Comments received on poems by tundrol
The frog, a maiden\\\\\\\'s lament
Saxon Crow said:
Sorry T i\'m going to burst this bubble with one name.... kermit!
March 17th, 2020 10:42
Saxon Crow said:
Sorry T i\'m going to burst this bubble with one name.... kermit!
March 17th, 2020 10:42
When winter rages
Saxon Crow said:
For thine part in bring thou back into the English language, I salute thee. Great Poem T
March 16th, 2020 10:06
Saxon Crow said:
For thine part in bring thou back into the English language, I salute thee. Great Poem T
March 16th, 2020 10:06
When winter rages
dusk arising said:
oooh \'eck. Whilst i respect thy right to hold these desires and i respect thee as a poet thou can tek thine self to thuther side o\'planet afore i\'ll join in.
Nicely versed mind u.
March 16th, 2020 05:35
dusk arising said:
oooh \'eck. Whilst i respect thy right to hold these desires and i respect thee as a poet thou can tek thine self to thuther side o\'planet afore i\'ll join in.
Nicely versed mind u.
March 16th, 2020 05:35
Not so little Red Riding Hood
dusk arising said:
My oh my what big eyes you have..... all the better for seeing you with...... my oh my what big hands you have..... all the better for caressing you with..... Oh my god no! ... that\'s way too big ..... put it away!!!
March 12th, 2020 07:51
dusk arising said:
My oh my what big eyes you have..... all the better for seeing you with...... my oh my what big hands you have..... all the better for caressing you with..... Oh my god no! ... that\'s way too big ..... put it away!!!
March 12th, 2020 07:51
I love your skinny legs
Barry Hodges said:
I wonder how people would have reacted if your poem had begun \"I love your short, fat, hairy legs\"???
March 10th, 2020 12:18
Barry Hodges said:
I wonder how people would have reacted if your poem had begun \"I love your short, fat, hairy legs\"???
March 10th, 2020 12:18
Control your ass
orchidee said:
I got enough trouble with \'façade\', except it\'s put in that accent thing under the \'c\' for me. How to get those accents in, if we\'re gonna speak French?!
March 9th, 2020 03:41
orchidee said:
I got enough trouble with \'façade\', except it\'s put in that accent thing under the \'c\' for me. How to get those accents in, if we\'re gonna speak French?!
March 9th, 2020 03:41
Control your ass
Barry Hodges said:
I would suggest respectfully to Angela and Brian that, before attempting to write in a foreign language, they should try and have a better command of it. Otherwise they risk becoming ridiculous.
What you should have written was \"Bonsoir Tundrol, - Merci pour un poème très élégant et agréable, plein de rimes et de rythme.\" That\'s NINE to TWELVE errors in as many words. Bravo.
March 8th, 2020 20:26
Barry Hodges said:
I would suggest respectfully to Angela and Brian that, before attempting to write in a foreign language, they should try and have a better command of it. Otherwise they risk becoming ridiculous.
What you should have written was \"Bonsoir Tundrol, - Merci pour un poème très élégant et agréable, plein de rimes et de rythme.\" That\'s NINE to TWELVE errors in as many words. Bravo.
March 8th, 2020 20:26
Control your ass
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Bon Nuit TUNDROL - Merci pour une Poeme tres elegante et plien de Rhyme et Rhythm ! Thanks for a very intersting story regarding the noises & nature of the Asses (Animals not Derrieres !) on the pilgrimage Route to St Jaques de Compostelle. We still has Donkeys (Asses) on the Beaches in Essex and if overridden by Kids who provoke them they do produce that extraordinary and unnatural He-Haw-He-Haw-He-Haw sound you mention. There are many words in English / American which have an Double Entendre ! Examples are Prick - Cock - Brush - Tit etc. They are often a source of written & spoken Humour - as you have indicated !
Thanks for sharing ~ Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 8th, 2020 17:26
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Bon Nuit TUNDROL - Merci pour une Poeme tres elegante et plien de Rhyme et Rhythm ! Thanks for a very intersting story regarding the noises & nature of the Asses (Animals not Derrieres !) on the pilgrimage Route to St Jaques de Compostelle. We still has Donkeys (Asses) on the Beaches in Essex and if overridden by Kids who provoke them they do produce that extraordinary and unnatural He-Haw-He-Haw-He-Haw sound you mention. There are many words in English / American which have an Double Entendre ! Examples are Prick - Cock - Brush - Tit etc. They are often a source of written & spoken Humour - as you have indicated !
Thanks for sharing ~ Peace & Joy to YOU & YOURS
Love ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
March 8th, 2020 17:26
The old fool
dusk arising said:
I like this, a very clever twist upon a cupid tale.
A credit to your imaginative creative talents.
March 8th, 2020 00:35
dusk arising said:
I like this, a very clever twist upon a cupid tale.
A credit to your imaginative creative talents.
March 8th, 2020 00:35
I love your skinny legs
dusk arising said:
Age brings appreciation of what really is beautiful.
March 6th, 2020 13:11
dusk arising said:
Age brings appreciation of what really is beautiful.
March 6th, 2020 13:11
I love your skinny legs
FredPeyer said:
As they say, beauty is only skin-deep. Well written tundrol!
March 6th, 2020 11:49
FredPeyer said:
As they say, beauty is only skin-deep. Well written tundrol!
March 6th, 2020 11:49
To the woman in the moon - a sonnet
Ameluz Ziur said:
Such beautiful words
Felt every word , it atacked me with memories of the one i loved and lost.
March 6th, 2020 00:17
Ameluz Ziur said:
Such beautiful words
Felt every word , it atacked me with memories of the one i loved and lost.
March 6th, 2020 00:17
Rose
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN AQUI ~ Thanks for sharing Tundrol ~ Thanks for your elegant Quatrain ! Even Debt Collectors can be SEXY ~ C*est la Vie !
Merci ~ T\'Ami de MPS ~ BRIAN 🧡🤍💙
March 4th, 2020 15:07
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN AQUI ~ Thanks for sharing Tundrol ~ Thanks for your elegant Quatrain ! Even Debt Collectors can be SEXY ~ C*est la Vie !
Merci ~ T\'Ami de MPS ~ BRIAN 🧡🤍💙
March 4th, 2020 15:07
Sph*nx
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Loved this ..its simple ..its Egyptian..its fresh ..it made my day...xxoo
March 2nd, 2020 11:46
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Loved this ..its simple ..its Egyptian..its fresh ..it made my day...xxoo
March 2nd, 2020 11:46
Sph*nx
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN ICI ~ BON APRESMIDI MON AMI ~ Welcome to MPS it is a very proactive site. Love your LIMERICK very droll ! I have copied it and put it in my Wallet for future use ! In London UK there are DEMONS everywhere ! More Poems please. We*ve saved this one as a FAVE ! Please check our site ~ MERCI !
Peace & Joy ~ ANGELA & BRIAN !
March 2nd, 2020 10:20
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN ICI ~ BON APRESMIDI MON AMI ~ Welcome to MPS it is a very proactive site. Love your LIMERICK very droll ! I have copied it and put it in my Wallet for future use ! In London UK there are DEMONS everywhere ! More Poems please. We*ve saved this one as a FAVE ! Please check our site ~ MERCI !
Peace & Joy ~ ANGELA & BRIAN !
March 2nd, 2020 10:20
