Comments received on poems by TheBalladofMebo
WILL BE OKAY
Goldfinch60 said:
Sounds like an ideal relationship, Okay is absolutely fine.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:01
Goldfinch60 said:
Sounds like an ideal relationship, Okay is absolutely fine.
Andy
June 30th, 2021 00:01
WILL BE OKAY
Saxon Crow said:
Perfect. And completely relatable. Okay is just right for a happy life. Great poem
June 29th, 2021 23:42
Saxon Crow said:
Perfect. And completely relatable. Okay is just right for a happy life. Great poem
June 29th, 2021 23:42
WILL BE OKAY
dusk arising said:
Wouldn\'t life be bliss if it worked out that way?
June 29th, 2021 14:37
dusk arising said:
Wouldn\'t life be bliss if it worked out that way?
June 29th, 2021 14:37
Feeling your Presence in your Absence
L. B. Mek said:
(thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)..
a write imbued with that youthful innocence of naivety
where each prick of love, is assumed
as being a final death-nail to life\'s worth, stubbornly
gripping that ideal of romance novel, promised propaganda
where, happy endings come packaged and gift-wrapped
and broken heart\'s, are assumed as irreversible bruises
when in actuality:
broken heart\'s - fix themselves, as best they can
with the passing of time
and all the help they ask from us, is that we simply
find strength - enough, to take one more step
and one more after that, learning
with each new path we scout: \'This too: shall Pass\'...
June 25th, 2021 04:46
L. B. Mek said:
(thanks for sharing and inspiring
my little scribbled reply)..
a write imbued with that youthful innocence of naivety
where each prick of love, is assumed
as being a final death-nail to life\'s worth, stubbornly
gripping that ideal of romance novel, promised propaganda
where, happy endings come packaged and gift-wrapped
and broken heart\'s, are assumed as irreversible bruises
when in actuality:
broken heart\'s - fix themselves, as best they can
with the passing of time
and all the help they ask from us, is that we simply
find strength - enough, to take one more step
and one more after that, learning
with each new path we scout: \'This too: shall Pass\'...
June 25th, 2021 04:46
YES! Everything Mattered To Me
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am not vulnerable, just an emotional train wreck
with high tolerance levels
Life situations toughens me up, while cinema and music
waters my eyes
I took down my tallest walls for you brick by brick,
Now I have moved on and interacted with many people, I learnt
that some people\'s greatest walls
are others crossing bridges.\'
what an impressive gift you skilfully wield, for weaving meaning into intimately immersive and entertaining write\'s,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 13th, 2021 04:04
L. B. Mek said:
\'I am not vulnerable, just an emotional train wreck
with high tolerance levels
Life situations toughens me up, while cinema and music
waters my eyes
I took down my tallest walls for you brick by brick,
Now I have moved on and interacted with many people, I learnt
that some people\'s greatest walls
are others crossing bridges.\'
what an impressive gift you skilfully wield, for weaving meaning into intimately immersive and entertaining write\'s,
thanks for sharing, dear poet
May 13th, 2021 04:04
40 ONE
Bragee said:
Very thoughtful write.
Hopefully enjoyed by whomever inspired it!
Numbers are never given their due credit
July 1st, 2020 23:06
Bragee said:
Very thoughtful write.
Hopefully enjoyed by whomever inspired it!
Numbers are never given their due credit
July 1st, 2020 23:06
EMOTIONS
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Friend ~ Welcome to MPS ! We enjoyed yiour first Poem and have saved it as favourite. Thanks for sharing you first Poem ~ it is mega and deserves a mega comment. some of the Poems on this site are too short to make a statement !
Love the *Free Verse* style of this poem it gives it a dynamic rhythm and is easy to read ! What does it say ?
Its very easy to end up inside ones mind ~ writing stories & moovies but NEVER poublishing or producing them ! Its the same with Poetry but MPS does give us a chance to VENT ! Walking is good ~ I like to walk through the Woods and Hills & meditate ~ very cathartic. We have time to think of People. Im 36 and have *loved & lost* many times but the memories play on ones mind ! At the moomnet you seem to betwixt & between lovewise ~ which is the worst of both worlds ! Emotions can indeed be both the BEST & WORST of TIMES ! But in my experience some loves never die ! True Love can be attained in time ! I met Angela three years ago (when she was 28) and we*re getting married in APRIL ~ AMEN
Since I met Angela my Mantra is now ~ When you meet the Right Person - DO FALL IN LOVE & MAKE SURE THEY FALL IN LOVE (WITH YOU !) TOO ~ AMEN
Peace & Joy & Success in Love
Yours BRIAN
Please check our site ~ Thanks B & A !
March 1st, 2020 19:10
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening Friend ~ Welcome to MPS ! We enjoyed yiour first Poem and have saved it as favourite. Thanks for sharing you first Poem ~ it is mega and deserves a mega comment. some of the Poems on this site are too short to make a statement !
Love the *Free Verse* style of this poem it gives it a dynamic rhythm and is easy to read ! What does it say ?
Its very easy to end up inside ones mind ~ writing stories & moovies but NEVER poublishing or producing them ! Its the same with Poetry but MPS does give us a chance to VENT ! Walking is good ~ I like to walk through the Woods and Hills & meditate ~ very cathartic. We have time to think of People. Im 36 and have *loved & lost* many times but the memories play on ones mind ! At the moomnet you seem to betwixt & between lovewise ~ which is the worst of both worlds ! Emotions can indeed be both the BEST & WORST of TIMES ! But in my experience some loves never die ! True Love can be attained in time ! I met Angela three years ago (when she was 28) and we*re getting married in APRIL ~ AMEN
Since I met Angela my Mantra is now ~ When you meet the Right Person - DO FALL IN LOVE & MAKE SURE THEY FALL IN LOVE (WITH YOU !) TOO ~ AMEN
Peace & Joy & Success in Love
Yours BRIAN
Please check our site ~ Thanks B & A !
March 1st, 2020 19:10
