A Golden Rose
Goldfinch60 said:

Beautiful and so meaningful. That rose is love unbounded.

January 25th, 2020 01:00

What once was his
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE (I share this site with my Fiance Brian) - Welcome to MPS it is a very empathetic site so you should get some encouraging comments. Thanks for your first Poem - it is excellently penned in quatrains of rhyming couplets with good meter which makes it perfect to recite ! The content is enigmatic & mystic and yet it does fnd echoes in real life experience. Im 31 so I have had several liaisons before I met Brian when I was 28 and he was 33. Our relationship is very real and we are getting married in April !
The reltionship in your Poem is ephemeral and almost in the Spirit World.

(Love) Like forlorn waves washing upon the shore
Her tears like shingles - till ghost was born
Her love life vanished like some forgotten clue
As indeed the sea has taken her - she is gone - a myth

Great lines some of which ring a bell with me and my former beaus. I never got engaged because some of the Men (often in the Medical Profession - Im a Physiotherapist) seemd rather ephemeral & uncommited - Like the Man in your melancholy Poem. I craved for commitment and to be married & start a Family ! Brian is a Scientist and some of his Ladies also lacked commitment to Marriage & a Family. So when we met we were perfect for each other after disappointments in Love. I have never been preegnant & Brian has never fathered a Child ! We live in Essex and its good to have someone from Scotland. Being near Burns Night (25.01.20) & BREXIT (31.01.20) we have combined the two tomorrow and penned *Ode to Brexit* in the Burns Meter - enjoy !

Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡
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and Commenting on each others Poetry - OK A & B !

January 23rd, 2020 15:41