Comments received on poems by de Suin
waking up is a struggle
arqios said:
An excellent read! Miss the church bells, haven\'t heard them or leaved anywhere near them for years and years. Some days can be really slow in starting that way.
May 23rd, 2022 08:27
arqios said:
An excellent read! Miss the church bells, haven\'t heard them or leaved anywhere near them for years and years. Some days can be really slow in starting that way.
May 23rd, 2022 08:27
waking up is a struggle
L. B. Mek said:
been waking up without alarms
for decades now..
after a while, your insercurities
become your alarm
and you awake, startled
because, you realise
its all starting again, 24hrs
of a rollercoaster life..
but like Keats, said
\'Life, must be undergone..\'
(I laud the honesty of your words
a read, I shall remember for a while
thanks for sharing..
stay strong! I wish you peace)
May 23rd, 2022 05:39
L. B. Mek said:
been waking up without alarms
for decades now..
after a while, your insercurities
become your alarm
and you awake, startled
because, you realise
its all starting again, 24hrs
of a rollercoaster life..
but like Keats, said
\'Life, must be undergone..\'
(I laud the honesty of your words
a read, I shall remember for a while
thanks for sharing..
stay strong! I wish you peace)
May 23rd, 2022 05:39
waking up is a struggle
orchidee said:
Good write de.
HELLO!!! Hear me shouting? That woke you up?! lol (Me being daft!).
May 23rd, 2022 02:09
orchidee said:
Good write de.
HELLO!!! Hear me shouting? That woke you up?! lol (Me being daft!).
May 23rd, 2022 02:09
Where have I been?
L. B. Mek said:
I guess, we\'re at least
Free to voice our Fury
there\'s, something
to be thankful for
in that afforded, reality..
hate begets hate,
violence begets violence,
revenge begets revenge;
I hope you seek, that wisdom
that will allow you, enough willpower
to choose the life
that will offer you
a taste of contentment
within those simple, yet oh so elusive
pleasures of life
that many, can\'t even afford
to dream of..
I wish you peace, thanks for sharing
April 14th, 2022 03:35
L. B. Mek said:
I guess, we\'re at least
Free to voice our Fury
there\'s, something
to be thankful for
in that afforded, reality..
hate begets hate,
violence begets violence,
revenge begets revenge;
I hope you seek, that wisdom
that will allow you, enough willpower
to choose the life
that will offer you
a taste of contentment
within those simple, yet oh so elusive
pleasures of life
that many, can\'t even afford
to dream of..
I wish you peace, thanks for sharing
April 14th, 2022 03:35
A firing squat
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a lifelong detestation of capital punishment.
And a more vivid imaginative account of the process (other than in my own head - though mine not so well expressed) I have not encountered.
With a shudder, many thanks,
Dave
December 2nd, 2020 20:06
Doggerel Dave said:
I have a lifelong detestation of capital punishment.
And a more vivid imaginative account of the process (other than in my own head - though mine not so well expressed) I have not encountered.
With a shudder, many thanks,
Dave
December 2nd, 2020 20:06
The will to do in a time of nothingness
MMadrid said:
Wow, thoroughly enjoyed this. I think alot of people can relate to these emotions during this time. It\'s a battle between wanting to do stuff, use this time wisely but also feeling you have no energy and just want to sleep. Nice job.
April 24th, 2020 21:14
MMadrid said:
Wow, thoroughly enjoyed this. I think alot of people can relate to these emotions during this time. It\'s a battle between wanting to do stuff, use this time wisely but also feeling you have no energy and just want to sleep. Nice job.
April 24th, 2020 21:14
The Reunion
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING ZACHEEE ~ Welcome to MPS ! Thanks for your first Poem. Free Verse and a nice structure ! Thirteen lines ~ almost a Sonnet ~ and an intersting SUBJECT ~ which reflects the TITLE. We all attend Reunions ~ from time to time ~ when we meet with our Peers (horizontally streamed) in My (BRIAN) case 35 or Family Reunions (vertically streamed) from 1 to 99 ! If you were born & live in New York (A Fine City) you must find REUNIONS FASCINATING (If you ever attend them ?).
I live near London (another great City !) But I was born in Liverpool (City of Culture) which is 300 miles away (which in the UK is another Planet !) so I dont get to many Peer Group Reunions !
There are SMILES @ Reunions ~ but they hide the ANGST and the mundanity of most lives and for many in the 21st Century it is downhill from the Cradle to the Grave ~ despite the fact that we are CREATED (CONCEIVED) EQUAL and that anybody ~ even Donald Trump ~ can be PRESIDENT of the most powerful Country on the PLANET !
I enjoyed your final triplet ~ Its how I often feel at the end of a REUNION !
I think the world can no longer surprise me
I understand I know nothing
And ~ therefore I know it all !
Thanks for sharing ~ more please
Yours through Poetry ~ BRIAN (UK)
I share this site with My Fiancee Angela (New Zealand)
MPS works by reading & commenting on each others POEMS
July 11th, 2019 17:56
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
GOOD EVENING ZACHEEE ~ Welcome to MPS ! Thanks for your first Poem. Free Verse and a nice structure ! Thirteen lines ~ almost a Sonnet ~ and an intersting SUBJECT ~ which reflects the TITLE. We all attend Reunions ~ from time to time ~ when we meet with our Peers (horizontally streamed) in My (BRIAN) case 35 or Family Reunions (vertically streamed) from 1 to 99 ! If you were born & live in New York (A Fine City) you must find REUNIONS FASCINATING (If you ever attend them ?).
I live near London (another great City !) But I was born in Liverpool (City of Culture) which is 300 miles away (which in the UK is another Planet !) so I dont get to many Peer Group Reunions !
There are SMILES @ Reunions ~ but they hide the ANGST and the mundanity of most lives and for many in the 21st Century it is downhill from the Cradle to the Grave ~ despite the fact that we are CREATED (CONCEIVED) EQUAL and that anybody ~ even Donald Trump ~ can be PRESIDENT of the most powerful Country on the PLANET !
I enjoyed your final triplet ~ Its how I often feel at the end of a REUNION !
I think the world can no longer surprise me
I understand I know nothing
And ~ therefore I know it all !
Thanks for sharing ~ more please
Yours through Poetry ~ BRIAN (UK)
I share this site with My Fiancee Angela (New Zealand)
MPS works by reading & commenting on each others POEMS
July 11th, 2019 17:56
