Comments received on poems by Lutalican
The Descendence
dusk arising said:
Great piece, reminiscent of those famous fairy stories of old..... or I\'m a mad hatter.
July 30th, 2020 00:13
dusk arising said:
Great piece, reminiscent of those famous fairy stories of old..... or I\'m a mad hatter.
July 30th, 2020 00:13
The Descendence
Goldfinch60 said:
Some dreams are like that, but then come the good ones.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 23:57
Goldfinch60 said:
Some dreams are like that, but then come the good ones.
Andy
July 29th, 2020 23:57
For You
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show so much love for her and I am sure she feels the same about you.
Andy
July 28th, 2020 00:10
Goldfinch60 said:
Your words show so much love for her and I am sure she feels the same about you.
Andy
July 28th, 2020 00:10
For You
dusk arising said:
A simple poem of love. Keep the words flowing under her eyes.
July 27th, 2020 05:23
dusk arising said:
A simple poem of love. Keep the words flowing under her eyes.
July 27th, 2020 05:23
Last Self Discovery
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking back can show us how we thought we would be and then how we became. Good write.
July 24th, 2020 00:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Looking back can show us how we thought we would be and then how we became. Good write.
July 24th, 2020 00:00
Last Self Discovery
dusk arising said:
Grrr \"and you are me\" is only 4 words LOL
Really good introspective piece. Reminds us to separate from the hustle and bustle and actually communicate with the real thing we are. I don\'t think many of us ever do this.
Is it \'mindfulness\' to do this?... questionable.
Very enjoyable read
(for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees ...M Ehrmann misquoted)
July 23rd, 2020 05:01
dusk arising said:
Grrr \"and you are me\" is only 4 words LOL
Really good introspective piece. Reminds us to separate from the hustle and bustle and actually communicate with the real thing we are. I don\'t think many of us ever do this.
Is it \'mindfulness\' to do this?... questionable.
Very enjoyable read
(for you are a child of the universe with as much right to be here as the stars and the trees ...M Ehrmann misquoted)
July 23rd, 2020 05:01
Awake
dusk arising said:
Those tortures can be hell and insomnia will rule.
A good book, or even a bad one, is a remedy until your eyes are too tired to continue.
July 22nd, 2020 01:12
dusk arising said:
Those tortures can be hell and insomnia will rule.
A good book, or even a bad one, is a remedy until your eyes are too tired to continue.
July 22nd, 2020 01:12
I See Ghosts
benevolentbluebabe said:
This is excellent; powerful, emotive, resonating...
July 18th, 2020 13:07
benevolentbluebabe said:
This is excellent; powerful, emotive, resonating...
July 18th, 2020 13:07
I See Ghosts
GON said:
Wow, I think this is one of my favorites. Love how catchy it is, great rhythm. Great rhetoric.
July 18th, 2020 09:42
GON said:
Wow, I think this is one of my favorites. Love how catchy it is, great rhythm. Great rhetoric.
July 18th, 2020 09:42
I See Ghosts
peto said:
Easy to read
Enjoyed
Possibly a hint of addiction in it
July 18th, 2020 07:30
peto said:
Easy to read
Enjoyed
Possibly a hint of addiction in it
July 18th, 2020 07:30
Society
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FRIEND ~ BRIAN here ~ Welcome to MPS ~ It is a proactive site which operates by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK Thanks for your first Poem. A wonderful comment on how SOCIETY has all become ZOMBIES bowed down by Bureaucracy & cowed by COVID 19 ! Your last verse send a rescue call to all Teachers - Speakers - Dreamers - World Changers & Truth Seekers to work together and take action and follow our LIFES PASSION ~ AMEN ! Thnaks for caring & sharing ~ nore poems PLEASE. Please visit our site THANKS A & B !
Peace & Joy & Love
Yours Brian & Angela !
July 14th, 2020 15:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
Good Evening FRIEND ~ BRIAN here ~ Welcome to MPS ~ It is a proactive site which operates by reading & commenting on each others Poems ~ OK Thanks for your first Poem. A wonderful comment on how SOCIETY has all become ZOMBIES bowed down by Bureaucracy & cowed by COVID 19 ! Your last verse send a rescue call to all Teachers - Speakers - Dreamers - World Changers & Truth Seekers to work together and take action and follow our LIFES PASSION ~ AMEN ! Thnaks for caring & sharing ~ nore poems PLEASE. Please visit our site THANKS A & B !
Peace & Joy & Love
Yours Brian & Angela !
July 14th, 2020 15:29
