Comments received on poems by fearlessstars
The firefly and the glow-worm
Goldfinch60 said:
May those lights of love be forever bright.
July 24th, 2019 05:07
Goldfinch60 said:
May those lights of love be forever bright.
July 24th, 2019 05:07
Lightology
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write colours of the Universe are a wonder to behold.
July 22nd, 2019 04:45
Goldfinch60 said:
Superb write colours of the Universe are a wonder to behold.
July 22nd, 2019 04:45
The prowess
Goldfinch60 said:
That mystery will be secure in our beliefs of life to infinity.
July 17th, 2019 04:29
Goldfinch60 said:
That mystery will be secure in our beliefs of life to infinity.
July 17th, 2019 04:29
Imagination
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FRIEND : ANGELA here 8 am (Tuesday} in New Zealand ! Just checking MPS for hidden gems : and I found one. Love the Picture and it spawns the Title & the Poem (love rhyming couplets) - they give a poem FLOW. Much of poetry is based on imagination ! I also like that the flow of the poem is not impeded by PUNCTUATION or CAPITALISATION ! LoVe all your like but you saved the best til last !
promises awaken from wandering heaven
love is a vision all naturally given
Thanks for sharing : more please
Blessings & Peace ANGELA 🧡🧡
July 15th, 2019 14:03
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
THANKS FOR SHARING FRIEND : ANGELA here 8 am (Tuesday} in New Zealand ! Just checking MPS for hidden gems : and I found one. Love the Picture and it spawns the Title & the Poem (love rhyming couplets) - they give a poem FLOW. Much of poetry is based on imagination ! I also like that the flow of the poem is not impeded by PUNCTUATION or CAPITALISATION ! LoVe all your like but you saved the best til last !
promises awaken from wandering heaven
love is a vision all naturally given
Thanks for sharing : more please
Blessings & Peace ANGELA 🧡🧡
July 15th, 2019 14:03
Innocent
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FEARLESS ! Even @ 31 I can think of *More Innocent Days* when one was less acountable ! Im getting married Next Year (My Mother thinks its hightime and My DAD was going to auction ME !). BRIAN & I are *In Love* so it is a positive anticipation ! BUT then KIDS and no longer *FUN & FANCY FREE* mais pour tous c\'est la VIE !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡
Please check my POEM : Thanks A !
July 11th, 2019 07:55
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Thanks FEARLESS ! Even @ 31 I can think of *More Innocent Days* when one was less acountable ! Im getting married Next Year (My Mother thinks its hightime and My DAD was going to auction ME !). BRIAN & I are *In Love* so it is a positive anticipation ! BUT then KIDS and no longer *FUN & FANCY FREE* mais pour tous c\'est la VIE !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡
Please check my POEM : Thanks A !
July 11th, 2019 07:55
Nerves
Goldfinch60 said:
Art in its various guises always pulls me into its wonder.
July 8th, 2019 00:12
Goldfinch60 said:
Art in its various guises always pulls me into its wonder.
July 8th, 2019 00:12
Twilight of life
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good evening FRIEND thanks for lovely a tribute to the *Twilight of Life* ! Every decade has its compensations ~ Im now in my mid-thirties and enjoying every minute. To add pefection to pleasure Im getting married to the Lovely Angela next year ! Im OLD enough but not neccesserily WISE enough ~ but at least 10 times more prepared than when I was 25 !
I run a *SENIORS CLUB (65+)* at College but not many of them are as full of smiles & positivity as you are ~ nor could they pen such a heart warming ODE ~ gives us hope for the future !
Blessings & Peace & Joy in lovely SOUTH AFRICA
Love in the SPIRIT ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
July 5th, 2019 10:39
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good evening FRIEND thanks for lovely a tribute to the *Twilight of Life* ! Every decade has its compensations ~ Im now in my mid-thirties and enjoying every minute. To add pefection to pleasure Im getting married to the Lovely Angela next year ! Im OLD enough but not neccesserily WISE enough ~ but at least 10 times more prepared than when I was 25 !
I run a *SENIORS CLUB (65+)* at College but not many of them are as full of smiles & positivity as you are ~ nor could they pen such a heart warming ODE ~ gives us hope for the future !
Blessings & Peace & Joy in lovely SOUTH AFRICA
Love in the SPIRIT ~ BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🧡
July 5th, 2019 10:39
Twilight of life
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, those twlight times can be so magical.
July 5th, 2019 01:15
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful write, those twlight times can be so magical.
July 5th, 2019 01:15
Morning light
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write the line
\'Behold the moment in this rising bliss,\'
is so meaningful.
Welcome to MPS.
July 5th, 2019 01:13
Goldfinch60 said:
Very good write the line
\'Behold the moment in this rising bliss,\'
is so meaningful.
Welcome to MPS.
July 5th, 2019 01:13
Morning light
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome FEARLESSSTARS (Great name !) Welcome to MPS it is a very good site with some excellent Poets we can recommend FAY SLIM ! We love South Africa and especially CAPE TOWN ! WE were in the Friendly City (PE) and travelled to Cape Town through the KAROOS ~ stayed for a few Days and returned via the GARDEN ROUTE it was JUNE !
Loved all the sentiments in your Poem 18 perfect lines of Rhyming Couplets ~ our fave Rhyme Pattern I (BRIAN) am in UK ~ ANGELA (My Fiancee) is also in the S hemisphere (New Zealand) on Work Exchange until OBTOBER its gone midnight there and Winter ~ I guess shes in bed. Our POEM today is a TRIBUTE to AMERICAN INDEPENDENCE JULY 4 1776 !
Love your ODE to the Dawning Day very descriptive and very Beautiful. Nice to read & recite. FAY has several recent Poems along those lines ~ OK
WE look forward to more from your quill !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours BRIAN (UK) & ANGELA (NZ) 🧡🧡
July 4th, 2019 06:45
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Welcome FEARLESSSTARS (Great name !) Welcome to MPS it is a very good site with some excellent Poets we can recommend FAY SLIM ! We love South Africa and especially CAPE TOWN ! WE were in the Friendly City (PE) and travelled to Cape Town through the KAROOS ~ stayed for a few Days and returned via the GARDEN ROUTE it was JUNE !
Loved all the sentiments in your Poem 18 perfect lines of Rhyming Couplets ~ our fave Rhyme Pattern I (BRIAN) am in UK ~ ANGELA (My Fiancee) is also in the S hemisphere (New Zealand) on Work Exchange until OBTOBER its gone midnight there and Winter ~ I guess shes in bed. Our POEM today is a TRIBUTE to AMERICAN INDEPENDENCE JULY 4 1776 !
Love your ODE to the Dawning Day very descriptive and very Beautiful. Nice to read & recite. FAY has several recent Poems along those lines ~ OK
WE look forward to more from your quill !
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Yours BRIAN (UK) & ANGELA (NZ) 🧡🧡
July 4th, 2019 06:45
