Comments received on poems by camille09

\"Not by blood but by heart\"
Andrew Charles Forrest said:

We are all connected sis\' Great write

December 14th, 2019 06:44

Unsub said:


there is always a risk with such tight rhyming that the need to rhyme forces words that don\'t quite fit the theme.

This is not the case here; superbly rhymed & delivered poem.


December 14th, 2019 05:05

orchidee said:

A nice write Camille.

November 22nd, 2019 04:03

Goldfinch60 said:

Super write Camille. The line \"Results are not the end, it\'s about the journey we take\" is so meaningful, you are just starting your life while mine is heading into its twilight, my advice will always be enjoy each moment as each moment is special and will never come again.

Welcome to MPS.

November 21st, 2019 02:23