Comments received on poems by Amanda Ricci
Hurt
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Amanda. Unfortunately domestic violence is still much too prevalent, and too often the victims do not get any help.
April 18th, 2020 10:35
FredPeyer said:
Well written, Amanda. Unfortunately domestic violence is still much too prevalent, and too often the victims do not get any help.
April 18th, 2020 10:35
Seasons
Goldfinch60 said:
Each season brings joy to us as do your words Amanda.
Andy
February 23rd, 2020 01:31
Goldfinch60 said:
Each season brings joy to us as do your words Amanda.
Andy
February 23rd, 2020 01:31
Seasons
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here ! Thanks Amanda for an amazing Decet ! Four seasons in five elegant Rhyming Couplets ~ excellent ! Each couplet stimulated the senses ! Couplet 1 & 2: Autumn ~ Warmth ~ falling leaves & drying trees Couplet 3: Winter ~ Cold & Snow ! Couplet 4. Spring Warmer ~ Flowers - Fireflies & Fiesta ! Couplet 5: Summer ~ Even Warmer evidenced by Bird-song ! This Poem is a GEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
February 22nd, 2020 15:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Angela here ! Thanks Amanda for an amazing Decet ! Four seasons in five elegant Rhyming Couplets ~ excellent ! Each couplet stimulated the senses ! Couplet 1 & 2: Autumn ~ Warmth ~ falling leaves & drying trees Couplet 3: Winter ~ Cold & Snow ! Couplet 4. Spring Warmer ~ Flowers - Fireflies & Fiesta ! Couplet 5: Summer ~ Even Warmer evidenced by Bird-song ! This Poem is a GEM !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
February 22nd, 2020 15:27
Hope
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful positive write Amanda.
Welcome to MPS.
Andy
February 22nd, 2020 01:29
Goldfinch60 said:
A wonderful positive write Amanda.
Welcome to MPS.
Andy
February 22nd, 2020 01:29
Hope
FoolishHeart said:
I really enjoyed your poem. The rhyming was great and the flow felt really natural. The message is something that can really resonate with a lot of people and I think that it\'s beautiful.
~F.H
February 21st, 2020 18:42
FoolishHeart said:
I really enjoyed your poem. The rhyming was great and the flow felt really natural. The message is something that can really resonate with a lot of people and I think that it\'s beautiful.
~F.H
February 21st, 2020 18:42
Hope
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Amanda - welcome to MPS it is a very empathetic site and operates by Reading & commenting on each others Poetry - OK !
HOPE is the substance of things not yet seen and a positive trait that enables us to cope Day by Day !
V 1. Those of us who are working or studying are indeed trapped ina Cycle of Work - Worry & Wondering about tomorrow. Often we find LIFE too much to hold !
V 2. HOPE does enable us to turn Sorrow to joy and make life well worth living !
V 3. Our mood can change form Gloom to Zoom ! The Sun - God - Laughter - Best Friends - Dancing - Smiling - A Special Person (Brian is my Fiance !) - Home - Flowers - All these things fill our Heart with HOPE - AMEN !
I love rhyming couplets and this is a beautiful poem bursting with Rhyme & Rhythm and many Reasons for Hope. We have saved it as a Fave - More please ! Please check our site !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Hope
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
February 21st, 2020 16:05
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Amanda - welcome to MPS it is a very empathetic site and operates by Reading & commenting on each others Poetry - OK !
HOPE is the substance of things not yet seen and a positive trait that enables us to cope Day by Day !
V 1. Those of us who are working or studying are indeed trapped ina Cycle of Work - Worry & Wondering about tomorrow. Often we find LIFE too much to hold !
V 2. HOPE does enable us to turn Sorrow to joy and make life well worth living !
V 3. Our mood can change form Gloom to Zoom ! The Sun - God - Laughter - Best Friends - Dancing - Smiling - A Special Person (Brian is my Fiance !) - Home - Flowers - All these things fill our Heart with HOPE - AMEN !
I love rhyming couplets and this is a beautiful poem bursting with Rhyme & Rhythm and many Reasons for Hope. We have saved it as a Fave - More please ! Please check our site !
Blessings & Peace & Joy & Hope
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 💛💛💛
February 21st, 2020 16:05
