Comments received on poems by Lutalican



Closure
Unsub said:

This reads like you are talking to yourself in the mirror reflecting on life\'s downfall.

Whether that\'s right or not this one is filled with emotion, mostly regret.

Smile & start again a fresh.

Unsub.

August 13th, 2020 05:41

The Descendence
dusk arising said:

Great piece, reminiscent of those famous fairy stories of old..... or I\'m a mad hatter.

July 30th, 2020 00:13

The Descendence
Goldfinch60 said:

Some dreams are like that, but then come the good ones.

Andy

July 29th, 2020 23:57

For You
Goldfinch60 said:

Your words show so much love for her and I am sure she feels the same about you.

Andy

July 28th, 2020 00:10

For You
benevolentbluebabe said:

Sometimes a little love poem is all it takes

July 27th, 2020 10:35

For You
dusk arising said:

A simple poem of love. Keep the words flowing under her eyes.

July 27th, 2020 05:23

Last Self Discovery
Goldfinch60 said:

Looking back can show us how we thought we would be and then how we became. Good write.

July 24th, 2020 00:00

Last Self Discovery
dusk arising said:

Grrr \"and you are me\" is only 4 words LOL

Really good introspective piece. Reminds us to separate from the hustle and bustle and actually communicate with the real thing we are. I don\'t think many of us ever do this.
Is it \'mindfulness\' to do this?... questionable.

Very enjoyable read

(for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees ...M Ehrmann misquoted)

July 23rd, 2020 05:01

Awake
dusk arising said:

Those tortures can be hell and insomnia will rule.
A good book, or even a bad one, is a remedy until your eyes are too tired to continue.

July 22nd, 2020 01:12

I See Ghosts
MelissaJA said:

Well written and catchy, I love this

July 18th, 2020 18:57

I See Ghosts
dusk arising said:

Well structured and enjoyable reading.

July 18th, 2020 14:41

I See Ghosts
benevolentbluebabe said:

This is excellent; powerful, emotive, resonating...

July 18th, 2020 13:07

I See Ghosts
GON said:

Wow, I think this is one of my favorites. Love how catchy it is, great rhythm. Great rhetoric.

July 18th, 2020 09:42

I See Ghosts
peto said:

Easy to read
Enjoyed
Possibly a hint of addiction in it

July 18th, 2020 07:30

Society
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

Good Evening FRIEND ~ BRIAN here ~ Welcome to MPS ~ It is a proactive site which operates by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK Thanks for your first Poem. A wonderful comment on how SOCIETY has all become ZOMBIES bowed down by Bureaucracy & cowed by COVID 19 ! Your last verse send a rescue call to all Teachers - Speakers - Dreamers - World Changers & Truth Seekers to work together and take action and follow our LIFES PASSION ~ AMEN ! Thnaks for caring & sharing ~ nore poems PLEASE. Please visit our site THANKS A & B !

Peace & Joy & Love
Yours Brian & Angela !

July 14th, 2020 15:29