\'!

February 22nd, 2021 15:06

Funny girl life
Trenz Pruca said:

It was his loss.

February 22nd, 2021 14:32

Funny girl life
dusk arising said:

Wonderful. To read of how you smile through your experience of life whereas I read so many posts on MPS full of pain and anger from a similar path.

You are a kindred spirit for I too have a similar reflective smile.
We are the lucky ones with a happy disposition.

February 22nd, 2021 05:55

I can’t remember me
orchidee said:

I remembered ya. I never forgot ya! heehee.
I wish I would shut up with corny jokes. lol.

August 12th, 2020 01:43

A letter from Anxiety
orchidee said:

With friends like that, who needs enemies? as they say.
Anxiety - a friend not worth knowing, a waste of space really. Anxiety I mean, not you!

July 17th, 2020 01:56

Naya
Evergreen said:

It’s truly heartbreaking to hear about her. This is a perfect tribute to her passing. Well written. She will be greatly missed. ❤️

July 15th, 2020 00:31

Naya
MelissaJA said:

Awww.... not only well written, but sad. She will be missed

July 14th, 2020 01:15

Autism.
dusk arising said:

I missed this one.
Your words strike home to me for their truth, depth and pure worth.
My daughter, now in her forties, has only once to my knowledge looked into my eyes.


July 10th, 2020 09:44

Time will always seem frozen.
peto said:

Great read
Thoroughly enjoyed the flow and rhyme

July 7th, 2020 09:01

The monster in you
Bragee said:

I think most of us have a monster in us...some more than others. We must acknowledge then embrace!

June 27th, 2020 01:22

Lost
Accidental Poet said:

A very common feeling. Confidence is an elusive quality. I know the feeling very well. I think part of the problem is we feel we need someone to show us the way. But in reality, I think we find confidence when we choose our own way by following our heart. At least, that\'s what seems right for me. I hope you find the same. Great write KK.

June 18th, 2020 17:18

Your life matters
dusk arising said:

You\'d have to be mentally unwell to say anything else surely?

What\'s important right now is to see that other peoples lives matter. Not to be selfish. Not to be apathetic.

June 17th, 2020 22:22

Your life matters
dusk arising said:

You\'d have to be mentally unwell to say anything else surely?

What\'s important right now is to see that other peoples lives matter. Not to be selfish. Not to be apathetic.

June 17th, 2020 22:11

Black lives matter
A passing lyric said:

You are very right. All lives do matter and that will never change. I’m not usually this serious honestly but I felt it right at this moment to say something positive as best I could. Thank you 😊

June 10th, 2020 23:53

Black lives matter
peto said:

I agree with earlier comment
All lives matter

I do admire you for braving this subject
Will look over some earlier writes from you soon
Well done

June 10th, 2020 05:10

Black lives matter
Goldfinch60 said:

Why is this still happening in this day and age?

June 9th, 2020 00:36

Black lives matter
dusk arising said:

What\'s taken so long?

June 8th, 2020 23:55

Good night
Goldfinch60 said:

So true but in going to slep we know that there will be another good day when we awake.

January 29th, 2020 02:12

Home
Goldfinch60 said:

Home is so special in our lives.

January 27th, 2020 02:27

The Job
Goldfinch60 said:

Good write. Glad you got the job may it be a great success in your life.

January 21st, 2020 01:22

The Job
Barry Hodges said:

There\'s a difference between...
YOUR
and
YOU\'RE.

January 20th, 2020 19:23

Start new
Goldfinch60 said:

We each start a new life each new day, enjoy each moment.

January 19th, 2020 14:29

Start new
Nicholas Browning said:

This is pretty cool. Blunt and to the point, and a nice kick to it.

January 19th, 2020 02:31

Run river
Nicholas Browning said:

This is cool. I like the style.

January 13th, 2020 22:43

Get wise
Lost at the beginning said:

Simple but beautiful, I love it.

January 3rd, 2020 23:14

The new year
Nemo said:

Well written. Happy new year 🎉

January 1st, 2020 01:30

The storm
Goldfinch60 said:

May that storm in their lives become sunlight forever.

December 10th, 2019 01:35

Freddy Krueger
orchidee said:

A good write as a poem KK. I read the actor who played Freddy had his own nightmares. I\'m not surprised, after playing such a horrid role. Evil influences rubbed off on him. I can\'t dilute the word \'evil\' here for anything lighter.

October 14th, 2019 01:38

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