Comments received on poems by brothervilheim
Better Days/Chemistry
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these that love will last for eternity.
Andy
May 22nd, 2021 00:35
Goldfinch60 said:
With words like these that love will last for eternity.
Andy
May 22nd, 2021 00:35
Another rant
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe one day that divine comedy of love and peace will be with us, I would sincerely like to think so.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:26
Goldfinch60 said:
Maybe one day that divine comedy of love and peace will be with us, I would sincerely like to think so.
Andy
May 21st, 2021 00:26
Another rant
rosiedm said:
That\'s a rap sir
I\'ve just read it as so.
Not an eminem rap
No bad words there
But for sure I heard some background music playing through the lines
Well worded to rhyme and make sense
May 20th, 2021 15:12
rosiedm said:
That\'s a rap sir
I\'ve just read it as so.
Not an eminem rap
No bad words there
But for sure I heard some background music playing through the lines
Well worded to rhyme and make sense
May 20th, 2021 15:12
Am I not lonely?
L. B. Mek said:
sync this perfectly to a beat and you\'ll have a hit, I guarantee..
thanks for sharing
May 20th, 2021 04:12
L. B. Mek said:
sync this perfectly to a beat and you\'ll have a hit, I guarantee..
thanks for sharing
May 20th, 2021 04:12
Am I not lonely?
Goldfinch60 said:
Company is certainly a basic need in our life, one day a person will come along and take you out of that loneliness and bring back into the world of people.
Andy
May 20th, 2021 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Company is certainly a basic need in our life, one day a person will come along and take you out of that loneliness and bring back into the world of people.
Andy
May 20th, 2021 00:06
Darkness Rising
L. B. Mek said:
dear Poet, you\'re awesome!
thanks for sharing, your words of wisdom...
\'I think truly without this poetic therapy,
I would be but memory\'
May 19th, 2021 05:41
L. B. Mek said:
dear Poet, you\'re awesome!
thanks for sharing, your words of wisdom...
\'I think truly without this poetic therapy,
I would be but memory\'
May 19th, 2021 05:41
Incarceration
L. B. Mek said:
\'Feebly pushing against
the primal storms of nature that surround me
Laughs echo round the recess of my mind
like thunder and lightning swelling my melancholy.\'
wonderfully, crisp and clear imagery
reinforcing the poems voice and message
than distracting us - from it..
a great read, thanks for sharing dear poet
May 19th, 2021 03:31
L. B. Mek said:
\'Feebly pushing against
the primal storms of nature that surround me
Laughs echo round the recess of my mind
like thunder and lightning swelling my melancholy.\'
wonderfully, crisp and clear imagery
reinforcing the poems voice and message
than distracting us - from it..
a great read, thanks for sharing dear poet
May 19th, 2021 03:31
Darkness Rising
Goldfinch60 said:
Poetry is your medication and it needs to be written more and more and in time that fog will life and light will come into your life.
Andy
May 19th, 2021 01:42
Goldfinch60 said:
Poetry is your medication and it needs to be written more and more and in time that fog will life and light will come into your life.
Andy
May 19th, 2021 01:42
Incarceration
Goldfinch60 said:
There will be a door in that incarceration and when you find it the freedom and joy of your world will be boundless.
Andy
May 18th, 2021 00:18
Goldfinch60 said:
There will be a door in that incarceration and when you find it the freedom and joy of your world will be boundless.
Andy
May 18th, 2021 00:18
A new light in life
Clara said:
Wonderful. The words you use to express this work really well, fluidity is great. Really enjoyed reading this one!
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 13:26
Clara said:
Wonderful. The words you use to express this work really well, fluidity is great. Really enjoyed reading this one!
CLARA X
September 6th, 2019 13:26
The monster called anxiety
Christina8 said:
there are so many of us that struggle with anxiety and or panic attacks....you have expressed yourself well! Thanks for sharing!
August 11th, 2019 19:58
Christina8 said:
there are so many of us that struggle with anxiety and or panic attacks....you have expressed yourself well! Thanks for sharing!
August 11th, 2019 19:58
The monster called anxiety
Chagrined said:
My old friend anxiety...I know thee well, and you articulate the subject very well, here. Nice piece!
August 11th, 2019 15:59
Chagrined said:
My old friend anxiety...I know thee well, and you articulate the subject very well, here. Nice piece!
August 11th, 2019 15:59
The monster called anxiety
dusk arising said:
The angst of this really comes through alarmingly.
When there is no harm to those around me or myself, the cold winds and rain are kept from my body and there is food to eat, my anxiety is pacified.
August 11th, 2019 08:59
dusk arising said:
The angst of this really comes through alarmingly.
When there is no harm to those around me or myself, the cold winds and rain are kept from my body and there is food to eat, my anxiety is pacified.
August 11th, 2019 08:59
A simple love verse
BoxMyHeart said:
By the sounds of it she really is something to behold. I love your calm and then sudden gripping references.
Favourite line:
With her I feel giant everything is heightened and vibrant
Loved it thanks.
August 10th, 2019 01:39
BoxMyHeart said:
By the sounds of it she really is something to behold. I love your calm and then sudden gripping references.
Favourite line:
With her I feel giant everything is heightened and vibrant
Loved it thanks.
August 10th, 2019 01:39
