Comments received on poems by PanAngel16

I\'m Trapped
Crowns4Christ said:

this is very well written damian,i can feel the emotion behind this piece.hang in there things will get better

September 5th, 2020 15:44

I\'m Still Human
dusk arising said:

We are all failures. But just like you said in your poem today we put on our mask. Some times are easier on my mask that other times. Writing poetry isn\'t easy on my mask, it becomes transparent and the thing which i am is able to pour out onto the page or screen.

Writing poetry has done me and a lot of other people a lot of good in coming to terms with myself. Keep writing. I\'m writing my failure out of my systema nd i know it\'s working.... again i say, keep writing.

August 24th, 2020 15:50

Poem About Me
A passing lyric said:

I am in your boat
I am the happy and bubbly girl that hides a lot like you do.
You are not alone
We are not alone.
Our boat will dock one day onto a sunny island.
Great poem 😊

August 12th, 2020 01:24

Poem About Me
Goldfinch60 said:

Very strong emotive write Panangel. You are strong within yourself as your words show, that strength will pull you out of your sadness and fear and take you into a wonderful life if you can find somebody to listen to you, there are such people out their, they are called good friends.


August 11th, 2020 00:13

You Said You Loved Me
myself and me said:

Congratulations, you are out of it. Well penned. Welcome to MPS.

May 19th, 2020 16:30

You Said You Loved Me
Goldfinch60 said:

In life there are occasions when the wrong decision is made but in your life you have come to a conclusion that your love was not right and you can move on, this is something that cannot be taught, it is experience and experience cannot be taught but it will, and has, moved you into a better stage in your life. Move forward, there is plenty of wonder out there for you to experience.

Welcome to MPS.

May 19th, 2020 00:20

You Said You Loved Me
Neville said:

Such is life, such is love, it is a good thing lessons were learnt from this experience....


May 18th, 2020 13:30