Comments received on poems by dominick beltran
Voices
anonymousblue said:
Self-explanatory indeed, and very colorful in its enticing darkness. Strong poem.
March 19th, 2020 11:26
anonymousblue said:
Self-explanatory indeed, and very colorful in its enticing darkness. Strong poem.
March 19th, 2020 11:26
If You Knew
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
Wow! A lot of emotions! I really could feel your words as I read on! Great piece!
March 14th, 2020 17:37
Confia.En.Tu.Corazon 87 said:
Wow! A lot of emotions! I really could feel your words as I read on! Great piece!
March 14th, 2020 17:37
If You Knew
Saxon Crow said:
Mate even you dont know all there is in you. Its the eternal adventure of discovery. Shadows and sunshine mate
March 14th, 2020 02:56
Saxon Crow said:
Mate even you dont know all there is in you. Its the eternal adventure of discovery. Shadows and sunshine mate
March 14th, 2020 02:56
If You Knew
Goldfinch60 said:
Nobody really knows us, there are always untold feelings within our bodies and minds.
Andy
March 14th, 2020 02:04
Goldfinch60 said:
Nobody really knows us, there are always untold feelings within our bodies and minds.
Andy
March 14th, 2020 02:04
Shadows Within
dusk arising said:
It does not matter what anyone else says, thinks or does about your past because the thoughts and feelings are yours alone. I t is only you who can bring peace to yourself and in time you will.
Deep inside you there is the real god. Not the god of some ancient book or people who shout from pulpits but the god of love and creation. You will find that this god is willing to love you and all around you. You have already grown and this is self evident from your writing. So you are a bigger, stronger thing than you were. Let the world see that and you will find you can relax into being that.
March 12th, 2020 16:11
dusk arising said:
It does not matter what anyone else says, thinks or does about your past because the thoughts and feelings are yours alone. I t is only you who can bring peace to yourself and in time you will.
Deep inside you there is the real god. Not the god of some ancient book or people who shout from pulpits but the god of love and creation. You will find that this god is willing to love you and all around you. You have already grown and this is self evident from your writing. So you are a bigger, stronger thing than you were. Let the world see that and you will find you can relax into being that.
March 12th, 2020 16:11
Shadows Within
anonymousblue said:
The hellish setting reminded me of Lovecraft and Poe\'s darkest reveries. I agree wth your message, though it is easier said than done.
March 12th, 2020 14:10
anonymousblue said:
The hellish setting reminded me of Lovecraft and Poe\'s darkest reveries. I agree wth your message, though it is easier said than done.
March 12th, 2020 14:10
