Comments received on poems by jakesevern
“new exhibit, broken heart on display”
FredPeyer said:
Well said, I like \'breakage implies fixability\', but I guess if there are too many pieces even crazy glue won\'t help!
April 8th, 2020 13:51
FredPeyer said:
Well said, I like \'breakage implies fixability\', but I guess if there are too many pieces even crazy glue won\'t help!
April 8th, 2020 13:51
“new exhibit, broken heart on display”
dusk arising said:
It will never be the same, but it will be mended by you and time. Many hearts are broken many times (i know from bitter experience) and with time your heart will reside within a defense of self love where any suitor will have to prove their worth to get close to it.
\"What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger\".
Enjoyed the flow of your piece today and the way you present questions within it.
April 7th, 2020 11:15
dusk arising said:
It will never be the same, but it will be mended by you and time. Many hearts are broken many times (i know from bitter experience) and with time your heart will reside within a defense of self love where any suitor will have to prove their worth to get close to it.
\"What doesn\'t kill you makes you stronger\".
Enjoyed the flow of your piece today and the way you present questions within it.
April 7th, 2020 11:15
I got a Doctorate in Hope
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is within us all all we need to do is project it to others in this world.
Andy
April 3rd, 2020 01:01
Goldfinch60 said:
That light is within us all all we need to do is project it to others in this world.
Andy
April 3rd, 2020 01:01
Denver
orchidee said:
Oohh, I get dizzy going up a ladder, let alone...…. But as a child I lived with parents on 14th floor of a block of flats - top floor.
April 2nd, 2020 11:39
orchidee said:
Oohh, I get dizzy going up a ladder, let alone...…. But as a child I lived with parents on 14th floor of a block of flats - top floor.
April 2nd, 2020 11:39
Denver
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Jake for the introduction to Denver I am sure that in spite of the \'snow and ice\' the people who live there make it a wonderful place.
Welcome to MPS.
April 2nd, 2020 00:06
Goldfinch60 said:
Thank you Jake for the introduction to Denver I am sure that in spite of the \'snow and ice\' the people who live there make it a wonderful place.
Welcome to MPS.
April 2nd, 2020 00:06
Denver
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (Angela is my Wife !) Good Afternoon JAKE welcome to MPS ~ it is a proactive site which works by Reading & Commenting on each others Poems. Thanks for your first Poem ~ excellent in Rhyme & Rhythm. Denver is a fine City and its only when you read the writing on the CAPITOL BUILDING STEPS that you realise you are indeed *A Mile High !* (5286 ft) The highest we can get in the UK is 4,200 ft in Ben Nevis in Scotland. I also love Colorado ~ A great STATE to be in ! Love ASPEN in the Fall ~ AWESOME ! Thanks for sharing ~ More Poems Please. Please check our site ~ Thnaks.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
April 1st, 2020 15:27
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE (Angela is my Wife !) Good Afternoon JAKE welcome to MPS ~ it is a proactive site which works by Reading & Commenting on each others Poems. Thanks for your first Poem ~ excellent in Rhyme & Rhythm. Denver is a fine City and its only when you read the writing on the CAPITOL BUILDING STEPS that you realise you are indeed *A Mile High !* (5286 ft) The highest we can get in the UK is 4,200 ft in Ben Nevis in Scotland. I also love Colorado ~ A great STATE to be in ! Love ASPEN in the Fall ~ AWESOME ! Thanks for sharing ~ More Poems Please. Please check our site ~ Thnaks.
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Yours BRIAN & ANGELA 🧡🤍💙
April 1st, 2020 15:27
