Comments received on poems by braydon Tyler
Loneliness; the sweetest siren
Goldfinch60 said:
She will always be with you.
February 3rd, 2020 02:03
Goldfinch60 said:
She will always be with you.
February 3rd, 2020 02:03
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Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart will keep on ticking as it has done on my long and wonderful life.
Good words Brayden, welcome to MPS.
January 15th, 2020 02:21
Goldfinch60 said:
Your heart will keep on ticking as it has done on my long and wonderful life.
Good words Brayden, welcome to MPS.
January 15th, 2020 02:21
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ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening BRAYDON ~ Brian here ! Welcome to MPS and thanks for your first POEM. Nice Free Verse style with lots of Rhythm ~ just like a HEART~ most important organ in the human body ? It does jump about a bit (like a pendulum ?) as it beats ~ as seen in videos of Open Heart Surgery ! Your description of the heart breaking and shatering through ones body ~ is quite alarming ! What does make a Heart Heavy and eventually breaks it ? In my experience LOVE. It happens ~ Im 36 but I have found my true love (ANGELA 31) and we are getting married in April ! At the moment Our TWO Hearts are beating as ONE and we pray they will for at least the next 50 YEARS. Im a BIOCHEMIST & ANGELA is a PHYSIO so between us we know a lot about the CARDIOVASCULAR SYSTEM and how it keeps us alive ! Some say the HUMAN HEART is just a four chambered pump ~ but to US that is the greatest understatement ever ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ much food for thought !
BLESSINGS & Peace to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 💙🧡💙
MPS works by Reading & Commenting on each others POEMS ~ OK
January 14th, 2020 19:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening BRAYDON ~ Brian here ! Welcome to MPS and thanks for your first POEM. Nice Free Verse style with lots of Rhythm ~ just like a HEART~ most important organ in the human body ? It does jump about a bit (like a pendulum ?) as it beats ~ as seen in videos of Open Heart Surgery ! Your description of the heart breaking and shatering through ones body ~ is quite alarming ! What does make a Heart Heavy and eventually breaks it ? In my experience LOVE. It happens ~ Im 36 but I have found my true love (ANGELA 31) and we are getting married in April ! At the moment Our TWO Hearts are beating as ONE and we pray they will for at least the next 50 YEARS. Im a BIOCHEMIST & ANGELA is a PHYSIO so between us we know a lot about the CARDIOVASCULAR SYSTEM and how it keeps us alive ! Some say the HUMAN HEART is just a four chambered pump ~ but to US that is the greatest understatement ever ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ much food for thought !
BLESSINGS & Peace to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 💙🧡💙
MPS works by Reading & Commenting on each others POEMS ~ OK
January 14th, 2020 19:12
Pendulum
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening BRAYDON ~ Brian here ! Welcome to MPS and thanks for your first POEM. Nice Free Verse style with lots of Rhythm ~ just like a HEART~ most important organ in the human body ? It does jump about a bit (like a pendulum ?) as it beats ~ as seen in videos of Open Heart Surgery ! Your description of the heart breaking and shatering through ones body ~ is quite alarming ! What does make a Heart Heavy and eventually breaks it ? In my experience LOVE. It happens ~ Im 36 but I have found my true love (ANGELA 31) and we are getting married in April ! At the moment Our TWO Hearts are beating as ONE and we pray they will for at least the next 50 YEARS. Im a BIOCHEMIST & ANGELA is a PHYSIO so between us we know a lot about the CARDIOVASCULAR SYSTEM and how it keeps us alive ! Some say the HUMAN HEART is just a four chambered pump ~ but to US that is the greatest understatement ever ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ much food for thought !
BLESSINGS & Peace to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 💙🧡💙
MPS works by Reading & Commenting on each others POEMS ~ OK
January 14th, 2020 19:12
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening BRAYDON ~ Brian here ! Welcome to MPS and thanks for your first POEM. Nice Free Verse style with lots of Rhythm ~ just like a HEART~ most important organ in the human body ? It does jump about a bit (like a pendulum ?) as it beats ~ as seen in videos of Open Heart Surgery ! Your description of the heart breaking and shatering through ones body ~ is quite alarming ! What does make a Heart Heavy and eventually breaks it ? In my experience LOVE. It happens ~ Im 36 but I have found my true love (ANGELA 31) and we are getting married in April ! At the moment Our TWO Hearts are beating as ONE and we pray they will for at least the next 50 YEARS. Im a BIOCHEMIST & ANGELA is a PHYSIO so between us we know a lot about the CARDIOVASCULAR SYSTEM and how it keeps us alive ! Some say the HUMAN HEART is just a four chambered pump ~ but to US that is the greatest understatement ever ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ much food for thought !
BLESSINGS & Peace to You & Yours
Yours Brian & Angela 💙🧡💙
MPS works by Reading & Commenting on each others POEMS ~ OK
January 14th, 2020 19:12
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Chandra S. said:
This is such a deft juxtaposition of anatomy and sentiment. The questions towards the end are so pertinent. Thanks for sharing.
January 14th, 2020 18:45
Chandra S. said:
This is such a deft juxtaposition of anatomy and sentiment. The questions towards the end are so pertinent. Thanks for sharing.
January 14th, 2020 18:45
